Hogwarts Natural Magic

I really like the way Voldemort looks in this book! Child-controlled Tom! Tsundere Draco! I really love it so much! ! ! ! ! 😍😍 For a person who loves snakes, the setting of Verle is simply in love with him. He dreams of owning a snake like Verle or Fei Chi (a bit of a melon in reality) 😭. In fact, the setting of Voldemort as a boy or Tom is still very interesting to me. He is a handsome little silver coin (and miserable) 😌. Finally, I hope the author will keep writing. I originally read the pirated version, but now I am saving money and plan to order all of it. 🙂

The author must have been involved in some circles before. Does it feel like Haitang's style? The whole book has a lot of OOC, but it's still reasonable. It's just that Brother Drag is a little bit crazy, and Xiao Tang's description is a bit emm. Anyway, I quite like it. The setting is relatively novel, and the protagonist's ability is a bit druid The later period is overall better than the early period The whole article has the feeling that in order to describe the protagonist as being very powerful and smart, everyone is intellectualized together, which is also because the author's writing skills are not strong enough The level of food and grass has advantages and poisons. It will not be uncomfortable to eat, but there is no desire to recommend it highly.

The protagonist is an aboriginal and swallows up the time-travelers. This is quite unacceptable to me. I don't know what you think.

After reading most of the Harry Potter fanfics, I always had the idea of ​​writing one of my own. This idea was postponed for more than half a year (I had written hundreds of thousands of words before, but I didn't sign it to Qidian. I posted it on another website, and finally stopped because of my work) Based on that book, I removed the system, rewritten the protagonist's life and driving force, replaced the golden finger, and changed the setting. In terms of plot, because that book started with the pro-era era, there was no conflict, and I did not follow it. What I most want to do when writing Harry Potter fan fiction is to change some tragedies, save some lost characters, experience Hogwarts from the perspective of the protagonist, and change some of the rules of Hogwarts that I cannot accept - such as house disputes, blood theory, and the relationship between Muggles and wizards. This is the core route I chose for the protagonist. The protagonist's golden finger is just a tool to show off his talents, not everything. The most important thing is that I hope everyone will accept this story. The story of the novel is always the core, and the setting is the icing on the cake. How many chapters can be written with the setting as the core that will be recognized by readers? If it does not reach a hundred chapters, it will be abandoned. (I will reply to any self-biased comments with an explanation and then delete them because you cannot convince me to modify them.)

What does the author think is the Sorting Hat's first priority for sorting? Bloodline? Talent? Or is it the strong will of the wizard himself?

All novels with light novel titles are basically mindless white texts that do not follow logic and ignore the normal world view, thereby covering up the author's inability to control the true direction of the story.

What can I say, I actually quite like the setting and the author's writing is pretty good. It's just that sometimes I feel like the protagonist is like a nanny. Wipe Malfoy's butt every day. Then Malfoy liked to mess with the savior again, so he left with the group in disguise... Then the protagonist kept slapping them in the face, saying that he didn't like to mess with them, and then got involved in everything 😥 In fact, I feel that the author can open his own line, there is really no need to play with them...

The author has had some relationship problems recently, and the updates may be unstable. Some people are disillusioned with the world of mortals, so I am trying to persuade them. Don't push me anymore, I'm afraid he won't be able to think about it...

To be honest, the colleagues in Qidian have raised the little snakes too high. A small society of about 3,000 people, a crude and incompetent government agency, and no worries about food and clothing. This kind of environment can cultivate so many intrigues. Besides, even if there are, it is not the turn of children aged 12 or 13 to participate. If there is such a deep city, other colleges will not dare to mess with it. The dean is not partial and can win the Academy Cup for 100 consecutive years.

I just feel like I've seen enough of the forced setting of orphans whose parents are unknown and then entering a snake farm.

I know where the violation lies. A child who has always pretended to be a well-behaved person firmly refuses to be adopted. In my opinion, his inner thoughts are not enough to justify his doing so, so the first few chapters of this book have always made me feel uncomfortable.

