Hogwarts Black Cat

After seeing the latest chapter, let me know what you think. First of all, the author has a lot of knowledge reserves, which can be seen between the lines. When writing, the author will take the time to look up some information, not only the things in the original work, but also the habits of certain animals. There are occasional science popularization links in the article, and it can be seen that he has a certain writing attitude. But while reading, I found that some details were problematic. However, the author explained in a single chapter at the end that everyone has their own thinking when reading the book, has their own cognition, and sees things from different angles. I kind of understand it, after all, there are indeed a thousand Hamlets for a thousand readers. The author will patch some obvious errors, which is a good approach. I agree with the author's statement that once the settings are set, they cannot be changed because it will affect the flow of the plot. It's more friendly to people like me who can read serials, because if the author overhauls it, I might not know what's going on. The sense of the first volume is actually a bit average. At this time, the author may not have entered the best state and failed to find the theme positioning of HP, because it is too long. Normally, one should start the book in a few chapters, but you actually wrote more than twenty chapters and dug a lot of pits. This writing method is actually not very friendly to new readers. Enrollment started to get better after the second volume. The character's personality and foreshadowing began to be reflected. The foreshadowing before and after can gradually be corrected, and it can be seen that there is a certain idea. What interests me more is that the author explores the plot of the original work from different angles. For example, from the perspective of an owl, he describes the impression of this species on the wizard group from an animal species and a biological perspective. You can see that I have thoughts about writing my own book. The author's grasp of character design has also expanded to a certain extent, and there is currently no OOC situation. I analyzed the plot of the so-called Eastern culture that you mentioned in a single chapter, which readers said was poisonous. In fact, after reading the entire article, I found that this kind of plot only appeared in Hermione's father and the affected protagonist. It belongs to the setting of a certain character, not the style of the entire article. If you can accept the secondary design of Hermione's father, there will be no problem in reading it and it will be quite smooth. One of the better things about the author is that your expanded second hypothesis appears in characters that are not mentioned in the original work. If you wrote that Professor McGonagall or Snape understood Eastern culture, I am afraid more people would complain. The protagonist is a black cat. From the current look, the author should want to write a character with a simple heart and a very powerful pseudo-invincible style. This style is actually acceptable. It is very similar to the book I have read before by an author who specializes in writing alien beasts and whose pen name is Interface Card. But from what I read, your style is not purely funny, it reads like a bit of black humor. That's a lot of praise. Let's talk about the shortcomings. Your narrative structure is a bit scattered. Overall, it feels like you are writing one thing before finishing another. You may be writing according to a timeline, that is, writing several things in a certain period of time. It is indeed easy to write daily prose in this way, but it is a bit tiring to follow it, and it is easy to be addicted to books. In short, this book is worth reading. The author has many ideas for writing his own book. I hope I can work harder in the future, maintain the style, and it will be a good book if it doesn't collapse.

I mainly wanted to write this book in a light-hearted and funny way, with a bit of a fairy tale feel. The protagonist is in the permanent cat form, currently cannot speak human language, and has not practiced the art of transformation to become a human. Before writing, I mainly referred to the narrative of "Hui Mao", which uses dialogue between supporting characters to depict settings and foreshadowing, the animal semi-anthropomorphic humor of "The Fairy Tale King", and the semi-nonsensical comedy style of modern Internet articles. Some people say that I refer to "The Druid". In fact, I have indeed read that book, but if you read my book carefully, you will find that it is a completely different style, including the character setting, including the narrative. Only when describing the cuteness of cats, there are some similarities, but in fact the description style is still different. The description of animals in this book (including the protagonist and others) is actually more in the style of "The Fairy Tale King". "The Fairy Tale King" is an adult fairy tale that older readers should have heard of. Each author's writing and narrative are different, and they will write their own things. It is impossible to find the shadow of another author in one author. Then this book also has the author's own ideas and settings, but readers need to read it patiently. Because it is an unsystematic flow, it has dug a lot of pits, and many settings will be developed later. In addition, don't believe in any divine farmers. You have to read it yourself to know whether the book is good or not. Plant a seed today and harvest a peach tree tomorrow. If readers are willing to plant seeds with me, I will write a book seriously and give you a peach tree.

What can I say about this novel? It smells like Chinese civilization. It's strange. It's obviously a Western magic novel, but the lines are filled with various oriental elements. It's very entertaining.

I just want to ask if the cat has been neutered?

I have read a lot of Harry Potter fans and I am very tired of it. I have not wanted to read this type of book for a long time, but this one feels novel and I support it.

I just read the beginning, and there are not many bad points so far, but there are quite a lot of them. The main reason is that the author has made too many assumptions about the original work, and it doesn't feel like Harry Potter's style anymore, which gives readers who have read the original work an awkward feeling.

I ran out of books and came back to read it. It was actually okay. It seemed like the feeling of reading a story. It was good but not too popular.

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. . . I'm not interested in writing from this angle, so bye bye

This book probably feels nondescript, but it can also be fun to read. Some of the plots written by the author make people wonder whether the author has read Harry Potter...

How about Minerva Cat being cp 😏😏😏

You know, I have a friend who also writes articles. She is now very rich because she updates frequently. Oh, I don't mean anything, I just want to tell you. 😃😃😃

Okay, let's play something perverted and take Professor McGonagall away.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

So... Why do Hermione's parents cook Chinese food... Very few British families can cook Chinese food these days?😃

It's a good starting point, but I feel like the details make me a little uncomfortable.

An interesting book written by a thoughtful author~✊

There are major differences from the original work. For example, Tom does not open the door to the new students who do not have magicstaff

The idea of ​​​​the Monster Book is really good, and it can come true! Awesome 👍🏻

It's really good. It's of the highest quality among HP fans. Maybe the public feels good about it after seeing it too much.

This book is so beautiful

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