My Dream Can Kill Monsters and Become Stronger

Not bad, tastes great

It is recommended not to write emotional dramas. In many similar books, the emotional dramas are not well written and the entire book is ruined. People who come to read your book do not come to read your book for the emotional dramas. It is important to know the priorities and use strengths and avoid weaknesses. If you don't want to write a eunuch protagonist, you can also add some sex friends and the like, and then let the woman not appear behind you. Don't let the woman solve the problem for the protagonist in order to expand the plot. This will only make people impatient to read your novel, and what's more, the girl is always in charge. With a twist of his waist, the protagonist Bai Ya had to stop writing such a disgusting plot. You are the only one writing this novel, but readers have many novels to choose from. If you are not happy with it, you can read other novels, but you can't gain more readers.

Childish, very childish plot, very childish dialogue, especially killing gangsters casually, joining the Sanyuanhui, plot, dialogue, completely childish, not as good as a primary school student's composition,

Briefly sort out the realms that appear in the book and the specific physical attributes of each realm. Ordinary people: Each value is around 1 Extreme One: Strength, agility, and physical fitness have one of above 1.8 Limit Breaker: One of the three values ​​has reached above 2.0 Extraordinary: The value is unknown, awakening its own characteristics.

An organization that you don't know the details invited you and you joined immediately. I really can't stand this kind of protagonist.

No! Author, you must have common sense. The triad part is too buggy and lacks common sense. Then a lot of people abandoned the book. If someone asks you to join a club, just join it. Don't be afraid of joining a cult or pyramid scheme, normal people wouldn't do that. And there is also a comment limit, which will make you wonder where you went wrong.

You don't know why you suddenly agreed to join the Sanyuanhui without even making a transition. An organization you don't understand asked you to join and you joined right away? ? I've lost my mind. The plot twist is abrupt and just for the sake of advancement. I'm confused.

The writing style is too immature, the plot is too embarrassing, and the plot is too watery. I guess I don't even have an outline. It should be cut. Someone can give me a click while cutting.

This book is useless. I stopped reading it after entering the other world.

Can the parents of the main character even adopt adults aged 18 or 9?

It's too white, but it's okay to read as a mindless novel

Please read it! Please read it! Please read it! Say important things three times!

Emotional scenes are embarrassing to me... If you really can't write them, try not to write them. It's too uncomfortable to watch. Just follow Yintian Shenyin's example and just have no heroine or try to write as little emotional interactions as possible. At least the perception will be improved by a third. The rest is a matter of writing skills. It's a bit immature and the plot twists and turns are connected. It's also quite blunt. The author can try to slowly build up the details of the world view, the development of the power system, and the refinement of other supporting characters to downplay the emotional interaction between the protagonist and the female character. For now, I will wait and see. I was so embarrassed by the emotional drama that I didn't have the heart to read anymore. I wish the author will get better as he writes more.

Say it. After entering the inner world, it became more and more boring. It used to be a bit interesting in the outer world, but now the inner world is a bit routine, and you can roughly guess the plot behind it, which is quite boring.

You have to save points, you have to have a turn-based system, you have to add more points when you are almost exhausted. Do you think there are too many readers who support the genuine version?

After reading Chapter 50, there is no main line between the real world and the dream world. The plot arrangement is also fragmented. The behavior of many supporting characters seems a bit illogical. This is not to say that there is no logic in writing novels. I quite like the subject matter of the novel itself, but this one is not as good as other books with the same theme. The author still needs to hone his writing skills.

Almost all of them have been ordered, and the latest two have not been ordered. To be honest, they look okay, but the author has dug too many holes and left them unfilled. The pace is very fast. The more than 200 chapters now have almost nothing to do with the title of the book. I won't talk about the inexplicable relationship with my parents. I only wrote about a few places in the world. It doesn't matter, I described a few battles. Take the Misty Forest as an example. I dug a hole but didn't fill it in (maybe I will fill it in later, but I can't stand it anymore). The Eagle Demon was still something, and I didn't say anything about it later. After solving the daughter of the high-level Immortal, the Sanyuanhui who stayed in the Misty City ignored it. In the end, I simply wrote that I was the creator of dreams, and then wrote about other worlds. It felt completely like I was just trying to get some money and run away.

Fighting is like a turn-based system. Every time you fight, you have to vomit blood. It's okay to save points for emergencies, but why keep so many points just to add points temporarily for the pleasure of being abused?

Strength and agility are a bit redundant in reality. Just one constitution is enough. If you have a good constitution, you can have everything. After all, whether it is strength or agility, you must have a good constitution to develop it. If you have a bad constitution, then strength will come from it.

It's not good. You're so screwed up and you're always on the verge of death. Are you going to throw yourself into the street?

The protagonist is a rich second generation, and I don't have a sense of immersion in the moment. I say goodbye.

After defeating the controller, he hurriedly ran to Wang's house and was beaten until he vomited blood, drank a cup of tea and left. What kind of operation was this? The protagonist can also summon two controllers and even run away to get beaten in vain.

Um, I thought it was interesting before. When I saw what was written about the inner world, I immediately lost the desire to read any more. It's not like you can't level up in the surface world because of the enhancement points in your dream. You have to create an inner world to forcibly withdraw readers.

Why did you keep the points and not add them? You beat me to death before you remembered to add them.

Lin Zhenghong is 20 years old this year. How can he have girlfriends that he can't count with both hands? The biggest advantage of binary is that a single digit has only two states: 0 or 1. In this way, we can express it by just contracting and extending our fingers. In this way, we usually have 10 fingers, which can represent a 10-digit binary number, which is equal to 1023. And if your fingers are flexible enough, you can count to 50,000+ (∞∞), which means that he changes to 200+ girlfriends a day! (I really like Kong. I can't stand it if the system costs 0.7 Points for one attribute point. So why not just 0.3)

After seeing the other world, I don't want to see it anymore. It's not interesting anymore.

The inexplicable breakup with parents

I won't mention the advantages. Let's talk about the disadvantages: the hook is too big, the attribute points are already incredible, and they are so easy to obtain. After becoming an extraordinary, you can summon and kill monsters, not only in reality, but also in dreams. The summoned monsters can also get attribute points by killing monsters, which is outrageous. You just give it to them for nothing. There is no climax part in the writing method of running account, so it cannot be included at all.

After reading more than 300 chapters, the author made the protagonist look like a retard. By the time he has reached more than 300 chapters, he has never used weapons or armor. His opponents have armor and weapons, and they all rely on physical resistance. The most important thing is that the aliens fight more and less, and the human race has no strategy and relies on head-on fights. The top management of the human race is also mentally retarded. Suddenly, an immortal comes and dies for the human race. Do you think it is sublimated by writing like this? I just think the writing is stiff