Master Hermit of the Heavens

To be honest, it's rare to find such astronomical writing as boring as yours. Sure enough, writing style is very important when writing novels.

I feel extremely embarrassed. There are only one or two innate talents in Shaolin, but they are still initiated. How can Confucianism produce so many? What is written? Is it inconsistent?

Feng Qingyang is speechless when he has feelings for the Huashan Sect after the Sword Qi War. Why do people have feelings for the Qi Sect? How could they deceive him and then turn around and massacre the Sword Sect? The airbender deceived Lao Feng's feelings and massacred everyone in the Lao Feng sect, and then Lao Feng still had feelings for them? Is Lao Feng so cheap? A man's uncle deceived his nephew and then killed his biological father and his entire family. Do you think his nephew still has feelings for his uncle? Lao Feng was so disheartened that he vowed not to do anything with anyone again. If you want to say that his feelings for Jian Zong are true, but for the Qi Zong people to have feelings, that would be to coax the ghosts. He has to thank his Holy Mother for not killing the Qi Zong... In the end, he just didn't want the Dugu Nine Swords to be lost before he passed on the sword Linghu Chong. After all, he didn't know that there were still people in the Jian Zong. Moreover, Feng Qingyang said as soon as he appeared on the scene that he had sworn never to fight with anyone again. With you, you have directly broken Lao Feng's oath.

Are you called a hidden master? ? ? You call it turning a hidden master into a martial arts legend

Actually very disappointed. A hidden master? Aren't the descendants of an ancient tomb in Xiaoao a reclusive master? Cultivation is a fairy.

The writing of this novel is simply disgusting. My enemies tortured me thousands of times, but I fell in love with them as if they were my first love. It was written that Shaolin was so angry with Huashan that if he didn't kill anyone, he would at least kill the high-end force, and then ran to Dongchang, and then ran to be a dog. (The leader is investment, the mastermind behind the scenes, being passive is not like being a dog)

It's so well written. Don't write it next time. Wouldn't it be better to find a factory to make screws? Writing novels is not the only way to support yourself

Still missing a voluptuous heroine

Do you have hundreds of millions of misunderstandings about the hermit?

It's really verbose and just mediocre with nothing special about it.

Readers who like to read all kinds of astronomy hate the verbosity the most. Go to the Songshan Sect to challenge the Shaolin Temple, and there are a lot of verbose introductions. I have no desire to read any more. You are going for revenge, and the emphasis is on gratification and gratification. Readers are anxious to death. They still have to read a lot of introductions from you. With decades of influence in martial arts culture, coupled with the time-traveling army of modern online novels, which reader doesn't know something about Jin Yong's martial arts? Do you still need to introduce it there?

Poison, poison, poison. Randomly altering the original work and setting too many settings of your own. There are peerless masters everywhere. . Noxious weeds. OK theme.

Brother, are you talking about the rules of a low-level martial arts world? Isn't it a bit ridiculous? You can write it. For example, there is a book about a time traveler who breaks the world wall and allows a higher level of spiritual energy to pour into the small world. You are practicing the rules out of thin air without any end. In the fantasy world, you can only grasp the rules when you become a god.

I've seen dozens of them before, but I don't want to see them anymore. The protagonist travels through time and becomes Feng Qingyang, and later on his cultivation strength greatly increases. Can't it be shown openly? The first is to improve the status of the Huashan sect in the martial arts world, the second is to intimidate and weaken the sect, and the third is to develop the strength of the Huashan sect to recruit apprentices and unify the five mountains. It is meaningless to hide in the dark and be invisible.

What the hell did you do to me? I saw the Qiandong Factory in Beijing. Am I convinced? Poisoned to death 😭

My little hermit kid, I feel like you wrote about the previous world in vain, and the protagonist's character didn't grow at all. Like a middle school boy. Really ugly

Also, please, the author, could you please read the book reviews? You only have more than a hundred book reviews, and there are more than ninety people scolding you. Can you please improve it a little? If you are aloof and want to be Yi Xiaochuan, you can turn off book reviews, remove them from the shelves and write your own stand-alone book! What the hell!

Fuck you, return the law of space, a low martial artist is so awesome

A lot of what I wrote is superfluous and super embarrassing. It seems like Huashan cannot be preserved without you.

The protagonist still lacks such a Taoist companion

The setting is too rubbish. Hunyuan Daluo is equal to a mortal immortal. Since you have set Hunyuan Daluo to have a permanent certificate to prove that his true spirit will not fall, it means that he can walk out of the long river of time after death. In the Zhetian trilogy, only the Immortal Emperor can do this. A mortal immortal will die when he dies. Or you can just write that the characteristics of your Hunyuan Daluo to have a permanent certificate are only for your Conferred God setting. If you leave the Conferred God, you will not have this feature, otherwise it is completely nonsense. Fan writing must at least be consistent with the original work. Your settings are completely in conflict and have no logic at all.

It's a long story, there are more than fifty protagonists, various dialogues, and they directly ignore identity, status, character, and strength... Everything else should be fine

After reading the first chapter of "Shading the Sky", I got poisoned. The Red Dust Immortal can only live forever and die after being killed. Hunyuan Daluo, who has a true spirit that does not fall and has a permanent certificate, is the real immortal. He can be revived after being killed. At least he is an Immortal Emperor. You can refer to the Empress Huafenlu and Emperor Gu Brother in the trilogy of the Holy Ruins. You are equal to a Red Dust Immortal if you are already Hunyuan. The setting is completely broken.

The first chapter is not good, the writing is too bad

A Swordsman has written more than 160 chapters 😥

A world with low martial arts involves the way of heaven. It's boring.

An expert hermit cannot be a protagonist, and a protagonist must not be an expert hermit. If you write a master hermit as the protagonist, do you want to see the master hermit eat, drink, and have diarrhea? We are all vulgar people, don't stray from vulgar taste.

What is the man behind the scenes? In fact, it is very simple. Everything must be under your own control and calculation. There cannot be any events or characters beyond your control. Once they appear, you must get rid of or control them as soon as possible, otherwise you will be regarded as the mastermind behind the Hammer. (The above operations can be increased or decreased according to your own needs) What does it mean to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger? Under the premise of not harming one's own interests (your own interests are all things that you don't want others to get involved in), as a low-level background spectator, you enter the current event and perform various operations (including controlling the field). If you are not a fun person, it is best not to play pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger.

After reading this chapter, I knew I had to give up the book. The protagonist is a character who can kill quasi-saints, and his avatar is about to become a Chaos Immortal in the Age of Cang. Reading the memory of a true Immortal in the late stage requires a little effort.

I've read more than a dozen chapters and I can't stand it anymore. I'd like to give the author some advice. Some people like to abuse vegetables, some like to be sentimental, and some like to farm. But they have one thing in common. The writing style is at least passable. I'll give the next book a little polish, but I can't stand it anymore.