Time Travel, I Will Die for the Bad Woman!

The writing is okay, but some parts are too boring to read.

I personally think it's good, but there are some areas that deserve improvement.

How can I put it, it doesn't feel sublime enough, I want to watch Denji become Miss Kaori🐶, but in the end, I can't defeat Makima with love in the final battle:(

No matter how you look at it, this protagonist is a negative example. He is too strict with the original plot and ignores some details. Of course, the author may have written this to write about the growth of the protagonist later and make the plot ups and downs. But after watching it too much, I feel really stupid

This is the first time a newbie writes, so don't do it, brothers. There will definitely be some poisonous points. I will pay attention to them later and be tolerant, okay? 🥺 In addition, you are welcome to give your opinions in the comment area. I will definitely not be polite if you criticize me.

The protagonist is constantly being deflated. The stronger ones are deflated in terms of force, and the weaker ones are deflated in intelligence. Ordinary people can also disgust the protagonist, and he has to rely on others to stand up. The more I watch, the more frustrated I become.

Death can't be eliminated. It's ridiculous that you think you can control it.

It's probably because the title of the book doesn't have a chainsaw man in it. If the title had a chainsaw man in front of it: , more readers would probably read it.

Author. . . . You'd better stop writing about love. The water in this field is too deep and you really can't grasp it.

I've been looking for a book by Chainsaw Man for a long time but I haven't found any good ones. It's well written. Come on.

The writing is much better than the other chainsaw guys at the starting point.

Keep at it brother, you will definitely make it🔥

It feels like there aren't many people there, mainly because the first world is too niche, so I'll add a bookshelf and wait for the next world.

It's very well written, why is there no one here?

It feels better than that electric giant I have two demons

Before I started, I read the comments and said that I would only stick to the original plot. After reading it, I found that this is not entirely correct. The author still has something. In addition, the system is also the finishing touch. Most of the abilities given to the protagonist are the abilities of this world (Devil Contract). It not only satisfies our various powerful fantasies about the protagonist set, but also does not create a sense of separation from the world view. It is like traveling through the world of Chainsaw Man and you give me the entire Yasuo character card. Then I will definitely not be able to stand it. Well written, come on!

You're not suitable for writing a book, forget it

I can't stand it, my IQ is worrying

KouKou group 766172844 welcomes torture of humble authors

It's over! I feel that the ending is still a bit rushed. I watch it every day at around 9 o'clock. The overall feeling is quite good 👏👏👏

It was good in the early and middle stages, but it became more and more chaotic in the later stages.

Why is Chapter Seventy-Nine missing? Can the author post it again?😟

The content of this novel best meets my requirements. Although it is a bit messy, it is considered good among the few Ineffable Chainsaw Man fanfics I have read.