My Hong Kong Comprehensive World

I would like to remind the author that it is okay for Hong Kong dramas to include supernatural beings. It is normal. Anyway, most of the Hong Kong dramas I have watched have collapsed due to the inclusion of deadlocks. Others have had no problem adding the special powers of Lyon exorcist policeman Ah Xing or even God of Cookery Guanyin, but as long as the deadlocks are added, it will be over and will inevitably collapse. I have not seen any that are ok. So you must not join a deadlock. The key to a deadlock is that there is nothing to write home about. There is just a long-legged Ma Xiaoling and nothing else. The power system is just like that, and the world must be destroyed and meteorites are needed. It's too long. The key is to have such a little power to win the name. The account was taken, so the Nine-Character Mantra was a wrong version of the Japanese Nine-Character Mantra. There was nothing to look forward to. It was not a serious world at all. Apart from other things, Guanyin, the God of Cookery, was better than those. If I could call on Wang Lingguan, I could get rid of all deadlocks.

The attribute panel is too complicated. I still don't understand how strength, agility, and constitution can be calculated separately. How can you become agile if you don't have strength? Where does strength come from if you don't have constitution? It's obviously one thing that has to be divided into three parts. This author is even weirder. What's the point of making intelligence and then spirit? Is it just to limit development?

Why can he publish a potential new book with only 50,000 words? Looking for someone to edit py?

Fang Min and his family are going to live in public housing. Can they afford to go to Edinburgh school? This school is attended by the children of rich families, and the protagonist is working part-time as a punching bag. What does the author think? Although I know you want to unfold the plot, can't you think of a better way? For example, you can go see beautiful girls with your classmates.

I just don't understand, points, attribute points, skill points, why keep these? The attribute points are almost hundreds! There are dozens of skill points, why keep these? Do you think your body will be able to adapt immediately if you add these attribute points and skill points?

How to put it this way, after reading dozens of chapters, I discovered that one problem is that the protagonist wants to learn everything but is not good at it, and the stall is too big at once. There are too many plot characters at the same time, which is very difficult to control, and it is too high-profile. If it were the real world, I would not survive three episodes.

(Qiu Suzhen)

Why keep the points? If you don't want to improve your strength? Why keep the attribute points? Waiting to die? Are the reactions as fast as a sniper rifle? Are you going to be beaten to death even though you know you're not fast enough?

The intelligence of 123 looks like a sand sculpture

The writing is so messy that I can't read it anymore.

With this learning system and skill points, it feels like you are constantly running through the plot. In fact, you can directly click on the technology tree, trigger tasks and gain skill points. When the time comes, you will become a real technology tycoon and have capital that can influence the world. Everything can be done with just a few words.

You have directly changed it to a system for picking up girls. Are you still learning the system?

Just pay 3 million a month to protect a girl who may be retaliated by gangsters. How much do you plan to give in the future to win over others? Go ahead and eat your shit.

More than three million a month? How many millions do you spend on this bodyguard a year? There is no need to kneel down and lick them, hand them a ladder and come if they want to. You are the boss if you don't want to and don't force them. Your total assets are only 20 million. Xiaofu's dream is to get 100,000 to go home and build a house. Nowadays, there are all kinds of cannons, TNT grenades in the world of capital... If you throw a high-explosive customized grenade, you will be reincarnated even if you are a martial arts master.

The first few chapters of the author were pretty good, but after about ten chapters, he let himself go. He could write whatever he wanted, but it didn't match up with the previous ones. Moreover, some settings didn't follow the original version, so the writing would go very fast. I already feel like I'm going to collapse after reading chapter 20!

Ruan Mei (Zhou Huimin)

(Zhang Min)

It's still peaceful. One moment the whole city is full of zombies, another moment the world is destroyed, and another moment there's a battle between immortals and demons.

Hong Kong TV dramas are better written. Many Hong Kong TV dramas only remember killing monsters and leveling up. They don't know what is the most attractive thing about Hong Kong TV dramas. Come on, author.

Author, can you tell me what you think? Do you think the results of this book are too good, or are you planning to find a new eunuch? During the Anti-Japanese War, you write The Mummy 3. Just write it, and everyone will have fun and watch the excitement. You send a mission to the protagonist and those two yellow-skinned and white-hearted banana women to kill the Dragon Emperor. If you want fantasy, just write a deadlock. I have nothing to say. Isn't it too much for you to make the Dragon Emperor disgust everyone?

Once the Great Sun Tathagata's Purifying Mantra is cast, the protagonist is gone.

It's Song Yi, not Song Tie. Wan Qiwen from the infatuated SWAT, Wang Zuxian from City Hunter, Weng Hong from Modern Young and Dangerous, Lin Xilei from King of Kings 2000, and Jing Tian from Macau Storm are all great beauties. Let's accept them as the heroines.

Now when I see the protagonist dancing so happily, I always think of what it would be like for the protagonist to be slapped to death by Miao Shan.

I feel that it would be too dangerous to blow up the island country without using Tsar Bomb, and there could be zombies everywhere at any time.

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That ghost in Japan and the drowned policewoman

It's such a pity that I have to keep reading books to death. It's a rare good book.

Holy water does not need to be brought back through system space.

It's a deadlock, okay, keep going, but it's a pity that the monthly ticket was just given to someone else

Use the Pangu compass to visit the Zixia Fairy in the Tang Dynasty