The Best Male God Descended from Heaven

I personally don't like Su Ya. Can the author let the male protagonist interact with those people in the group? I think they are quite interesting.

I have read more than a dozen chapters, let's talk about my feelings This book is considered average among heroine novels. If you like this kind of novel, you can still give it a try To talk about the bad points, I personally feel that the problem at the beginning is relatively big, and the image of the protagonist is not well established. There is some disconnect between the ordinary time-traveling people before meeting the heroine and the cute and virtuous little husband after meeting the heroine. The foreshadowing is not enough, which makes the subsequent plot seem abrupt However, the daily relationship between the two is still okay after they come into contact, although it is not. There are too many points to count, but they are not poisonous. This kind of writing is all about flirting and sweetness Then I have to complain. When I saw this plot, I felt that if I changed it a little, this should be a female romance novel, or the kind of virtuous man descended from heaven. , Based on the perspective of the female protagonist, she picks up a beautiful boy when she goes out, and then writes mostly about the male protagonist's expressions and actions, without giving the readers and the protagonist any more information, using the image of a mysterious and cute beautiful boy, and directly harmonizes with all the flaws in the original plot. The female channel Mary Sue arranged it well

It's not easy to find a novel with a complete world view and a good emotional drama. The author must stick to it. I strongly support it.

After reading a few chapters, I felt like I was putting the cart before the horse. There are so many books about martial arts. Why should I read this one? The focus is on the interaction with the heroine.

What is a female deity? Is it a world where the male protagonist can take advantage of women at will and all the women serve the male protagonist? Women are the ones who get pregnant and give birth to children (unless men give birth to children), men still have the upper hand in height and physical strength, and the clothing of both sexes has not changed. If the world is still dominated by women, why are there women coveting men like wolves and tigers?

Author, you deleted my comment and you don't want to confront me. If you want to write about a male and n female harem, just write about a male-dominated world. Why do you want to write a female-dominated world?

I have a personal opinion. If you don't like it, delete it immediately. The protagonist should be called this. Forgive me for not remembering the name of the protagonist after reading dozens of chapters. If he is the protagonist, why not focus on his perspective? It feels like there are too many scenes between Su Ya and her netizens, and the protagonist is just a tool that triggers the plot. It's so interesting to come to this kind of different world and a world where the language is blocked. I don't know if the author has read Jiang Baigui, but I feel like I can write it after Jiang He. The perspective is not based on Su Ya.

Let's put it this way, I feel that the advantages of this book are the complete world view, delicate emotional description, and interesting starting setting. The male protagonist is also pretty good. The shortcomings are also obvious. The heroine is a bit too incompetent. After all, this is a novel about female characters. This is a world where women are respected. According to common sense, women should be somewhat masculine. The heroine seems a bit sissy, indecisive and a bit of a drag. I hope a wave of female protagonists can be strengthened.

First of all, I want to say sorry. After reading the free chapters, I feel that the author's pace is a bit too slow. It's almost 100 chapters and I haven't learned to speak yet. This is quite discouraging (like me). Hahaha, come on, author.

I caught up with the latest chapter and wrote my own feedback. I feel that the author is a bit overwhelmed. To be honest, with this beginning, it would be much better to write about daily life in a semi-imitative way of a thousand years. Zhou Mei, a little wild cat, and Xue Wu are all quite intellectually depressing. It is better not to write, because people don't want to read these things. If you want to write a single heroine, then follow the format of a thousand years and write about daily life. The results will definitely be better than now. If you want to write about multiple women, then focus on describing Shura Field. Of course, it is also more daily life. It is better to be in the present. Now I can't even define what this is about. I am still quite disappointed. After reading a few more chapters, I will leave if it doesn't work.

It's all settled. This setting is so annoying to me. Come on, author! You must keep writing it, come on💪

For now, you write the heroine character. Quite discouraged. Have you ever looked back and seen that it was basically all shortcomings and I could barely see where her strengths were? Although in reality almost everyone has some of these shortcomings, however. Do you have a grudge against your heroine? Anyway, until now I don't think there's anything likable about her.

Duo and Shan have not thought about fishing here.

After watching it for a long time, the heroine is a pure bt bitch

How can I put it, the quality is very good, but it is not to my taste. Although it is a heroine, the heroine gives me the feeling of a slut and a pervert, which I don't like very much (There are no pictures, otherwise I will only follow the facial features, and to say it is really sweet), it is a good book for people who like to read this kind of subject

The poisonous point has already appeared, I just want to see how long you want to disgust the readers.

I'm really convinced. This cooking plot is just about cooking and eating, right? There are eight major cuisines. By the time you finish cooking eight dishes, the dishes in front of you will be cold. And if three people eat eight dishes, they will all be reincarnated as hungry ghosts, right? I also specially introduce the dishes. This is not a food article. Who are you introducing it to? I really don't understand the author, what's the use of the protagonist's character. Don't write in detail where you should write in detail, don't skip what should be skipped

I want to ask, multiple heroines or single heroine? If there are multiple female protagonists, I won't watch it. I'll reward the single female protagonist and support it. I don't really like watching Minotaur. Thank you.

Speaking of which, the advantage of having multiple female protagonists is Shura Field. If the story of a single female protagonist is not strong, I think it will be quite difficult to write (easily tired or criticized), but I can accept it no matter how I write it. Personally, I still like the wives in the group.

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The impact of the epidemic is really boring. I read this book to relieve my panic.

I always feel like the heroine is useless. On the contrary, it also limits the plot development

All the characters have low IQs from the beginning to the end, pots, pans, plastic buckets, singing the song of King Lanling, cooking eight major cuisines, the sixth victim, catching the murderer, the eavesdropping reporter, wow, I don't know how many sets of courtyard houses have been deducted from the soles of my feet. When I think back now, I feel that I am really amazing, and I can actually read more than a hundred chapters. I roughly understand what kind of plot the author wants to create, but the writing, character creation, and ability to promote the development of the plot are really not good enough to create such a thing. Maybe the author has improved later, but I can't stand it anymore. After reading other comments, the plot should still be the same, and there are eunuchs, so bye bye.

The quality is not high and the number of words is not long. You want twenty for one chapter, but your heart is really dark.

You haven't watched it for a few days and you're so pissed off?

Hurry up!

How can I put it... I quite liked the first part of it, but it became duller and duller towards the end, and even made me feel like I was being deceived. To be honest, I wanted to see the sweet interaction with the heroine more than to engage in other messy things.

Come on, come on, it's pretty good