The Idealist in the Peerless Tang Clan

I find that some people nowadays just look down on Douluo fans, but they insist on looking for Douluo fans to read, which is outrageous. You don't know whether he thinks that watching Douluo Fans can show how superior he is, or whether he simply likes to eat things he doesn't like, which is confusing.

There is also a group of monkeys that evolved from a steam civilization to a civilization far beyond reality. Are you funny? The real society has gathered billions of humans to sift through energy technology. Now energy technology is still at a standstill, and there has been no major development for decades. How far can those monkeys develop? ? ? ? ? Comparing the so-called soul guidance technology with real technology, I can only say... It's scumbag.

This is the first time the author writes a book. He is very serious, emmm. Every chapter has been revised many times, and there is an outline to ensure that it will not be a eunuch. If you have any suggestions or opinions, please put them forward.

I don't like your book very much. It's too depressing. I still like hard-core writing. Your book is full of human reality and so on.

🙂 After reading the first volume, the first part is really good, but the second part takes a third of the soul to take revenge. Although it is a drop from the sky, it still feels a bit ridiculous.

With plug-ins like Soul Guidance Technology, it is very simple to achieve highly automated production.

The writing is indeed good, but if you come here to write about melancholy, you won't be popular.

I remember that the weapons used by a certain novelist were also books and pens, right? 😃😃I just suddenly thought of it

I just read a few chapters. Is Wuhun in Secret?

One chapter is updated in one day. Are you a "baby"?

Why do you always write some disgusting plots, do you have to be cuckolded?ヽ( ￣д￣;)ノ

Why do I feel like the main character will be killed within a few chapters? It's so ideal.

The author is great, who is the heroine of this book?

A space torn apart by hundreds of tons of force.

The author can read Yan Leisheng's novel Tian Xingjian. Some things are written quite well in it.

It still feels good, author, come on

?? ? Will it be removed from the platform?

The writing is a bit verbose, which is not suitable for writing online articles. Too much nonsense.

I feel a little strange when I see I am over sixty. This should violate the definition of fan fiction. It should be a book with a similar (living) feeling. It writes stories about the people at the bottom, and then writes about the author himself, the character in the pen. But there are some settings in it that are very strange. I feel that the man in black should be similar to other plane gods. Then the appearance of Munn, this setting is very strange, it can temporarily make up for the lack of soul. The person described by the author regained something that was missing in love, but why Huo Yuhan and Wang Dong encouraged the male protagonist to have two girlfriends, one for Huo Yuhan and Wang Dong, must have been a foreshadowing or something? Well, it is indeed a good novel and worth reading. If you want to read Douluo II, you can read it. The writing is quite good. I just don't know what will happen in the middle? Will it crash? Worth looking forward to

The first point is that in Douluo Continent, a child who has just awakened his martial soul and has soul power can beat an adult. It is not a problem for a soul master to beat a dozen, not to mention that the great soul master and soul master treat you as a commoner and treat you as a human being. What can you do? The second point is that it is too difficult for commoners to awaken their soul power in Douluo Continent. Even if they awaken their soul power, it will only be one or two levels. Even if they awaken higher soul power, the number of people is too small to shake the basic base of the nobles. The awakened commoners do not have much knowledge and will be manipulated by the nobles. Beauty, money, and all kinds of imaginable temptations can assimilate genius commoners. The third point is based on the strong force deterrence of the nobles. If the protagonist is not very talented and cannot survive the deterrence of force, it will be difficult to unite the civilians. The civilians will not even have a chance to resist. This is not reality. Everyone has the same health bar. To be honest, there is a huge gap in force between the civilians and the nobles. It cannot be solved by using two guns to grab two cannons. The fourth point is the issue of ideology. If you do social science in Douluo, you must be atheistic, but there are gods in Douluo Continent. You only need an idea to clear them up. The fifth point is that the author did not write about the operating logic of Bai Douluo Continent at all. Are there so many refugees because of the basic problem of insufficient land, land annexation or insufficient taxes?

I don't think it's better to write about Huo Yuhao. It's better to be with the protagonist. He has different ideas and it's really awkward to watch. Unless you change Huo Yuhao's thoughts and look at it from a civilian perspective, one is thinking about the great revolution, and the other is thinking about the inappropriateness of love.

Dear author, your writing is very good, but you actually issued a knife. Is it really good? The child just cried to death.

Author, your writing is indeed very good, but your writing style is like Lu Xun, Dazai Osamu, Xiao Hong, etc. The prose style is mixed with criticism, which really makes people want to read it but not want to read it.

Your progress is too slow. I have taken more than ten pictures and I am still six years old.

It can only be said to be too ideal. In fantasy novels, it is inevitable that the strong should be respected. If soul masters are to abide by the law like civilians, they can only think about it.

The writing style is too childish, like a daddy

This book is very well written, but there is also another book that is still good to read - Douluo Peerless: Life Simulator

Well... I'm really sorry for posting something that has nothing to do with the novel itself. Have you ever heard of "Pillow Knife Song"? What do you think of Ximen Ren's "A prosperous age without swords and guns"?

I saw that the writing in Chapter 6 is quite good, but why do you describe the law of the jungle like this... You can change it, but this is too much. It feels like the main character is mentally disturbed.

How is this book? Is there a Shennong?