Starting from Zhu Xian, All Heavens Will Be Unified

It is recommended that novice time travelers choose the following worlds from low to high. Get the golden finger at the beginning, first go to "Super Out of Control" to get telekinetic powers! Then exercise more than a few hundred tons of telekinesis power, and then go to "My Planting Space" to get the acquired aura that evolves from the fragments of the Chaos Treasure. Refining the body and cultivating the soul to prepare for the transformation of superpowers into supernatural powers in the later period}. During this period, you can plunder the inherited secret books, heavenly materials, and earthly treasures from the major sects in the end of the Dharma era {such as alchemy, weapon training, etc. To get double weapons under one person. With all your hands, you don't need too much trouble to practice talismans. Just go to one person to get the Tongtian Seal, as well as Feng Shui and other secrets} Then travel through "Supervillain": an animated movie, and get the high-end version of Superman's gene fusion serum. Then go to the mixed world of "Anaconda" + "Jurassic Park" + "Jaws" + "King Kong vs. Godzilla" + "The Mist" {The Mist is a low-profile version of Cthulhu. The movie tells the story of American scientists using portal technology to artificially open the entrance to a different world through the world window, which was invaded. }, Then plant the plundered blood orchids in the portable small world space {blood orchids can increase the lifespan of extraordinary species and make the body evolve with permanent violent side effects}, and you can also plunder the blood genes of Godzilla and Kaiju, King Kong, Skeleton Lizard, Ghidorah and other monsters {for scientists who will conquer them in the future. Provide research samples} Then travel through the Indian cheating movie "Consciousness Uploading" and obtain the technology that allows self-awareness to back up the Internet and turn it into an artificial intelligence life form {after all, only you can be trusted. Of course, if you are not confident later, the artificial intelligence life form can imitate the contracted clones of the mechanical race in the starry sky}. Then travel through "Elysium Space" to obtain nano-medical technology. Then travel through the animated movie "Food from the Sky" to obtain the technology of converting water into food and the protagonist who conquers this plane {this protagonist is a scientist who is stronger than Tony Stark and Big Big Wolf. Moreover, the machine built by the protagonist in the later part of the animation turns the food into living food, similar to the gourmet creatures in the captives of gourmet. } Then travel through "The Mummy: The Dragon Emperor" to help Qin Shihuang unify the earth and befriend Qin Shihuang {After all, Qin Shihuang is also a human race. Although he is a little more suspicious, he can still cooperate. }, This plane has the immortal water that can make monks live forever {in Shangri-La}. This water can also resurrect the creatures in the seal, and can also resurrect the species that have just died, and can also resurrect the dead, flesh and bones. Obtain Qin Shihuang's cultivation technique {Qin Shihuang's cultivation technique is a technique that uses the five elements to cultivate the dragon's body}, and then obtain the wizard's code {this code can resurrect dead creatures and have self-awareness, but after resurrection, they will be in a skeleton state and cannot control their skeletons}. Then travel through a Western series of movies "Underworld" to obtain the blood genes and living specimens of mutant humans {This mutant human is the father of the ancestor of vampires and werewolves. Mutated humans are immortal and have the ability to absorb the blood of other species and evolve themselves according to their species. } Then travel through the "Ghost Blowing Lamp" series of movies, and get the ability of the fire ladybug {the ability to freeze or set people on fire}, get the eyes of Queen Jingjue in the ancient city {have the power of space to roll everything you see into the space, and can summon species from different spaces}, and get the refined flesh Ganoderma lucidum from the tomb of King Xian in the Insect Valley of Yunnan { You can use fantasy means to refine a fantasy version of the biological battle armor, with the ability to infinitely devour and infinitely copy yourself}, Then you can travel through "Dragon Ball" to get a gravity training device, and get Turtle Style Qigong {The principle of Turtle Style Qigong is to condense all your own power together and then punch it out. People in this world are really strong in not dying after punching out their own Qi. }, Get fairy beans and their cultivation methods, and plan for the Super Dragon Ball {cosmic treasure, which has appeared in the 12 Dragon Ball universes and can make wishes for everything in the universe. It is recommended to choose to understand the rules and laws of the world. } Then go through "My Magic Tutor" to get the world authority - Yan Shufa Sui {you can make this world your own subsidiary world or a portable small world with 100% control} Then go through the early version In the cartoon "Calabash Babies", you get the Seven Star Pill {the seven magical powers of the seven Calabash Babies, invisibility, ability to control the sky and the earth, storage space, clairvoyance and wind ears, copper head and iron arm, indestructibility, spitting water and fire, and the ability to pass through walls}, and get the alchemy furnace left by the gods at the level of the Five Elders. Get the magic weapon Five Color Lotus. Then he traveled through the TV series "Magic Mobile" and obtained a special plant cultivated by the Bull Demon King using the star core of the living planet as energy. The special plant can consume one-tenth of the star core of the planet in the apocalyptic period of a mythical world to refine a pill that gods can take and live forever for 10,000 years. Then travel through "Emperor of Armored Warriors" to get the spaceship of the former Shura Armor Summoner Lufa {the key is the Shura Armor Summoner and the Ares Scepter. The scepter is divided into two sections inside the wind chime in the Demon Suppression Tower and at the bottom of a nearby lake. There is Lufa inside the spaceship to plunder the star cores and some strategic materials of half of the life planets in the galaxy. The spaceship is located a hundred meters below the Demon Suppression Tower. }, It is recommended to plunder the five-light shadow stone and the technology of earth scientists to extract the four elements of the planetary world rules "earth, water, wind, and fire". Obtain satellite space technology for free transmission within the galaxy. Then you can choose a main world as your own later advancement system, such as Devouring the Starry Sky, or your own original main world, etc. Or directly enter Hongmeng to transform yourself into Hongmeng Demon God, and automatically evolve the acquired abilities into magical powers. The portable world will automatically become invincible at the level of the Great Thousand Worlds. Around the third level of the universe, {the first level is transcendent, the second level is quasi-transcendent, and the third level is infinitely close to quasi-transcendence - the lowest level of the Chaos Demon God}. ……………………………………………………………… Temporary listing:……

The setting is not very good, it is a failure

I get affected at every turn, and I feel like my personality is a bit broken.

