Big Businessman and Little Fisherman

No... It's too jumpy. Suddenly there are industries all over the world, suddenly the dog emperor dies, and suddenly there are more interactions with the male protagonist 😥 The first part was good, but later the female protagonist started to pull her hips after arriving in the capital, inconsistent, with repeated characters, and there were many typos 🤔 Moreover, the male protagonist indirectly killed the female protagonist's family, and the two ended up getting together, and the male protagonist also shirked responsibility. . . That's a bit outrageous

What the hell are you writing about? How was it developed, how was it laid out, and where was the process? How come the industry spread all over the place overnight? Isn't farming writing about the process? How to join forces with Shopkeeper Li? How did you spend so many years hiding your gender? Where have all these gone? Forget it, I'm going to abandon the article.

Wow, this is my favorite article about business and farming. Like the "War of the Rich" I have watched, it tells the story of the fishermen's life on the water, which is a different kind of farming novel. Big love❤

The days are slowly getting better.

The previous writing has always been very good and attractive, but why did the needle start to skip when it came to revenge? The most important part is just brushed off like this, without the refreshing feeling of revenge. It's really a pity. Those enemies suddenly died without confessing, so forget it. I finally became the emperor and was about to die... I didn't want to read it anymore. (The subsequent plot is really a bit redundant... It's better to write the process of revenge in a more detailed way, at least to make the book end more perfectly.

It took hundreds of oxcarts three days and three nights to transport less than half of it. It really should be charged.

Why is it that the process of seizing the throne, which should be described in detail later, is just mentioned in one sentence? 😅

I met the author of a new book again, and the reward was generous 😁😁. Invest and gain starting point coins

Nice! One update per day is too slow!

It looks good. I've finished watching it. It's just that I'm too thin. Keep growing.

The descriptions are contradictory, but you still have the strength to eat grass despite being seriously injured? The parts that should be a good transition have been hastily explained. I feel that the heroine's IQ has dropped after she recovered her daughter.

I always have to think about it for a long time after reading a book. What should I do?

The previous life of making money and making a fortune in a fisherman's family was well written, but the subsequent plot jumps very much from time to time. For example, the time span jumps five years, and the story jumps from farming and making a fortune to plotting to seize the heir. However, he is not good at plotting to seize the heir. Even the plots of how to seek revenge, how to seize the heir, and the fate of key figures such as Song Yunfei are vaguely mentioned! I suspect that the author just moved the writing outline into it. As for why the plot developed like this, what happened in the middle? Who knows! In addition, the plot is also random, and many details cannot withstand scrutiny! For example, the heroine has just arrived in Beijing, and she suddenly expresses to shopkeeper Li that she wants to kill the emperor and push the king of Qin to the throne. She asks three questions if she dares to do so. Shopkeeper Li answers firmly and her heart is surging. . . How dare you say it! What is the identity of shopkeeper Li? A businessman! Even if they have been working together for a long time in business, they are not so close that they would rebel together without knowing everything, right? Furthermore, the heroine and the Shen family's cousins ​​can recognize that King Qin is actually the heroine's second brother. Song Yunfei and the heroine's brother have been together for 5 years since they were young. He can even recognize the heroine who has only played with him once, but he can't recognize King Qin? Did I miss it while listening to the book? In general, the plot of revenge and heirloom is really hard to describe in one sentence. I suggest you just read the previous chapter on how to get rich in a fisherman's family

The first part about farming is great, but the second part is boring. Damn, the most suitable thing for you to write is about farming. Don't write about other political and political disputes. Just write pure farming articles.

The more I wrote, the more strange it became. Why did the author dislike Song Yunfei so much? He first cut off his hand, and then wrote about him in a worse and worse way.

It's wonderful, the plot constructed by the author is very rich, and it reads very smoothly. The description of the characters is just right, and the transition between the copy tasks of the article and the main tasks is natural. Book shortage, do you have any good book recommendations? In addition to this book, I am also following "The Monk Family" and read more than a thousand chapters in one go!

Is Zhou Yang the male protagonist? It's so disgusting. Can you wash away the hatred of destroying your family?

The details are vividly written, and each person's character is described by their actions. The story is not like an assembly line, written casually. Every detail is what makes the character unique. It's really beautiful!

Although I have brushed it off, this woman has been pretending to be a man for so many years. Is she really any different from the Fu Ge Mo and the Fu Ni Mo? She is stupid. Even if she takes a step back, talks about love, or gives birth to a child, even a daughter, so what, there are several sons in history who have become good emperors. Self-sacrifice.

It's very beautiful, interlocking, without moisture, it's finished, I wrote the novel with all my heart.

This Nakata is different from what I imagined

It's very beautiful. I like this kind of warm family. There is no intrigue. I felt very good after watching it. I highly recommend it.

Isn't it Song Helan who is pregnant? Where did the moon come from?

The writing was really good at the beginning, with a tight plot and a well-organized layout, and the heroine's IQ was also online. But after arriving in the capital, everything developed so strangely, and the characters' personalities and reactions were also strange. Not only the heroine, but other characters also changed from flesh-and-blood flesh-and-blood characters to thin characters. What was Chen Xiaohu's reaction after meeting Yao Ge? After King Qin recognized Yao Ge, what he silently recited in his heart was not Yao Ge but Lu Xiaosi? It's as if someone else wrote it.

It's not bad. There's a section in the middle that feels a bit redundant, but the rest is just fine and quite touching. Come on💪