Wudang Taoist Boy

It's well written, but I still want to persuade the author to reconsider the first chapter. I was almost put off by the confusing personal pronouns in the first chapter. There is such a way to write the opening chapter, and it's not bad. But it is not suitable for online novels. In the general environment, online novels have become fast food literature, so the audience is generally the kind that can browse quickly. For such an audience, mixing one and three persons not only fails to provide a variety of perspectives, but also makes people read incomprehensibly. Of course, I am just suggesting, and the author may or may not listen. I'll leave the rest of you guys alone. I'm just telling you what I thought after reading it. If you feel uncomfortable, just hold it in and choose not to listen.

Since we traveled back in time before Yu Sanxia of the Wudang Clan was injured, why not try to change?

Can you write more? There are two updates a day, and there are thousands of updates next door🤷‍♂️

What's going on? I can't sleep at night. Can you add more 😭

Now that everyone has changed their fate against the will of heaven, I personally feel that it is better to get some more secret skills from outside Wudang and send them to Zhang Zhenren, so that the old man can understand them and teach them to others. It is best to upgrade Lao Zhang's martial arts to a higher level, surpassing the ultimate realm, and sweeping the floor. Like a monk, attack and defense are integrated, the inner strength is a wall, and it is invincible to all poisons. It can shock the tough phase to death. The Seven Heroes of Wudang, the protagonist, Zhang Wuji and others can all become top masters. In addition, don't overly plagiarize The Legend of Heaven and Dragon Slaying. You don't want to watch it again.

It's very ordinary, the main character is so unmotivated, and there's an atmosphere of everyone being good friends.

1. The writing is jerky at the beginning, but becomes very smooth later on. 2. I have read the latest chapter, and it seems that this chapter has very little to say. It is probably because there was too much self-pleasure in the early part of the novel that discouraged many people. Book friends who want to fall into the pit must endure the 100,000-word pit ahead. It is indeed too much for self-pleasure. There is no more behind. 3. I don't know what the author thinks. In the early stages of the novel, the protagonist always thinks and speaks from the author's perspective, which is very dramatic. 4. The performance of the work is very poor. If I can write so many words, I guess the author just writes for fun. The mentality of writing for fun is not very popular. This book contains a large number of authors' interpretations of Jin Yong's works and relatively mature analyzes on the Internet. This part looks quite exciting. 5. The plot is very good, and the changed and added characters are also very good, but the overall excitement is relatively small. 6. The moves are a bit immature, have no visual sense, and are not attractive enough. The part where the protagonist uses the shadowless feet in the early stage is very well described, but later on it becomes more and more dull and has no characteristics. Without characteristics, there is nothing exciting. It is better to just mention it in one stroke. 7. There should be a lot of adventures, but every adventure is not that exciting. 8. The logical thinking is very good, and many memes are used to complement each other. It is also a good source of food. Recommended!

If Ah San is not dead yet, I suggest Yu Daiyan personally crush all his bones and add a tiger claw to his waist.

It's very beautiful, why is it a eunuch?

Not bad, polished and polished, it can be regarded as a normal book

Minghai Guiyuanjue, a martial art of Jinguang Puppetry, does not require the Dantian. Its purpose is to synchronize with the heaven and earth, directly call upon the power of heaven and earth, move instantly, and turn into light. Another function is that the unused Dantian can also store the foundation of other people's martial arts. There is only one chance, but its storage capacity is just like his name. The person who knew this martial art directly found a master whose foundation was based on thousands of years of wish power, and stored and used his internal power.

It's so well written, I've ordered it all, so good luck to the author. This book is the first one I have read that deeply transforms the world of Yitian Slaying Dragon. Although there are some places where the protagonist has a halo, it is still very interesting in general.