One Piece: Deceiver Luffy to Join the Army, Change the Plot and Become Stronger

After eating the thunder fruit, you can take the route of the magnetic field maniac. After all, the gun sister is really weak compared to the magnetic field maniac.

I haven't read it yet, but in your profile, Kizaru is too stupid. It's understandable that he's called Master Luffy, but why the hell is he called Master Dragon? Master's mission?

The main character's ambition is to become the Pirate King, but it would be better for you to just kill him. It's like if you were planning to write about the late Eastern Han Dynasty and the book was called "Three Kingdoms", but in the end, Cao, Liu, and Sun were killed at the beginning.

Why do all thunders have magnetism? Then what is the use of other people's magnetism fruits? And electricity really has a big impact on magnetism. Doesn't it require any conditions?

At the beginning, the Wanpi Private Key was replaced. The key is to replace it with Thunder. The most important thing is that the red hair should know that this fruit is the key to unlock Wanpi Private. Speechless. Wanpi Private Key is obviously like Dragon Ball or even better. The history is just that I don't want others to know. Speechless at the end.

Is the dark fruit a natural fruit?

How should I put it, fandom is already a niche, and we need to filter out a group of people within the niche who want to see Luffy become a marine. Unless your writing is very good and your characterization is very detailed. Otherwise, you will gradually lose confidence after it is put on the shelves. There is a reason why this theme is not popular. One Piece emphasizes dreams throughout the story. Subject matter like yours is subjectively unpleasant. There is also the issue of the novel's purpose. If you simply enjoy it, it's really awkward. If your purpose is to fight fatalism, it's still interesting.