Necromancer, but in the Interstellar Age

I think the undead route requires a pastoral planet to graze and breed intelligent life, such as the Jews. Build a planet-sized Jewish paradise. Harvest a wave of soul flesh every year.

Turns out to be a necromancer? Still in the intergalactic era, good guys Necrons, the Silent King fucking woke up.

Why is the undead such an inconvenient thing? Why can't a mechanical corpse be considered a corpse? If you use the undead to resurrect the computer to make the machine move again, read the reading records of the deceased, and the metal exoskeleton, can't it also be regarded as a skeleton? What's the difference between a space battleship and an undead ship? Living people are hard to find. The material of calcium flakes is similar to bones. The bones and flesh of livestock are cheap. So there's nothing wrong with using cannons and firearms to launch curses.

I have only read two chapters. Judging from the introduction and comments, the author's ideas can be roughly summarized. The creativity is very good, but few people have read this book. Why? I think it's the problem with the Golden Three Chapters—the author's first three chapters fell into a cliché. In fact, why most people click here is because of the name and introduction, and what did the author talk about in the first three chapters? The first chapter travels to the interstellar era, the second chapter kills insects, and the third chapter is saved by a dying cat lady. This cannot be said to be a dissatisfaction, and in fact it cannot be considered a poisonous point, but readers cannot see what they want to see in the first three chapters, so naturally they will not read further. Why are they said to be the golden three? These are the most important and attractive three chapters. If they are not written well, no one will watch them (I only read three chapters and then stopped. If you have any questions, you can refute)

Looking at the introduction, I feel that the necromancer is the best in the biological and mechanical technology stream 🤫 uses genetic technology to make living things and transform them into undead or skeletons, uses undead to combine with artificial intelligence, and uses skeletons to combine with steel.

You can refer to Interstellar Empire of the Undead written by Cangtian Baihe. The setting is somewhat similar. You can play with the soul. You should be inspired after reading it.

The idea is good, but the writing is a bit off. The character's status and behavior patterns feel very separate from the scene you wrote. Escape doesn't feel like escaping, and fighting doesn't feel like fighting.

There's no logic at all, you can't read it with your brain

Didn't you receive the text message? Why haven't you changed the status yet?

Please read it

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I hope Lao Gao's works will get better and better! Go, go, go!

Gao Gao, should I code now or save my manuscript every day?

The main character is too old and is not a time traveler yet, and the sense of immersion is not strong. Don't listen to what others say about being a time traveler and not watch it. It's a rip-off, and it's an old man's fault. There are many young people who read books, so they still need to have a sense of involvement. An old author can only write like this if he has a fan base, or his writing is a hit, or he has something special about it. A half-dead fantasy combined with orthodox interstellar science fiction. The BF is too poor. The fantasy background is not DND-like, and the science fiction is not Warhammer Stars or the like. The popularity has increased, so I have to guarantee it first before I can continue writing. Otherwise, the setting is strange and requires a lot of sewing. There are too many eunuchs now, and no one wants to have eunuchs who can make money.

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Chapter 63 and the ending describe the reason for the protagonist's time travel. The protagonist's time travel is also a foreshadowing. The story adopts a dual narrative. The necromancer will recall the past when he dreams. Chapter 8 and the chapter with an exclamation mark talk about what kind of group the necromancers are.

I'm sorry for the rude words and unprovoked troubles before, but... Forget it.