My Martial Arts Practice Depends on Adding Points

The writing is good, the protagonist kills decisively and smoothly, which is good! However, plot conflicts and characters need to be foreshadowed so that they look reasonable.

Su Qing sold your information and asked others to kill you. If you don't kill her, forget it. She doesn't take it to heart at all. Is the three views of dog licking so terrifying? Don't you have any hatred at all? When will Qidian create a dog-licking label so that I can avoid it? It's disgusting to see this kind of thing.

The conflict plot is too rigid. I suggest changing it. After all, it has to be logical. Look how long it took for the protagonist to have a golden finger. How many conflicts occurred and how many people were killed? It's not normal for a city like this to have thousands of people die every day. How many people has the protagonist offended? It would be weird if someone didn't hit you with missiles if you exposed them. Killing people, destroying corpses and cleaning up traces was okay in the early stage, but it got really weird later. Let's talk about the murder in the warehouse. You set a fire when you couldn't leave after killing so many people? When others look at it, their sword wounds are terrible. There are definitely only a few masters who can kill so many people with their swords. Next time I find that this kind of damage occurs more often, I contact the protagonist and immediately lock the protagonist.

After reading the first chapter, it was extremely toxic. . . Is it okay to add a little logic? Just don't add it at all.

I feel that various plots are very stiff, without a sense of flow, many details are not written, and there is no sense of gradually getting stronger.

When it comes to men, she kills decisively, but when it comes to Su Qing, she starts to complain. The woman has sold the protagonist, and the protagonist has not killed her immediately.

The plot is weird, as if a part is missing

Looking for further reading! Thank you Coco!

Don't kill women, that's awesome

I just like the protagonist who kills decisively, when to kill Su Qing.

It feels weird. The conflicts are all so inexplicable. For a trivial matter, the villain will kill people and silence them at every turn.

It's just that interpersonal relationships are quite strange😓

The writing is very good, why do some people say it is messy? Well, it still feels very immersive. Looking forward to the next development. Come on. A backhand wave. Favorite vote.

It's okay to pass the time without thinking, but I couldn't stand the second chapter. A social animal before time travel, a student after time travel. He was kicked, and a ring that didn't belong to him was taken away, and he was about to kill someone, and his inner activities were completely calm, and he threw the body quickly.

This kind of extreme writing is pretty cool. Antiques, added points, secret martial arts, and the background of the Republic of China. Come on.

The author couldn't bear the scolding and immediately eunuched him. Do whatever you like.

Author, don't you write a few more pictures? You have been recommended!

If you don't travel through time, there won't be so many things. Once you travel through time, one chapter will do one thing. It's so speechless and boring.