Shake Out the Unrivaled Immortality Every Day

[Please be careful if there are any spoiler-like comments] The plot is good and the progress is very fast, but the male protagonist has no sense of existence, and the development of the supporting characters has no details. After watching it for a long time, I saw that the male protagonist is stubborn, and the writing has a different effect. The female character on the bus is outrageous. According to what is written in the book, she must have sucked other men dry. It is also mentioned that this woman is not a perfect body. She later reshaped her body and then practiced double cultivation with the male protagonist. There is nothing wrong with her. She is not a heroine, but a slave, but I don't like this character.

It's very nice. It will be better if the author updates it soon.

The plot is pretty ordinary... I feel it's a bit cliche but the handling of the emotional line is really confusing. The junior sister is the fiancée of the protagonist, the second senior sister is obviously interested in the protagonist, and a female villain from the Hehuan Sect is also determined to catch the protagonist. The female evil sword fairy in the Demon Suppression Tower is also very fond of the protagonist... Then the master is a woman, the supreme elder is also a woman, and the soul in the fiancée's necklace is also a woman... After writing so much, the protagonist has no reaction at all, and is not even willing to talk to them. There is a sense of tearing 😐

Although it is a group portrait, there is no follow-up to the protagonist's interaction with him except the beginning. I feel that the protagonist is too frustrated and does not enjoy the refreshing feeling of being behind the scenes everywhere like Han Jue.

Dreaming back to ten years ago, this routine is no longer new.

If you want to cultivate immortality, you should cultivate immortality well, but you have to create a diamond-glazed body and drag it to the monk.

What kind of sect can allow all the elders to go out to slay demons, leaving only one leader to guard the house?

That Wu Dongyue is so disgusting 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢, she threatens the protagonist from the beginning, and then lives in her shadow, and then the protagonist's combat power is beyond the limit, and he is still willing to be fucked, what kind of Stockholm is this. Then one day in the world, there are thousands of people in the cave. What kind of cuckold plot does the author have some misunderstanding about the readers' sexual preferences? Don't bring your own preferences into the readers' thoughts. As someone who writes cool articles, don't you know that killing her is the right answer now? As for the background, they are nothing in the world of immortality. Even the protagonist can kill them randomly. You think it's okay to just keep growing, just find a deep mountain and old forest, leave a token and run away, just go out and look for opportunities. To put it bluntly, she was forced to give first blood to such a disgusting character, a murderous maniac, neither a virgin nor a mature woman, so why should she?

Is the master, the male protagonist, just having shit in his head? Let a foundation builder seduce the golden elixir, and not give him a life-saving talisman but a magical sword. I don't know how the male protagonist should live. It's really just relying on the protagonist's halo!

If you are good enough, you always post a lot of talent introductions. Do you think that readers don't read your plot, but only look at how you draw cards?

I would like to ask, is it treasonous for a disciple to accept a disciple on behalf of his master? Making decisions for his master before he is dead?

Can you please stop using character panels and skill names? One protagonist is not enough. Now we need to add an apprentice. . . Is there any book that writes all the names of the panel skills and the apprentice panel every time? It's every time

It was originally a very innovative book, but after I kept playing with many jokes, it turned into a bad joke.

I really hate this kind of protagonist who destroys order. After accepting a human-immortal hybrid disciple, he will definitely become an enemy of the upper world. It is too unfair to ordinary people.

As a refreshing novel, this book can be regarded as food or fairy grass, but it is a bit too novice. The plot twists are rather blunt, and the protagonist makes random predictions. It feels like useless. Can see changes in the future. Okay, I won't say any more, just keep it. Bad things happen, and I don't want to find someone or find a way to change them. Just kept waiting for something to happen. This is quite funny. There is also the conflict inside, which feels rather blunt, but if you insist on finding a reason, you can find it. The first is the sect that the demon sect wants to attack the protagonist. It had almost wiped out another sect before. The protagonist's sect should know a little bit about the strength of another sect. If you can fight, you must fight. If you can't fight, at least leave some seeds to let go, right? Of course, you can also find reasons. For example, you are already near the sect and it is too late to evacuate. Also, the realm strength inside is too weak. The level-leap challenge is more exciting. But if your opponent is a noob, it will also appear that you are not strong. Even if you keep emphasizing that your opponent is very powerful. But what you show is that your opponent is a loser. No matter how much you brag, it can't highlight the power of the protagonist. There is also a bit of inconsistency. In the front, it is said that the magic is rising and the magic is disappearing, but in the second, a magic master appears from nowhere. After almost destroying one sect, he came to destroy another sect. If we don't kill this demonic master first, we'll just have to wait to eat. It only takes a day or two for the top experts to come over? Although there is a suspicion of swaying the tiger away from the mountain. But if each sect only sends one or two people, it will be done as usual. Although the interests and demands of each sect are different. But it's not like your sect doesn't even have one or two good sects. Summary: Even though it has so many shortcomings, if you read it as a purely enjoyable article, it is still a very good source of information.

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At the beginning, I thought the main character was a female... When I saw the divination, I was intercepted by a female disciple from the "outer sect" when I was looking for my senior brother, and they entered the woods together. It felt a bit blunt and a bit unreasonable. For example, the outer sect disciple disappeared mysteriously, and there was no clear indication that law enforcement disciples were investigating. The other disciples were also written without any sense of crisis, making it seem like they were living in a peaceful era. For example, the female disciple from the outer sect could freely enter and exit the inner sect? For example, when the protagonist is intercepted in public, he does not refuse, but instead walks into the woods together? Not to mention irresistible, a senior brother is a golden elixir, let alone a sect elder? She dared to rob him in public? What's more, the protagonist knows the fate of another disciple, so he doesn't find an excuse to refuse, doesn't try his best, and waits for death? The arrangement is a bit stiff

If the female elder of the Hehuan Sect was killed directly, it would be pretty cool

Looking at the comments, no one said that this book is bad, so I'll give it a try first and wait until the book is ready before reading it.

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Now that it's over, will you write a new book?