Reborn with Supplies in a Pocket Dimension: The Cannon Fodder Awakens

Have a convenient space to leave without taking away unnecessary deposits.

The male protagonist doesn't have as many scenes as the son of the aunt next door. It might as well be said that there is no cp. It looks a bit boring.

I read about ten chapters for free, maybe because I listened, and the language seemed a bit verbose, and I kept talking about it ₍₍ (̨̡ ‾ᗣ‾ )̧̢ ₎₎

I like the space for orphans; I want to tell the author that this novel is really produced on an assembly line; the things that are insubstantial and that sister-in-law Wang either cooks and washes the dishes or delivers various things... Please communicate more with the male protagonist and say a few more words, not just who cooks and washes the dishes; the bath water... Play with that! Make up the word count!

Is this an assembly line? More than 400 chapters are still 14-15 years old

A suggestion: Can you use less of the word "then" 😒? The method used is to listen to the book. There are many "then" and "then" in a short paragraph. It feels like a primary school student stumbling to tell a story.

Oh my god, I've only read a dozen chapters and I felt like throwing up when I saw the heroine's name. . . . .

I think it's okay, so I voted for 9 recommendations. See you in two days