I'm a Nascent Soul Cultivator Livestreaming My Lazy Life on Earth

The subject matter is acceptable, but the writing style needs to be improved. The characterization and dialogue are generally not age-appropriate. They are all hundreds of years old. The dialogue seems to be in their early 20s. People become mature and mature with age. This characteristic of Chengfu is not found in any person in the book. It may have something to do with the author's experience. If these can be improved, some small flaws will not hide the flaws. What is the most attractive thing about a book? Subject matter (The novelty and old-fashionedness of the subject matter are related to the desire to click on this book) Writing style (Increase your vocabulary, otherwise you will not know how many words there are, and the whole article will become a running account. Example 1: Zhang San raised his sword and charged at the Sword God, but the Sword God dodged past, and hit Zhang San with a backhand sword! Example 2: Zhang San San's eyes were fixed on the Sword God, as if he was trying to find a flaw, but in the end he couldn't hold it back, so he struck first, mustering up his momentum to attack the Sword God with his sword. The Sword God didn't panic, but Zhang San missed the target even though he took the first shot. Opportunity, this sword is not threatening, he pulls away like a leisurely stroll, and then strikes Zhang San with a sharp backhand sword as if he has divine help. He is going to strike first and come first. Look, he has a lot of vocabulary! I can't find you stupid.) Character writing (It's difficult to grasp group portraits, but the characterization and daily dialogue cannot be like that of an elderly person and a child. A person who is hundreds of years old is still a cultivator, and his mood has been overcome. How can he always show his emotions on his face? Of course I don't mean to have a zombie face, but he can't always look excited, Gao Xingdao, happy way. It is better to write with a smile on the face, a smile on the brow, a smile on the corner of the mouth, a sad face, and a sad face.) Plot (New authors recommend less touch on the main plot, branch plots, daily life, and emotional lines, as it is easy to become toxic, unless the character portrayal is very successful) In fact, that's about it. Generally speaking, I hope the author will work hard!

I don't know why, but I don't want to watch it when I see the protagonist reaching a very high level after practicing for decades or hundreds of years

It slipped away, really. Don't know what to say

I really don't understand what you are worried about and afraid of if you are not in the same world. How can I come to arrest you even if you know you are a cultivator? Isn't it okay that hundreds of years of cultivation have gone to dogs? In order to please the audience, you attack your fellow disciples.

There are a lot of wrong sentences and typos. The subject matter is good, but it's a pity that it went off topic soon. The various small plots that are intended to impress the readers are also poorly written.

The live broadcast content basically revolves around showing off and slapping people in the face, and then a group of barrage comments such as "big boss is cheating", "I don't believe it" and "what's dripping from upstairs" are not interesting.

The introduction is quite interesting. Let me be this divine farmer.

I can only comment like this. The industrial assembly line praises this novel. It is simply a waste product of the industrial assembly line.

The biggest flaw of this book is that it is indeed fun to use the system to help others upgrade, but at the same time, the biggest disadvantage is that you upgrade others without upgrading yourself or being the mastermind behind it. You just help others upgrade. No wonder the grades are so poor. Even if you want to describe a group portrait, you still need to upgrade the protagonist. Doing nothing, just like licking a dog, just keep licking others.

I think it would be nice not to have the alien enemy invade at the beginning. Once you see it, you won't have much interest in reading anymore. If it's bad, it'll be bad. What's the point of putting pressure on the protagonist? Isn't this a funny and light-hearted story?