I, There Is an Inn That Is Weird

After only a few chapters of Clam Girl came out, the impression was very poor 1. Since the protagonist has branded Clam Girl as a hard-working and heartfelt tool, it would be superfluous to engage in so many psychological activities. 2. One of the weirdest aspects of the protagonist is that as a weirdo, the protagonist treats everyone equally and is indifferent to emotions. The protagonist's emotions have changed too much in the chapters since the release of Clam Girl. He looks like an ordinary person, not weird at all. Is it normal for him to have a temper? Think about it yourself, and use it as ingredients in the pot instead of letting the other party leave tears and the protagonist will go over to comfort and reassure you, looking like an ordinary person with some ability. In general, it is better to find a so-called clam girl than to find a weird and awesome waiter. Then there will be a bunch of waiters in the store who are all powerful and weird, which looks okay and can also give customers a sense of oppression. A clam girl has no use except to look good. However, who comes to this weird inn to look at beauties.

The first chapter can be written like this, with a lot of language errors, tediousness, and weak character descriptions. I don't know how to continue reading. 1. Night had fallen early, and dark clouds secretly shrouded Luoshui City during the night. The silver frost brought by the full moon did not appear at all. (The night has fallen early, dark clouds are shrouded, and the full moon has not yet lit up. The description of the scenery sets off the hasty feeling of the characters' escape, and also sets up the weird atmosphere for the appearance of the weird protagonist. It is okay, but the use of early/sneaky refrains greatly weakens this feeling. , This is because the silver frost brought by the full moon did not appear at all - two predicates in one sentence, a bad sentence) 2. Only the doors and windows blown by the strong wind kept making "bang bang" sounds, and the movement before the wind and rain was disturbing the peaceful sleeping people in the city. (Doors and windows blown by the strong wind, otherwise it is a language disorder. The movement before the wind and rain/disturbing the people sleeping peacefully is too pale and weak. And you are from an ancient background, not the people but the common people) 3. Although she carries a long sword in her left hand, she should not be an ordinary weak woman, but the long sword in her hand now does not bring her any safety. (It brings a sense of security psychologically. It brings safety when the characters come into direct contact. Instead of carrying a long sword, it should be held and held. She is not an ordinary weak woman, but a different kind of weak woman? Another logical problem) 4. "And considering how much the family attaches importance to the things we carry, we will definitely rush here as fast as possible. I expect it will arrive tomorrow." (Quote) Sick, this sentence ends with..., Definitely..., Lacking a subject, who will definitely rush here? And not at a high speed, but at a high speed/get) 5. After calming down a little, Yan Yuxiu supported the injured brother in his left arm, and the two began to walk along the street to find a suitable hiding place. Now they would be safe as long as they spent the night. (As long as you spend tonight, you will be safe. Now / spend tonight /, that's it, a logical syntax problem in timing) 6. It is now midnight, and all the shops that are still open in Luoshui City, except for the Fireworks and Wine Alley in the west of the city, have basically closed to thank customers. (Midnight at midnight? It's almost midnight) 7. "There is an inn with a really interesting name, and it seems to be different from ordinary inns." (Escape is also interesting and interesting, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger? This woman was panicking before, but now she is in this mood and is joking?!) 8. In no time, the door opened with a creaking sound, and a young man with sword-like eyebrows and starry eyes, black and white eyes that were somewhat mysterious, and wearing a black brocade dress appeared in front of them. (Sword eyebrows and starry eyes are an old adjective; eyes that are black and white are pure nonsense, eyes that are not black and white are directly weird; there is a bit of mystery in their eyes. Whose eyes can reveal mystery? Is it logical? Xuan is black, Xuan is black, and the language is wrong.) 9. "But this girl is quite cool-looking, hand over the baggage you carry, and let the brothers have fun. , Maybe I will let you live. "Yes, hehe." (The gangster's teasing language is weak, and the younger brother's words are missing) 10. "Ahem, fighting is prohibited in your inn." (How can you treat the protagonist as a transparent person in such a weird inn? What's the reminder? And what is your inn? Are there many inns? It's another language problem)

It's so boring, I thought it was a weird stream, but I didn't expect it to be a show of pretending to slap Long Aotian in the face to save the beautiful Virgin Mary.

I feel that the writing is very unique. It is normal for a new book to have some shortcomings. Other readers should stop criticizing the author and let the author finish the work.

It's interesting at the beginning, but boring later on. The only interesting thing is that the protagonist is inhuman, but the author wants to become human later on. The protagonist's tendency towards the characters is too obvious, out of character

Looking for some ideas. If you have any ideas about monsters, you can leave your names, abilities, and detailed introduction What are the effects of cooking with monsters, dark appearance, and good taste? You can write them down. If they are good, you can borrow them

I support creative ideas, they are much better than those systematic novels.

