This Star Just Wants to Win

Alas, the entertainment articles in the parallel space are not interesting. This wave of wind has already blown, and there is no sense of substitution. Withdrawn

Finally, I have 500 collections, hehehehehe. Take your time and play! It is expected to be released on Friday, and it will be a long-term struggle.

The old age of Kung Fu stars and even superstars is not very good. As the saying goes - there is no way to keep your shoes wet when you often walk by the river. When I was young, I relied on my good health to fight hard, but my health collapsed in my old age.

The situation is too small. You should first participate in the World Boxing Championship and rely on your unreasonable leg skills to crush you all the way until you win the gold belt! Then use your "foreign prestige" to return to China and develop Kung Fu stars, so that both domestic and foreign countries will respect you for your ability, and the salary will be higher than those who have just joined the industry. . .

After reading ten chapters, I can't say it was interesting. I felt that the writing was flat, uneventful, and boring. And the dialogue is too long. If the dialogue is too long, it can be divided into several paragraphs. One long dialogue takes up two-thirds of the screen.

I've ordered more than a dozen chapters to read, but I still feel unexcited. The plot has no major problems, and the writing and logic are smooth. I feel that two aspects need to be adjusted: one is that large paragraphs of explanations and explanations, including "reasoning" in dialogues, need to be compressed and removed. Another is to always arrange some small baggage, at least two in a chapter, so that readers can say a few words after reading it. Even if they criticize you, it will still be a hot topic. It takes someone reading your idea to have an impact.

Are there many female protagonists? Let's talk about it soon