I never really understood what that score meant. It seemed like it was only useful for the Academy Cup. There was no penalty for being in last place, and the reward for being first was just that. So why are you fighting for this, for the so-called "glory"? Why not use this point to disgust others, and see how angry others are? Isn't it better than this?

The writing is quite smooth. It's a little depressing in the early stage, and it has a hint of male ketone in the later stage. I have a male flower elf son, and I'm very passionate with Delco. I can't bear it anymore and I run away first.

I'm a little curious, what kind of family would you build without a heroine? Adopt orphans?

Recently, according to feedback from some book friends, the problems in chapters 8-9 have been clarified, and the author also revised it many times at that time. Now I am revising it again, hoping that this intensity (contradiction) can be accepted by readers. The author has always been committed to serving readers. If there is a plot that is not appreciated by most people but is hated by some readers, it needs to be revised. If you have any new questions, you can leave a message and the author will modify it as appropriate according to the outline.

Emm I only read the introduction. The name of this pig's foot is so discouraging...

Give Draco the dragon that Nicolas Flamel gave his life to casually. . . So disrespectful. .

I haven't read it yet, but the second half of this copy is a bit reckless to conflict with Dumbledore over a college cup with no substantial rewards. I'll read it again if I don't know.

So, this is the end? ! So fast! I was really confused when I saw the last chapter finished, but I was still very touched. I thank the author for persisting in writing this book. Although the results may not be as satisfactory later on, I have been following it, and I also like the character of Bree Odd created by the author, and the story he wrote. Hope it gets better and better, looking forward to new works😊

Not recommended Brainless and lacking in logic It's just…

The protagonist is an indigenous person and has the memory of a time traveler, but he does not dare to accept the memory of a time traveler for fear of being taken away from him. Doesn't this mean that the protagonist is a native who has almost no idea of ​​the plot? 😥

Forgive me for feeling uncomfortable with male flower elves, it's really because my spirit has been polluted

Take off your pants, FP, have an oriental face, give an English name, and have the memory of an oriental mage in your mind. You can become a reborn oriental mage and you're done.

I read a few novels and dared to publish them like this. I don't know how to write the word "disgraceful"

It's a pretty good HP novel, but I always feel like the author reads Geng Meiwen often. Some parts made my eyes darken. 🤔

I was afraid that Lao Deng thought I was a bad person, so I decided to participate in the murder. Very precise logic.

I felt good in the early stages, the protagonist didn't take the usual path, but it was a bit frustrating. It feels like the author wants to create an imperfect or more realistic or more conspiratorial Dumbledore. The angle is okay, but the twist is too blunt, that is, the twist from the end of the first year. They always say that extra points at the end of the year are too blunt. In fact, it is to face Voldemort together, a person whose name most people dare not mention. It takes a lot of courage. Although Ron and Hermione left the first few games, they didn't know it was a breakout mode before they came in. They came in with the determination to face the enemy. The idea is quite good, but the twist may be blunt. Moreover, the protagonist already has the strength to stand up to the First White Wizard, but he is still holding on, which is just aggrieved. They were too indifferent towards Buckbeak. Hermione and Dickory were the few people who treated the protagonist well without considering their own interests in the early stage. On the contrary, Draco paid more attention to interests and lacked the protagonist's favoritism, which was hard to understand.

"The Natural Magic of Hogwarts" has reached 1.3 Million words and is about to be completed! Friends who keep books can have fun! This book gets more exciting as it goes on!

When I first started watching it, I felt that the writing was pretty good, but the fact that the protagonist didn't know the plot was a bit discouraging. After all, the greatest pleasure in watching fan fiction is to predict the plot. The feeling of being in control of everything and the sense of superiority are the greatest value of fan fiction. If this is abolished, it feels like the appeal has been reduced a lot...

When I saw the name of this book, I thought of Big sweet potatoes, small popsicles, stinky tofu, cucumber shreds