Let You Quit the Entertainment Industry and Serve as a Soldier to Release Records

It's an urban book with military writings, which is awkward to read. There's no need to cry all the time after singing a song. The military writings are half gone after reading them. There is no need to overly bother the two big boys. The main character's routine of pretending to be two fools depends on the situation. The main character in a military novel can change his words and expressions, but the playful and smiling style in daily life is not right. The angle of military songs and red songs is very good, don't write them crookedly, otherwise not only will you not be able to attract fans from both the military and urban areas, but it will also be easy to get 404

When you write a book, anyone who has been a soldier will not be able to read past five chapters. Do you want to join the army whenever you want? And Chapter 4, folding the quilt into tofu pieces on the first day of joining the army? As for the quilt of the new recruits, you can't even call the king of soldiers to come over. It's not because of lack of skills. There is a saying that a clever woman can't make a meal without rice. A quilt that has not been compacted cannot be folded at all, and if it is folded barely, it will look like a piece of bread.

Looking at the introduction, the protagonist has done so many things and was still just a squad leader when he picked up new recruits to join the army?

Why do we need a system? It feels very redundant! The author wants to take the entertainment route. I can play it in the military camp with a solid foundation. Do I have to create a system for the song? Can't time travel?

I've read more than a dozen chapters. The subject matter is good, but the writing is really bad.

After reading Chapter 10, I was poisoned and said goodbye.

I didn't even have the courage to click on it after looking at the introduction. Those few songs set off the entire Internet, and those few movies made a sensation all over the world. . Where is the sensation. .

What do you see?

It's okay if Chapter 9 and Chapter 8 overlap, but Chapter 10 still doesn't match up. You can't even copy and paste it? And when did the third-class merit appear in Chapter 8?

Can a special team member still be a star?

These latest pictures have successfully persuaded people to quit. Goodbye

It's embarrassing. The key is to get two flies. The author wouldn't think that these two people arranged it well.

Where is the author? Can he update it?

For people who have never served in the military, it is generally difficult to write well in online articles if you write about such a military unit. If you have not experienced it, you cannot write about your inner feelings. There are many loopholes in it, including food, clothing, housing, transportation, training, and what is the inner feelings between comrades in arms? It's too difficult to write. Among the writers who wrote these online articles, only Rifu has a good grasp of some things about being a soldier, which can really happen in the army. Although some of the content is a bit exaggerated, it can be seen that he must have been a soldier, or there are a lot of soldiers who showed him the loopholes.

The author's novels must also be realistic. Rebirth cannot fix the system. What did the system tell you when you were born?