The Blind Uchiha and the Platinum Star

The direction of the plot... Looks more and more like Matsushita is a red Uchiha novel set in the world of Naruto. But Naruto World is red... It is really poorly written and has not produced a few high-quality books. Kishimoto's zz level is at most that of a forum official. Weaving a zz background of a big world is completely beyond his ability. The logic of zz in the world of Naruto is not self-consistent, and it is very unreal, so it is even more unrealistic to be red in Naruto. The class basis is not fully reflected. What is it and who is it? For example, Naruto's zz foundation is self-contradictory. So far, no fan author can come up with a reasonable second hypothesis about the daimyo's control of the shinobi village economy, because it is fundamentally illogical. Naruto's view of war is a chuunibyou. Madara, Hashirama, Tobirama, and Uchiha Itachi, Nagato, etc. Talk about war as if they were talking about metaphysics. They talk about war as an independent subject and ignore the sexual nature of war. This also leads to the methods they come up with to stop the war being more abstract than the last. If you ask me, even if the Japanese bring their ancestor Oda Nobunaga into it, it will bring peace more than ten thousand pillars. There is no need for red to quell the war, unification will be enough. What makes me interested in seeing the update is the author's plan for the protagonist's growth. Hey, the writing is quite good. Some of the descriptions of the principles of magic techniques go further than the secondary settings of many existing novels. They have a very systematic feel. I like it. This is the female supporting role. Boruto Anko is too abstract. It's a bit jarring to see her seem like a heroine.

Is it to go to heaven⌓‿⌓The enlightened one will always be happy!

The protagonist's ninja phantom is so strong, so why is the protagonist blind? Do you just keep using the kaleidoscope and don't use anything else? ? ?

The author's writing is quite strange. He spends a lot of words and ink on plotting in the Naruto world view, especially after the Dance King and the Pot King were offline, the subsequent plot was even worse. Isn't watching Naruto just to have fun, just to show off when someone doesn't like you? If I want to watch Machiavellian, why don't I watch Three Kingdoms or Game of Thrones?

I don't know why the author's opening pictures are completely different from the current ones. The current ones have the feeling of youthful pain literature, as if they are moaning for nothing. It really doesn't look good.

I thought it was a fusion of Fujitora and Kizaru. I was speechless after reading Chapter 14.

The main character is schizophrenic. . .

Ordered some time ago I stopped when I saw that the author was showing signs of becoming a literary youth I took advantage of the limited exemption to read it in the past two days, and found that there are indeed some common problems for new authors 1. Can't grasp the key points to advance the plot (for example: the plot of Shin and Yuji in the hospital) 2. Write about women It just feels inexplicable (for example: Ye Cang) 3. The protagonist's personality is a bit erratic (smiling playfully with Minato) There is also a point where the character is really immature. At first, it seemed that he had the pearls of wisdom in hand, but in the end, he was completely panicked when a plot that I had not seen in the original work came out.

The avatar is the embodiment of the spirit. Let's not talk about why you have the Platinum Star. After you get the Platinum Star, shouldn't your personality change? Even plug-ins have an impact on the host, right?

It's Xu Xian and Platinum Star getting spanked again. Is it too much to tease? The protagonist was still serious in the past, talking about big ideas all day long, but now he is becoming more and more like a sexy young man with a lot of fun. Is the author excited?