I Am the Invincible Angel!

First of all, the author is awesome. With 500,000 words in a single game, I am ashamed of myself! Besides, you have already written so many words. In fact, it is not recommended to make too many revisions. The story has already been formed, and changes will destroy your subsequent layout. It is recommended that you finish writing this book and make revisions for the next book. The traditional fantasy opening, the story is slowly peeled away, the world view, system, characters... But it seems that the traditional opening is no longer suitable for today's online literature world, I can only love it. The screen switching in the first chapter is a bit frequent. I think once is enough. Too many will cause drama. After all, this is text, not pictures. There are not many elements in the first few chapters, which are about spreading the world view, but there is no particularly interesting world view setting. It is really unattractive to focus on describing these. People nowadays like fast pace. You should be able to notice some of it after writing so many words. That's about it, the level is limited

Protagonist Xu Tianlan

Lin Li

Sisi Si

Anna Liu

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