
Pirate: I, Akainu, Have a Groudon Inside Me
海贼:我,赤犬,体内一只固拉多
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 54k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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25Chapters
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As we all know, Groudon, the God of Earth, cannot fly and is afraid of earthquakes.
This is the first time I have seen such a dark Sengoku book. I thought I would read Naruto again? Right Hiruzen?
It's been two days, we've been having dinner together for two days, is the author a prisoner?
I don't really agree that there is no number 18
Come on, few people write about Akainu.
These are all my favorite elements, and I'm looking forward to it 😃
I feel that writing about the navy, especially Akainu, who is often called a red dog, is generally quite controversial. This aspect needs to be handled carefully, and the character of the protagonist also needs to be strengthened. After all, you have to write about the original Akainu, like, ah, he is a pirate, kill, kill, kill. If there are friendly forces in the range of fire, kill them together. Anyway, it is their fault for being weak, blah blah, It's easy to be criticized, In addition, after all, the original work is incompetent and furious when he becomes a marshal, and the five old stars and other subordinates have no morals. To be honest, the emotional intelligence is too low, In other words, the way of being a subordinate and the way of dealing with the world is really not good. What's more important is the main character of the original work. The attitude has changed, Be gentler about which characters, it is easy to be thought that you are confused with the pirates, and your stance is wrong, As for the killer, if you drop a character, the fans of that character will rebound. If you write some characters who die, and the performance is XX, it will directly arouse the anger of the crowd... Fortunately, in this timeline, the protagonist group Ah, the characters that appear in the main plot are basically absent. Rocks, Roger, Garp, Sengoku, etc., You all have the right to interpret, but you still need to handle it a little better, just like the author of a certain Sengoku Son wrote an aloof Red and a bereaved dog, which really destroyed the readers' imagination of the era of pirates where talents were abundant.
Groudon
Have you been eating together for a month, drinking alcohol and taking cephalosporins?
How to catch up if there are too few updates😰
Come on, author, keep writing, I feel the direction of your writing is very good (pirates are evil scum, and that Kirby, Hachi must be written to death. )
Please read it! Also, it's my first time writing this. Can you tell me if there are any poisonous points? I'll avoid them later.
I heard that accounts that have been recharged within three months will be considered a valid follow-up if they see the last page of the latest chapter Brothers, I want to recommend, please everyone
Looking at the introduction, they say pirates are scum. Just want to laugh. How were pirates caused? Or was it caused by the oppression of nobles and Celestial Dragons? Why don't you solve them? It's not just bullying the weak and fearing the strong.