Compared with the author Zhu Xian and the Versatile Mage, Zhu Xian is too weak. In the original novel, it is still quite strong. Moreover, the second part of Zhu Xian has also been strengthened, and the low-ranking kings will be destroyed (the forbidden curses released by human forbidden curse mages are comparable, in The attack power is comparable to that of low-level emperors, but not in other places, so it takes seven to one to tie in a one-on-one battle. According to the forbidden curse released by the forbidden curse mage, it is equivalent to a nuclear bomb, which is a standard city explosion). Medium-level emperors can Take Bakugo (the big cold eyes and the ultimate move can destroy the coastline, the power to destroy Japan left and right, standard Bakugo), High Emperor (just existing and doing nothing can turn the whole world into ice or desert, but it takes an unknown amount of time, so the standard continental level), (I don't know much about Zhuxian, but Taiqing Realm has reached a very strong level, and it has reached the lower limit of city-exploding level, not counting the use of Zhuxian Sword)

Why write about a full-time job? It's so embarrassing. To be honest, even writing about a martial arts world is better than a full-time job. I can't appreciate it, so I slipped away.

When I read Chapter 18, I discovered a problem. The protagonist's golden finger can actually adjust time. In that case, you can use this to accumulate spiritual power. There is no need to waste your time on cultivation.

Author, if you can achieve five pictures a day, then your book will become popular! ! ! As long as you are more rigorous when writing, then it can be regarded as food.

Wouldn't this protagonist still have to battle wits and courage with himself in the parallel world? Or should we just resolve it directly in the past?

The setting of the same generation as Zhang Xiaofan is not outstanding

I don't really like this kind of thing, I just like to practice, then break the void, and then upgrade to fight monsters and break the void.

Just like making sentences, the writing style is not good, it's not but it is.

This book! I feel like I have read it, but I haven't read it yet. There is nothing useful. It is on the same level as nonsense literature. I always ramble on here and there. I have to explain one thing for a long time, whether it is important or not. The key is that I haven't explained it clearly yet. Are you writing a kindergarten textbook? Are you afraid that others will not understand it if you explain so much? You wrote a thousand chapters and couldn't even make three episodes of a TV series. You're a loser!

What does the one that says abandon mean?

Author, there is something wrong with your latest picture, right? Didn't you say that Dongfang Ying is a middle-aged man? Why did you say that he is only 23 years old, and he reached the level of Four Shito Super Mage at the age of 23? What is this? An unparalleled genius? ? ? If this is the case, his talent can be ranked as the first full-time mage

For me personally! A novel that is completed in 200,000 words is unattractive!

Author: There is a big problem with your setting. If you devour yourself in this way, you will end up in a crazy situation. I remember a novel written like this. In order to pursue power, a person kept traveling through parallel worlds and eating his own peers. He became stronger and stronger, and then lost his mind. This is the price of taking shortcuts. There are also several books in which people choose to assimilate and fulfill their own desires, so that in the end there is no feeling of alienation. You can also use the method of Hei Xingu in the Great Tribulation Lord of the Heavens to give his own body the power to reach the pinnacle of that world, and then use it as a brick to build the endless universe.

It is suggested that the author can reduce the introduction of narration. Generally speaking, the fewer narrations, the more clear and easy to understand the article. Generally speaking, the author's writing style is very good, so the author can try to change it a little bit.

Have you noticed any problems?,,,

Looking at it now, I always feel that the protagonist's character still has flaws. He doesn't have a strong mentality and is still so indecisive. After so many pictures, I don't feel how much the protagonist's mental age has grown. According to the protagonist I see now, his mental age is when he is fourteen or fifteen years old.

The setting is so bad. If Zhu Tianwen wants to suppress it, no one can do it. The realms are blurred. I don't know what the use of time travel is? I didn't take advantage of this at all, I just wrote whatever I thought of. What can I do in the mage world? How much better is the Mage World than Zhu Xian? What are you majoring in? Can you speed up your cultivation? Look at how quickly the protagonist's strength has improved in the Mage World. The protagonist's dual golden fingers still have to forcibly suppress the realm in Zhuxian's small world? Is it different from trash fish if left outside?

Let's have some fantasy stuff like covering the sky, swallowing the stars perfectly, and turning into a martial arts fairy.

Has anyone written that the protagonist of Zhu Xian is Qin Wuyan?

After reading the first chapter, the writing didn't work. I stood on the fairy sword and came down to change the firewood.

The author should take a closer look at how Zhu Xian describes Caomiao Village at the beginning

Can Shen Nong give me some advice as to what those discarded chapters are for?

I don't want to read it, I simply don't want to read it after seeing these Naruto manga