Evolve from a Little Spider

This is a mistake, the most basic logic is wrong. Your introduction is pretty good. The little girl is a failure. The world is evolving too fast. I don't believe in this kind of evolution. The country doesn't know about it. Even if there is an Internet connection, the people will definitely know about it. In fact, the little girl can be rescued and taken away by the government department, and the protagonist can develop on her own. When we watch Alien Beasts, we just want to see what survival is like from the perspective of animals, and time travel increases the sense of immersion. Regarding the relationship between human beings and the protagonist, first of all, when some readers read novels about alien beasts, they will say that the protagonist should eat humans, otherwise there will be problems. In fact, our purpose is to hope that the protagonist, after time-traveling into an animal, will no longer treat humans as the same race. Cooperation? There is no possibility. At most, it will be an agreement with a snake or something. Also, your subject is biological evolution, not spiritual energy recovery, so don't write about weird abilities or anything like that. The protagonist has evolved to one meter, but there is no description at all about whether the spider silk has evolved or not, and there are eight spider legs. It can't be possible. You want to write a hundred-meter spider, right? Actually, if you don't step on the wrong foot, I still have a lot of suggestions for this book. For example, after the protagonist evolves, his whole body is black and purple, and his eight eyes are the color of rubies, with black eye kernels inside. Let's take a cute female spider whose intelligence is only 6 years old of a human being. She is pink and white, with blue eyes. I will write about the interaction with the female spider later. In the middle period, humans have gained a firm foothold, and the protagonist will find a territory and build an underground palace with spider webs. Then humans will attack here.

Since the author writes about humans, he hopes to handle the relationship with humans well, although I have never seen the alien beast genre handle it well.

I hope Spider can write well this time. . I've seen it a lot. . No one has written it well

The author pays attention to one point: the protagonist has all the side effects activated, and behind him are a large group of things that are up to his level. I used to read a lot of Mo Shiwen's books like this. The protagonists are all awesome, and then you start with how much money you have, and then wherever you go, you will meet someone who is one or two levels better than him, or even about the same as him. Anyway, no matter how the protagonist cheats, he will always meet someone of the same level as him. I don't know how the people behind me caught up with them?

He is someone who only knows how to kneel and lick. Can he really not stand up?

Eh? Western fantasy series

Okay, I hope you don't collapse in the middle and later stages.

I don't quite understand the rush to go to the city. It's good to develop a bit first. After all, there are risks.

Author, will the protagonist transform later

There are too many evolution values. It takes 100 to evolve. Setting it to 10 times is almost the same. The later 100 are difficult to upgrade

The author should have an outline, write slowly, don't let others tell you what to do, this is the case with the Alien Beasts genre

You can write slowly, but you must plan the follow-up, that is, the outline Many novels now start writing at a certain point, and problems will occur after more than 200 chapters. You have to take this as a warning.

? It's not to the point of giving up yet, right?

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