The Heavens Begin with the Ape Strike Technique

It was written earlier that the scholar went down the mountain. The direction of the story. Interfering with the plot is considered normal. The writing is very simple. Abbreviated (commonly) as Bai Wen. The story direction is basically not explosive. The whole process was like running water. Fills in some of the film's regrettable shortcomings. I think the author simply didn't understand that the Taoist priest came down the mountain just for the sake of writing. The Taoist Comes Down the Mountain is a movie that tells a lot about the philosophy of life But in the novel, it can be said that the previous plot direction is not bad. From where the ape attack technique begins, he can do whatever he wants. Put your mind aside completely and write whatever you want. Not mentioned before. The summary is that the writing is relatively clear And the second world. That's outrageous. I have read all the myths. Very classic. Everyone is familiar with Yi Xiaochuan. Who is Yi Xiaochuan in the plot? Is a playboy. Family divorce. Parents are busy. Lacking the love of his parents makes him a libertine. Not rebellious. But aside from these, Yi Xiaochuan is very kind. Very smart. Very knowledgeable about history. But look at what Yi Xiaochuan has been doing from beginning to end. How he views the things around him. He is like a historical visitor. He is a non-interfering and non-estranged character in everything. His love. His righteousness. They are all outside history. Do you think a person who studies the atmosphere of historical inheritance does not understand history? If he uses these perspectives. Help Xiang Yu. Liu Bang. Can't create an ideal world? . Can't be unified? He knows that he cannot change history. If he changes too much history, he will never be able to go back. The wheel of history will continue to move forward with his traces, directly overwriting its original history, and he will no longer be the same Yi Xiaochuan when he goes back. I really don't understand what is written in the novel. I dare to disagree. It ruins all three views. Yi Xiaochuan's description is like a fool. The characters in the plot have no thoughts of their own. It is simply incoherent. They do whatever they want. I read this book at the beginning and it was very promising. From the end, I can only say that it is self-destructing the Great Wall. Finished with flowers🎉

There are not many chapters at the moment, only about twenty chapters. Readers have already seen the latest chapters. Let me tell you my current opinions: First of all, the author has ideas. The first world "Taoist Descending the Mountain" is very well written. Not only does it describe the protagonist's personal personality, methods of conduct, and how to deal with the world, but he also learned the "ape attack technique" through his own intelligence and ability and achieved self-improvement. It can be said that this "copy" world is very successful. However, the second world starts to get a little weird. The main task of the protagonist is to "obtain" a long life and lay the foundation for future self-growth. But why would you interfere with "Yi Xiaochuan"? He can do whatever he likes. You only need to save the "Lv Gong" family, do what you can, and leave. But the protagonist deliberately approaches the "Lv sisters" and "wants them all", and also secretly murders Liu Bang. Why? The character begins to collapse. Do you want to dominate the world? Your main plot is to improve yourself, for the "elixir". Why does the protagonist become so violent as soon as you enter the "mythical" world? What's this? "Feeling warm and lustful"? Do you think you have to be self-centered when you feel you have power? Where did this go with the humble, serious protagonist of the first world? The hostility soared rapidly, and the character began to collapse! If you raise it, the protagonist I like is even more intelligent, not like Long Aotian.

Now let's talk about the setting of force. The protagonist is still in Kung Fu, so he knows the force value of the best in the world. Then Qing Yunian's force value was determined for others. The same is true for Fengyun. No one saw it, so he told people that he was the great master of the golden elixir period. Who told you? Just watch the TV series and comics. Graphic novels stipulated martial arts levels for people. They didn't even see humans, gods, demons, and dragons, so they said they were at the highest golden elixir stage. Then when they got to Nascent Soul, they said they could run away from the transformed gods. You've seen transformed gods, and they used low levels to guess the strength values of high levels, and they also forcibly classified the world's martial arts values into levels. How do you calculate other people's levels? Is it from reading TV novels and comics? If you have a system to grade the world, you can calculate the strength of the person with the highest strength value. You can also judge the strength of other people based on the gap between the first and second place in the original work. You just came in and you confirmed your strength without anyone seeing you. Who told you?

The mythical elixir of life is useless once it leaves that world, unless you move the heavenly star away

I remember that the setting seems to be that the Ape Attack Technique is a foundation-stirring technique.

The writing style is still average for novices, and the shortcomings are also obvious, that is, it has a bit of a running account flavor, but it is not very heavy, and it is still acceptable. If you write more and practice your writing, I believe it will be good.

