Under One Person: Master the Wind Situation, and the Immortal Sect Will Start from Scratch

I have refreshed it several times by myself, please hurry up and update it, this is so little, I don't like it! Let's update fifty chapters a day!

In fact, I guess this book will most likely only receive perfect attendance. But there is no way... I can only write about teenagers and growth. If I add genres such as the system, the live broadcast of the national games, the urban soldier king, the son-in-law, the simulator, and the diary disclosure, I can't write it. In the end, the book will only collapse the plot. In fact, compared to the previous book, I tried my best to make this book in line with the current market. In my opinion, the pace is already fast. The three chapters show the ability, reduce the description of water scenery and psychological activities, and arrange the number of words for primary and secondary characters. Try to shape the plot as much as possible and update it regularly every day. But I also know the shortcomings of this book... What are the three chapters to show abilities? There should be a system in the first chapter, or the fun ability to make everyone happy. What I don't like to see is the growth of young people and psychological changes. If Liu Beiwen is not involved, he should be the ultimate strongman from the beginning, killing one by one with a knife, so that everyone can be happy and the author can get rice. Nowadays, no one believes that a young man with no background can grow into a strong man. A person with a system is like an aristocratic prince. Under the arrangement of a life mentor, he can live his glorious life in an orderly manner without making any mistakes. But I'm not. I spent the first twenty years in a state of confusion and didn't know what to do, so I couldn't write systematic articles. Without humor, I probably couldn't write entertaining articles either. (The bargaining section in more than ten chapters, I thought it was fun, but many people scolded the male protagonist for being mentally retarded and abstract) I can only say that I am still learning how to change the writing method and speed up the pace. I hope to write more plots that can satisfy the readers and good plots that can satisfy me. I don't dare to cut the book yet... Because I don't know if I will have the courage to start over with the next book. I don't even know if the next book can be signed and reviewed if it is not market-clear. I can only keep writing. I hope that my boy will at least have a complete life. At this point, I have already let down the previous book and the previous one. I haven't finished reading those two books, I just kept reading them intermittently with the thought that when I stabilize, I can really make money and be able to work as a writer. If you earn salted fish, you will never forget your dream... Okay, don't be exhausted, I guess no one likes to see these, in short, persistence is victory✌ I wish everyone a bright future and a big fortune! People who read my articles and those who don't read my articles are happy every day!

I've finished reading the Luo Tian Dajiao chapter. How should I put it? It felt a bit depressing and uninspiring. Luo Tian Dajiao just got the Fenghou Qimen not long ago. Come on, I don't know what to say.

Can Xia He be killed? Almost all the people I watched were either getting along with Xia He or helping Zhang Lingyu and Xia He get along. Many people whitewashed Xia He and said that she joined Quan Xing because of her ability and had not done anything bad, but it disgusted me. I remember very clearly that Mi Er clearly said during the live broadcast that all crazy people deserve to die. If you write her to death, I will give you a reward to pursue whoring money. Moreover, the protagonist of this book clearly has a big feud with Quan Xing. You can't let her go just because of Zhang Lingyu, right?

I hope the protagonist treats Quan Xing just like General Duanmu treats Oxer

According to Pig's Foot's thinking, in order to get revenge, strength is needed, so we come to the conclusion that Fenghou Qimen is needed. If you don't need to go there, why do you set out there just for Fenghou Qimen So, everything that follows is an interior scene,,,, you might as well write a plug-in

Witnessing his parents being killed, he vowed to kill everyone in revenge. Under such circumstances, he can still be as lazy as Mr. Ye, which is really speechless! Also, the Eight Wonders seem to have sequelae. Under one person, the most important thing is sex and life. There is no need to keep an eye on the Eight Wonders, right? The person who pioneered the Eight Wonders was either killed or imprisoned

I don't know where the dog-licking virgin came from

I don't know if the author thinks this way or just writes it this way. It is still a last resort. Fairness lies only on the edge of the sword, and truth lies only within the range of the cannon. . . . It's okay if you write it once or twice. Repeatedly emphasized, it also runs counter to the main body. That would be disgusting. . . You only used a dozen words to kill one. But I used hundreds of words in class. . . . If you are a customer for massage, first take half an hour of health education. Are you still going?

Heavenly Master also doesn't have the Eight Wonders Skills, so he still suppresses his whole nature, and if he doesn't cultivate his nature and destiny, even if he practices all the Eight Wonders Skills, it will be useless. Lay a good foundation. Are there any eight magic skills that are the same? Without a foundation, if you usually cheat and act slippery, no sect or technique can save you.

What are you writing about? A villain with a dark heart? It's useless if your xinxing is not up to par

Generally speaking, there is no big problem, but the protagonist has too many distracting thoughts, too many thoughts, inner demons, and insufficient strength. The more he reads the article, the more he will become a little impetuous. I hope the author can deal with these points.

I thought there was finally someone who didn't follow the plot. If you want to kill everyone, you don't have to participate. Just practice hard and kill people after the competition. Now it's so boring that I can't even watch it.

Wu Jixiang

The first part is very slow to write, but the second part is better.

The protagonist was reborn as a fetus with memories. He saw his whole family being killed. His character was bitter and resentful. As a result, Kouhei spoilers a famous scene where he jumped up and down like a clown. He was both talented and pretentious. He even used Fenghou Qimen to deal with three minions.

Aren't people with congenital aliens unable to practice Kung Fu? Moreover, even if they practice Kung Fu, they can generally only practice one kind of Kung Fu. The path of Qi travel is fixed. Even Feng Shayan cannot learn how to exorcise spirits and dispatch generals.

Hahaha the comment section is more exciting than the novel

The eight magical skills have been strengthened. I hope the author will also strengthen them. For example, now the king can also fix the middle palace in his body. The Qimen will follow wherever the king goes. There is basically no range limit.

It feels very separated, the characters are separated from the story, and the thoughts and actions are separated. We all know that the novel is false, and we hope that the author will make us believe that if there really is such a world, the story will most likely evolve according to the settings in the text.

It's a bit like a revenge novel about a sadistic male protagonist.

Chapter 161! There are only 8 people on the book club list! Brother, how did you hold on? This is already Chapter 161

I think it's well written, but I don't know why the data is so poor. People with small businesses can only vote for it with two monthly votes.