The Training of the God of Death and the Seireitei

Is the heroine a broken bee? Broken Bee is too short. Although I like it very much, it is not suitable for the heroine.

What are you writing about 16 to 21? You have to show off the sentence structure. This has no effect except increasing the disgust of reading. It is a good system that triggers lottery when encountering plot tasks. If you encounter plot characters and you don't write them, you have to read them for five or six chapters. Let's write about the talents that the protagonist got. It's like killing people and picking up corpses to collect goods. If you don't write plug-ins to trigger these 6 chapters, many people will either skip reading or delete them directly from the bookshelf.

It can only be said that he was persuaded to quit at the beginning. Unless the protagonist didn't care about his reputation or family members from the beginning, he just pretended to be crazy and acted stupidly. If he didn't insist on being beaten by others, wouldn't it be obvious that there was something wrong?

Suddenly, I discovered that the protagonist now has two paths, after the Mask incident. Either stay in Soul Society and become the captain by yourself or assist Zhanfei to become the captain. Either follow Ye Yi to the present world. Personally, I think there are more prospects for development in this world

Don't let Sister Hua die😭😭😭

It's better to update it carefully, the foundation of a good book is there, The heroine can be portrayed, although Ye has tested the edge of the green protagonist several times, The society, including other characters, can also be established, But... The golden finger is too XX, which is probably the first problem that leads to loss, And after pointing it out... I still added an inexplicable one. . If you don't add anything with growth potential that can benefit you for a lifetime... Add swordsmanship, which is temporarily useless... This is really quite discouraging. . Really. .

Please, please don't castrate. Be sure to finish writing.

The author came out and said, I will discard it after sending it.

It's a bit poisonous to add some. . . If the growth talents are not filled up at the first time, you can click one in the east and one in the west. . . .

! The book on Death is very good. I feel that it should be collected at least 5,000 times. I suggest the author change the title of the book. In fact, the title of the book is not very attractive at first, but the content inside is really exciting. I highly recommend it. Keep up the good work.

Regarding the title of the book, isn't the title unattractive? 😰 Is it really boring, friends?

There is no good Bleach fanfic nowadays

This book is a GG. With the author's update speed and attitude, how many people can stick with it will probably be finished soon.

It's okay, much better than those fantasy and intellectual novels.

Is this a cut? What a pity😅

Don't send it, the book was pinned to the top, but I sent it

Author, you write so well that you just give up?