The Reborn of the Cyber World

The online battle that year was a fantasy fairy tale versus a virtual online game, with the final score being 18-3. At that time, I saw the great writers of online games slumped in their chairs, crying and transforming one after another. I will never forget this scene. At that moment I was thinking, if I could become a professional writer, I would win everything. Now that the Renaissance was just around the corner, I had to consider whether this would be my only chance in this lifetime. I believe that the great writers of ancient online games have contributed a lot to the dominance that virtual online games had in the past. It is our duty to rebuild the glory of virtual online games!​

This kind of writing is pretty good. Old-fashioned writing doesn't necessarily mean it's ugly. Just write it normally. Don't forcefully show off. Come on.

I have read three books by the author, and Sword and Witch Chronicles is his debut. Later I thought that if I work hard to update it, it will be a high-quality one. The wizard genre was very popular at that time. Unfortunately, the author's updates were intermittent and then the eunuch's outline was released. The first book is understandable. The second book Lord of the Demon Realm was very good at first, and it became a masterpiece after it was released. However, as I read further, I felt that something was wrong. The small plot was too grungy. This is a consistent problem of the author. I hope the author can change it later, but as expected, it turned out to be a eunuch. Normally speaking, I don't read two consecutive Eunuch books by the author, but I prefer to read game novels or game novels. Later, I continued to write two more game novels, one for 700,000 yuan and one for 100,000 yuan. Then, as expected, I continued to read Eunuch. The author's consistent problem is that the small details he wrote earlier made the writing verbose, and he changed it a lot later. However, the author's biggest problem is that he is greatly influenced by others, and he is very, very lack of perseverance. To be honest, there are many novels with 100,000 orders, so why can't he persist more? The author's wild settings are really good in my opinion, and the imagination and writing style are at least better than some of the great writers I have read. However, no matter how good the writing style, no matter how good the setting, five consecutive eunuch books, I feel that it is really not suitable for online writing. When I read Sword and Wizardry in 2016, I felt that the author was really spiritual, but he was short of money to go to college. The Demon Realm and the Beloved are both excellent novels. If I had persisted more, would it have been different? I am actually angry and sad to say so much. I have never joined the author group because I think there is no need to disturb a writer. He writes out his settings and takes us into the world he wants, and we can feel it. But it is still a pity that the author still did not persist. It may be because of family matters. If it is true, he can write a leaflet to explain, but if he has been silent for two weeks, it should be time to say goodbye. I like the author's setting very much, but perseverance is still the most important thing for an online author. I look forward to one day that you can have a 4 million work, but after 7 years, I think I may not be able to wait. I hope that one day you can do it and you can slap me in the face. Let's just say it again, it's such a pity!

It's well written, I recommend more female protagonists! ! I give you all the recommendation votes

Each of Mushroom's novels is very interesting, whether it is the setting or the content. I felt regretful for a long time when Night Blessed was not updated. I must not cut this book.

It looks great. At first I thought it was not something I didn't want to read because it was an online game writer. But then I read the introduction and read it because it was an online game writer. It looks so good and there are no messy data. Using this attribute rule similar to dnd makes it more comfortable for me to read. It's not like others that have attributes that can cost thousands or tens of thousands.

Does anyone have photos of the author wearing women's clothes in ancient times? Ask for one

It's traditional but well written. I'm just a few chapters away from finishing it. There's nothing sinister about it. I'll treat the author to a meal.

Everything else is okay, but the orthopedic surgery of brother and sister really can't accept it, even if it's pretended to be a family reorganization.

Su Fan

Silver Feather

This is a high-quality book, and it is slowly filled with interesting things. Just next to this eunuch, the previous book is like this.

The smell is so strong that it reminds me of five years ago.

The new style of online writing, eunuch style?

Ibis

It's over a hundred chapters long. It can't be said that there is no cybernetic element, it can only be said that it is the same as there is no cybernetic element. It would be okay to change the era setting to the near future. I hope that the cyber flavor will be stronger in the later chapters, otherwise it will not be much different from traditional online game articles.

To be honest, I don't even know why I stopped updating it. I only found out after reading the comments that the author has even disbanded his readership. It looks like there is no chance. Another cool book

The book is very good and interesting, but the pace of the plot is a bit too fast for the author, leaving no time for the protagonist to rest and reorganize. He often starts the next event non-stop before receiving the reward for the previous event, which looks very awkward. The following are the rewards that have not been processed or received so far, and there may be some that have not been counted: The sub-professional token dropped by killing the undead leader of the Lv10 wild boss in Chapter 55, but so far the protagonist has already taken the sub-professional, so the author may have forgotten it. In Chapter 117, the adventure-level mission triggered in the Fire Sacrifice Site rewards rare skill scrolls and camp reputation. The New Dream God received the latter after becoming a god, but the skill scrolls are still missing after more than 100 chapters. The God-given mission triggered in Chapter 222 rewards dark gold-level expertise. After completing the mission, there is still no reward after more than 30 chapters. After completing the two missions, he refused to give any actual benefits to his beloved. The God of New Dreams is really stingy. This reward in Chapter 222 is barely understandable after only more than 30 chapters (it is quite outrageous in other novels), but this skill scroll that has been delayed for more than 100 chapters already speaks volumes. I hope the author can deal with it as soon as possible and pay attention to the rhythm issue. The rhythm that suits you is best.

Stop it. I sent it again. Is this the first book you have sent? Writing a book on your own credit?

I feel like this book is much better written than the previous one.

The writing is really good. I don't like reading online game articles at first, but this book made me read it. Come on, author, don't be a pigeon.

This is my first review. The author hopes to write it without any criticism. It is a ray of dawn in today's era when online game articles are sparse.

It's quite useless. It's been like this for so many books.

I really feel sorry for myself because I trust you so much. Every time you say that you won't be fooled again when you start a new book, I support it with genuine support. Come back today and take a look. Every book of yours is like this 😭. I have been with you since your Sword and Wizardry, and my heart has been chilled time and time again. Every time you say you want to change, I believe you. Are you worthy of me? 😭😭

Ask for refinement