I remember a Taoist saying in Xia Shan, the ape attack technique is a matter of two people 😁

Why do some people have double standards? In the myth, I feel sorry for and angry with Yi Xiaochuan, Gao Yao, the Lu Fei sisters, Xiao Yue, Xiang Yu, etc., And I wish I could change their endings right away. Okay, the author wrote that after traveling through time with the elixir of life and various pitfalls in the original work, a person will change his past dissatisfaction, especially if this person still has the ability to change. I think the second one is modern people's idea of ​​freedom and ease in movies and TV dramas. If you want to, just do it. If you don't want to, just walk away. In modern times, the reason why you think about it is because life binds you. When you have such extraordinary opportunities and abilities, then what you think about is my goal, immortality? Is immortality without enjoying the process called immortality?

Go against the boss lady? Just tell me to add it to my collection

The first world is very well written. The main plot and protagonist are obvious. But the second world feels very confusing. I will think about this and that later. Suddenly I did this thing again, and then that thing, and it felt a bit confusing.

Let me give you a reference Refining Qi and Transforming Qi: "Guide the spiritual energy between heaven and earth into the body, cleanse the muscles and cut the marrow, expel impurities from the body, open the mysterious door of heaven and earth, embark on the path of cultivation, and have a life span of 200 years." Refining Qi and transforming into God. : "Spiritual energy circulates around the sky, penetrating the muscles, veins, and acupoints of the body. The soul transforms into a divine fetus, possesses divine consciousness, and has a life span of 500 years." . " Lianxu Hedao: "The divine fetus turns into a soul, and with a single thought, it can enter the state of unity between heaven and man, and has a life span of 5,000 years. " Earth Immortal: "Survived the heavenly tribulation, transformed into an immortal, and has a life span of 10,000 years. Lifespan. " Heavenly Immortal: "Condensing the five qi in the chest, it can go up to the sky and the sea, and can withstand the strong winds outside the sky, and has a life span of 50,000 years." True Immortal: "Condensing the essence, qi, and spirit, the three flowers gather at the top, and it has 900 years. 00 Years of life. " Xuanxian: "Coordinate the five qi in the chest, connect the three flowers on the top, and cycle endlessly, and have a life span of one era, and one era has 129,600 years." Jinxian: "Survive three disasters and nine. As long as the world is not destroyed or killed by the powerful ones above Jinxian, Taiyi Jinxian: "Understand the laws of the great road and mobilize the power of heaven and earth to support yourself when facing the enemy." Daluo Jinxian: "Jump out of the river of destiny, transcend all time and space, and be free and at ease forever." Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian: "There are three ways, the first way: open up a world; the second way: practice Hongjun ancestor to create The method of killing three corpses; the third method: becoming a saint through merit. " Hunyuan Wuji Luo Jinxian: "Controlling a great path, Hunyuan Wuji Luo Jinxian is at the same level as the Dao of Heaven in the Great Thousand Worlds." Before ancestor Hongjun created the method of killing three corpses, there was no quasi-sage. Practicing the method of killing three corpses requires innate spiritual treasures or innate treasures. Some Daluo Jinxian who do not have innate spiritual treasures or innate treasures cannot practice the method of killing three corpses. It is not that they cannot defeat the quasi-sages. For example, the twelve ancestral witches of the Wu Clan cannot practice the method of killing three corpses, but they can be evenly matched with the quasi-sages of the demon clan. There should be secret methods to enhance their combat power.

Reading your book is so boring. The protagonist is not a pornographic character. It's boring if you can't pretend to be x. It makes me sleepy.

It feels okay. The main character is just too studly. Always doing it with his apprentice.

If you don't accept girls, why are you writing so many interactions?

Don't read this book with your brain, otherwise you will find that many places are unreasonable.

I suggest you divide it into volumes, otherwise you won't even know which world it is about.

The author should at least read the comments. Why do so many people point out some bad things but don't correct them? ... I will revise it to make it read more smoothly. Now it gets stuck every now and then...

The potential value of the setting of the online article author is too low, and you can't do anything,

Ape attack technique? Could it be a Taoist priest coming down the mountain?

Although I stopped watching after seeing the end of the storm, the mortal world's martial arts value is very low. The performance of the protagonist can make a mortal Nascent Soul transform into a god in Liaozhai.

The protagonist said that he has a very high IQ, so he turned around and unloaded the gunpowder from the bullet by hand, and also made the bullet stimulating and reloading.

It's pretty good at the front, but the writing starts to fall apart at the back where the white snake is.

Covering the sky, swallowing,... A misty journey

The author is great, I can't write it well, so don't be too hard on me.

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You update too little every day, not enough to read

Are there any updates for the Chinese New Year? Actually, I'm just asking casually. You haven't updated me in normal times, and there's no hope for you during the New Year.

It's amazing, there are more updates today. Tell me loudly, did you pick up the lottery ticket?

I stopped watching Zhuxian after seeing it, but I didn't expect it to be discontinued.

Come on, author