Uncle Jiu: I, Taoist Master Qianhe, Specialize in Playing Peak Matches.

It doesn't feel like a monk at all, and the fighting scenes are written stiffly. Even if you write according to the original work, it is better than imposing your own drama.

The first royal zombie is not afraid of thunder, the second lightning running thunder fist can only be learned by the head of Maoshan

We must know that the supernatural world has the ability to seize bodies and the spirits of the underworld. We must know that practitioners can reflect on their own bodies and view memories, and that everyone who practices the secrets of the sect has a record. Do you think that everyone else is a fool? The personalities of the characters before and after are incompatible

Taoist priest Qianhe: "How to fight?"

He possesses the magical power of Vajra and is indestructible, but he is hugged by an ordinary person, and he is also a eunuch. Your magic power is probably fake.

It's less than five chapters, and there are a lot of laxities, so I'll just take it as a nitpick. It costs 800 points to activate Thunder Fist, 1000 for you, half of it will be lost after activation. It is also said that there is no memory of Qianzuru before, so how can he go to the four eyes to salute? Needless to say, the lid of the golden coffin is heavy. I asked my apprentice to tie it with a rope and try to suppress it. It was thrown away and said that it was wet. I didn't believe that Uncle Jiu could hold it down.                                                                                                                                                                                                                           . Even an ordinary person can't get away? He was also beaten away by zombies. Also, just push the plot bluntly? If you change the plot, you won't be able to write it? There is the indestructible magic power of King Kong, there is lightning and thunder fist, and I also watch the guards beating zombies and let the zombies suck people's blood, but I don't hit them immediately. They will also be tricked by ordinary people, beaten, etc.

So far, the new book has 20,000 words and has been collected by 100 people. Brothers, you can start reading. The completion rate of the starting point is very important now. It is easy to die if you keep books.

Stop writing. Disgusting people have a way of affecting the image of Master Qianhe.

Can't draw symbols? Don't know how to ask God? Isn't this selling dog meat over sheep's heads?

Some of the previous content has been changed. If you are interested, you can go back and take a look. There are not many changes.

I have been reading the suggestions or opinions given by many book friends. Some of them have been very inspiring to me, and they have also made me see my own shortcomings. I am grateful to the book friends for their corrections. At the same time, the author is a newbie, and there are still many people reading it every day. I am really scared and ashamed. If I were chasing novels and saw that the author updated them every day, I would have stopped chasing them a long time ago. Thanks to my book friends for your love, thank you. I wish all book friends good health and thank you for your support

The writing is okay, but it's a pity that I entered the palace. Fortunately, I only entered the palace now. If I wrote more than half of it, I would be really upset.

The topic selection was good, but it's a pity that the system was not written well and slipped away.

Good brothers, let's get high!

Feeding fees are high! The chapters are too few and not enough to read

This is entering the palace! What a waste of so many of my recommendation votes

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The main character is so ugly that I don't feel like I can relate to him

Chapter 3 left me confused. They had temporarily restrained the zombies, but he was still watching? He waited until the zombies were killed and sucked before taking action, followed by the words "Don't wait to die without saving them." Moreover, Taoist priest Qianhe is already here, but where is Gu Li still here? Either you create a new character, or you call him Taoist priest Chizuru.

Only one update a day. At this speed, I am really afraid that you will enter the palace 😭

Why do you like Vajra so much? It's either Vajra's magic or that Vajra's magic. It always sounds to me like the Buddhist exercises are too weird.

It broke, I didn't even notice it, the writing is good, why did the author become a eunuch?

How could anyone say they were afraid of thunder in broad daylight? It was sunny in the movie. It was too fake.

That said, I'll just say a little bit and don't want to say much else. The Taoist priests of the Shangqing sect did not think twice. Instead, they had an extra copy of the Diamond Sutra and the Vajra Indestructible Magic Art. They were speechless. The acupoints and acupoints all over their bodies were full of gods. Didn't they smell good?

It is recommended that the protagonist should not speak too eloquently or have too many modern colloquialisms, and also pay attention to the character design. Chizuru is not good at her age and looks, so she either does not write emotional scenes, and if she does, she should not write the young female character in the movie who is too nymphomaniac.

Looking at this introduction, it seems that it is difficult to deal with Lightning Thunder Fist, and I don't want to read it.

Give the Great Return Pill directly to others. So generous,

Chapter 54 is the eunuch, it's very fast 🤭

To be honest, this book is really good, and the preliminary preparation is also very good. Although the process is relatively fast, from the perspective of rewards, it is also very good, which is a pity! That's it for eunuchs.

Just copy the movie, why not watch the movie?