It has started to fall apart, and it feels the same from now on.

I came from an old book, Shepherd Bee's Fairy Path, which is very good, but it's a pity. I'll keep up the good work with this one, so go for it!

Although you want to set up Clam Girl, but looking at it all the way, the advantages of women are not reflected in her at all, and the shortcomings are vividly reflected, which sums up a very disgusting character.

There is no weird look, I feel like a boy delivering treasures

Hello author, this is not how Huan Fei Yan Shou is used Huan Fei Yan Shou means that each has its own good points...

The ideas are clear and interesting, and they are beautiful to look at. However, by chapter 30, I became a little bit uninterested, because there were always people coming to the inn, thinking it was magical, and their ability to eat food improved. This routine cycle. After watching it two or three times, the sense of amazement and pleasure is gone. The protagonist is like a weapon spirit. Most of the novels about the spirit spirit have the problem of repeating the same routines and slowly losing readers, including "I Am a Magic Sword". I think you can refer to it. I am an alchemy furnace, and I also write about weapon spirits, but I remember that the routines are not repeated, and the results are also good.

Author, you added too many modern elements later. You can't read it, so you can only read it for entertainment. Great masters write about ancient times and ghosts, but they don't add modern elements. You are a lot lower than the great masters. Hotels, refrigerators, air conditioners, electric lights, high heels, rely on writing cannons, airplanes, tanks, and become YY novels.

Is such an interesting novel completely unfinished? You know you can still write hundreds of chapters.

The biggest taboo in writing about weird genres is to make the protagonist look like an ordinary living person. This book just hit the street. It's such a pity.

This author seems to be someone who often digs holes instead of filling them, so he left.

It's very interesting. Why doesn't the author stop updating? Trafford has more than 3,000 chapters and is still updating, and there's no end in sight. You can at least write about 5 million words.

I'm speechless. I haven't even read the book yet, so it was taken off the shelves. Sure enough, the first level is really unreliable...

Sure enough, I spent money to watch half of it, but it changed in the end. The main limitations were too small, and I couldn't write anything. It was repeated later. I felt that there was no outline at all. Many people followed it.

The beginning of this book is too hasty, and it does not introduce the origin and purpose of Youjian Inn. It only talks about grabbing the source, but it can actually be written better.

It sucks, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

You can write to a place to detect the copy, and get rewards for clearing the copy. Realistically help others get hidden rewards. You can write a lot, but you can write less at a fixed location in an inn.

Chao Yu was a good man, and his good character was rewarded by God. As soon as Chao Yan opened his eyes, he found himself sitting in a dense old forest, with a bowl in his left hand and a handful of dates in his right hand. There is wine in the bowl. Take a sip. It's sweet and has a hint of malt. I have a date in my hand. Eat one. It is crunchy and the flesh is huge and plump. "Don't drink it, there is sweat medicine in this wine!" What? But I just drank it! Asshole! Why didn't you tell me earlier? Chao Yan scratched his throat and retched, but that didn't work. He tried to induce vomiting by instilling 30ml of olive oil, 10ml of coconut oil, and 10ml of flaxseed oil, but he didn't have the conditions! "Oh, brother is joking. You see, he is fine even if he drinks. We are not afraid." "Yes, we like to drink this wine. Do it well and sell it to us!" "Yes, brother, this is the five dollars we collected, take it. . " "Haha, you bought this voluntarily, don't blame me if you drink it!" "No, no. It's so hot, we just like to drink to quench our thirst!" What the hell, it turned out to be a misunderstanding, I was shocked. Chao Yao let out a long sigh of relief. "It's pouring, it's pouring!" The drinking crowd fell in response. What? ! Chao Yao's frightened fingers were about to go into his throat again. "Brother Tianwang, what a great acting skill!" The man selling wine and several brothers came over and praised him. "Play, play... It's good, I'm the one who acted!" Chao Yu held back the words he was about to scold, but when he saw everyone carrying ten loads of gold and silver, he changed his mind. "It's down, it's down!" Chao Yu fell down in response. A black-faced man stepped out and said: In addition, I happened to be the gathering of seven stars, and Brother Heavenly King escaped in a white light. It is destiny! ---------------------- "Ah!" Chao Yu woke up from his dream with a loud cry, "No, shouldn't I be the protagonist?"

You are so awesome, you are so addictive

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

Are there any similar books? Recommend it.

A very interesting novel, let me study it

It was amazing when I first read it, but the author quit the show

The writing is good, I am quite satisfied. Even this ending is too frustrating. I can write a second part after this ending.