Qiu Qianren of the Iron Palm Sect, Starting with The Legend of the Condor Heroes

Regarding Qiu Qianren's strength, Qiu Qianren can be said to be at the threshold level of the Five Jue. As long as you can tie with him or even be stronger than him, you must start as a Wujue level figure. According to the performance in the book, Qiu Qianren's strength at any time is only slightly worse than the Wujue. Even the Five Jue who practiced the Nine Yin Manual in the later period are not much stronger than Qiu Qianren. More, but just a little stronger. During the first Huashan Sword Discussion, I estimate that Qiu Qianren was not weaker than the other four people at that time except for Zhongshentong Wang Chongyang. It was just that Wu Jue had the same level of communication through the Huashan Sword Discussion. He made greater progress than Qiu Qianren himself behind closed doors. Since then, the gap has widened. Although he is not much better than Qiu Qianren, he is indeed a little stronger than Qiu Qianren.

The writing is great. Don't write about strategies next time. You can't write anything you don't have. Even though he was invincible in the world, he was fascinated by a rubbish secret book. I just went into seclusion after issuing the gauntlet. His house was almost destroyed when his house was robbed. Logical thinking is really confusing.

No matter which author travels to become a villain, he must explain to the original person how miserable he is, but what is there to do with a traitor who joins a foreign race?

I really like the writing style and martial arts setting of the author's book. I like it very much. It suits my taste. I don't like those books. I have to learn all the martial arts. I have to invent my own martial arts in a few days before I have the courage to do it. Please keep up the good work, author, and keep updating.

The biggest problem the author has right now is confusion. The first is the confusion in the character setting. The author explains this confusion through a long chapter of confession. He wants to tell a process of self-exploration and self-clarification. The idea is good, but it is not enough because it is too simple. Understanding one's true nature is either a result of hard work in the world of mortals, a one-time enlightenment with astonishing talent, or both. However, he did not rely on three sources and directly analyzed a large section of his confession in front of his master. It was too lazy in terms of writing and lacked explanation power. Of course, as a web article, this is not very important. At present, the most "poisonous" thing for readers is the setting of this martial arts fanatic - no martial arts fanatic can refuse "Nine Yang Magic", it can also be used as a reference and supplement for one's own martial arts! And you can't put a patch on it, saying that you also refer to Jiuyang, so the rationality and necessity of giving books to Huo Foreman Tuo to cultivate opponents is gone (although this rationality is not very high, we will discuss it later). If you choose a chaotic and evil person to accept your gift, it will be wrong first and then unreasonable. This character line is basically useless. Besides, the idea of ​​cultivating an opponent to achieve a breakthrough in life and death would be reasonable if it happened before he imitated Yang Guo and practiced martial arts at the seaside. But a person who has seen the power of heaven and earth, the impermanence of nature, and understood martial arts from it, does he really need to train opponents to experience himself? If all my plants, trees, bamboos and rocks can be used as swords, what meaning does a light sword or a heavy sword mean to me? Since I can search upward, there is no need to search downward. The second is the confusion in plot advancement. As online novels, Shuang and Zheng are about to take one. Defeating Huang Yaoshi with one palm at the beginning is a cool start, but the progress of the plot is not exciting enough, and even a bit suffocating; besides, Zheng has no interest in fighting against "Da Zheng" like Jin, and does not do anything to "Xiao Zheng" who treats the Shitou family coldly. Although he gave an explanation that he could save him for a while, but not the whole life, this behavior offended "Shuang". I am almost the best in the world. I have so many gang members, but I can't save a single person? Happiness and justice cannot be mutually exclusive. In addition, book introduction, don't ask why 😭 seriously injured an innocent baby and caused its death + colluded with the Jin people to rob Wu Mu's suicide note and become a traitor, why do you think 😵😵😵

Why did the author make the protagonist so neurotic?

I don't even know what this protagonist wants to do, there's not even a theme.

Why do you keep going crazy? The higher the kung fu, the more insane?

You have the Nine Yang Manual but don't practice it, and you still say it doesn't fit. The completion of the Nine Suns Manual is the world's martial arts. The Nine Yang Manual can be said to be very comprehensive and a great success.

How to say it? It feels like there is something wrong with your settings, and Wu Chi is not the way to go!