Travel Through the Game World of Japan's Warring States Period

Chapter 3 is to persuade you to quit. If you can't do something in the novel, don't express your thoughts and bring in your personal opinions. And do you regard the protagonist's tribe as human beings? Are the soldiers at the bottom the same ethnic group? You don't even have blood identity, how can you expect cultural identity? The scholar-bureaucrats of the Ming Dynasty look at you the same way you look at NPCs.

Rewind quickly after reading the first chapter. The scene has already been imagined. Where are your dialogues? What about psychology? Just write a bunch of random words, where are your year, the year number in Arabic numerals, and the day and month? What about the weather? I wrote for a long time and no one spoke. The beginning was beeping. If it were someone else, who would know what you were writing?

After seeing Chapter 133, I was persuaded to quit. In fact, I can accept what everyone said earlier about the introduction of the game to persuade people to quit. After all, there are too few books about the Japanese Warring States Period, so some shortcomings are acceptable. But when I saw Chapter 133, which was considered to be the kidnapping and abduction of Oda City and Ningning who were about 13 years old, I vomited. Speaking of heights, the protagonist is pictured with the luck and beauty that Oda City can bring. Do you like her? You have a greedy body, you are despicable. Moreover, after kidnapping people from their homes, the subsequent handling is not good. It is impossible for Aichi and Ningning to fall in love without contacting Oda Nobunaga. Once exposed, what is the early communication with Oda Nobunaga? Are they enemies? What would the retainers think of the protagonist. No matter how you look at it, the kidnapping and abduction of Oda City is a bomb. I originally thought that it was possible to conquer Japan through a domineering line of conquest similar to Cao Cao's, recruiting talents, and developing internal affairs. It was possible to conquer the world, but Oda City had to be kidnapped.

Is it a harem? 😏 Japanese, if not a harem it always feels wrong 😂

I hope that in the future the plot will not involve Ming and Dongfang, and just use it as a background board.

Come over and enjoy some incense. Is anyone with you? 👀👀👀

This is not a novel, this is a game introduction, right?

I stopped writing on December 25th. Was it a eunuch or something? I just read Chapter 150 and I just got into the mood. I don't know if I should continue? Otherwise, if the climax section is cut off later, it will be even more unbearable.

The writing is very good, comparable to the leader's Warring States Against the Wind. It's just that the beginning is a bit messy and procrastinating. The beginning is before the expedition, followed by the introduction of game information and before time travel, and it takes 4 to 5 chapters. It's easy for casual people to get lost in it, and they won't be able to appreciate the wonderful things that follow

Why aren't the game background and early stages of time travel included in the prologue? If you don't want to read it, put it in the prologue, and it won't affect the plot. You're too verbose.

I came over to offer incense, and sure enough, there was still nothing.

Many of the battles and tactics used in Black Iron Glory are genius and refreshing. They are often unexpected and reasonable, which is very rare. I hope this book is as exciting as this

I took a look at the news. Today I was the apprentice of Siheyuan Happy Life. Yesterday, Siheyuan was unsystematic. I was really convinced. I was so convinced that I wanted to laugh. It was really: I don't want to write anymore, I want Happy Life! Laugh to Death🤔

Can the author explain, why are you planning to build a laboratory when you have 10,000 armaments and 5,000 to build roads? You can ask for 8,000 for an enlightenment education? What did it take to teach a group of children during the Warring States Period? It was just food, accommodation and some teaching materials. Eight thousand guan?

The author should still be there, right?

You came alive and you finished the last book.

The golden chapters at the beginning, Chapter 7, introduce your b-game background. It's amazing that this rhythm can be written well. In ancient virtual online game writing, I have never seen anyone spending 10,000 words on how to develop a game. Does your writing this bunch of things help the subsequent plot in any way? The content of Chapter 7 can be summarized in one sentence. Traveling to Taige Dezhizhuan, the attributes have been changed to 100. Do I need you to write Chapter 7?

It has been five days, and the donkeys in the production team have not dared to rest like this.

Let's put some fragrance on it. It's actually quite nice. I don't know why it's gone.

I want to read it, but I don't want to leave. No one is forcing you to read it, especially since it has more than 150 chapters and it's free. Having said that, the author's writing is generally good. Although it is about a very niche Japanese Warring States Period, it is really valuable for those who like this kind of thing. If you don't like it, can you please leave? Don't disturb us readers who like this genre, okay????

I don't understand. I can't even understand the history of my own country, let alone Japan's. There are really no book lovers who want to study Japanese history, right?

Don't let the author die, I like your book very much 😭