The Fortune-Telling Girl Doesn't Want to Go to Jail

I don't know if you have read "The Peerless Sword Princess" This book has a female protagonist. In the early stage, there is a female character and the female protagonist Lily, and there is a male villain Long Aotian In the middle period, the female protagonist met a pair of Lily, and then one of Lily was... A man was drugged while the heroine was watching a live erotica In the middle and later stages, the heroine was raped by Long Aotian in the early stage and fell in love with Long Aotian. The one with the heroine Lily in the early stage was still waiting for the heroine In the later stage, she and the heroine Lily's character has no role anymore, and they are all writing about how the heroine fell in love with Long Aotian I can only say that I already have PTSD After reading this book, the heroine is careless in front of men, and the women around her are being raped one by one. The man picks up the girl (starting from scratch, the heroine is picked up by the man when they know each other) (the heroine even knows that the man picks up the girl with bad intentions) But the heroine doesn't care, they are free I can only say that the author is also free

The Kaslana family adds another member, conquering cities and lands in all the worlds

That's right, I won't pretend anymore, the prototype is Irena, I didn't even bother to change her name.

1. What I wrote was okay at the beginning, but the further I went on, the worse it became. The three chapters 2, 55, 56, and 57 are poisonous. The captain and the others tricked him into becoming a blood slave, yet he smiled and was fine, without any inner description at all, acting like a fool. In Chapter 57, I met the original person, and then the protagonist began to say that he was a selfish person and was decisive in killing. Please forgive me for being so inconsistent. 3. The system is too powerful. The logic of the system should be equivalent exchange. You will get something if you pay. You will get a white ball if you influence others, and you will get a higher-level ball if you kill a monster. As a result, when he became a blood slave, the system helped the protagonist fuse for free, and the protagonist paid no price at all. It's too relaxing. There should be some plot here, a lot of suffering, doing tasks or killing monsters to get system rewards, so as to limit the influence of blood slaves.

I'll come first and take a look

What the hell, at first I thought it was a story about a cult leader traveling around various regions, meeting all kinds of special people, and then relying on his eloquence to win over people, becoming a hero, and then gradually becoming stronger and revealing the secrets of the world. When I opened it, I was very disappointed (I'm not saying that the plot written by the author is not good, you can write the story however you like, I mean it's not to my taste)

I think the poisonous points of the first few chapters of this book are as follows (don't ask why you didn't read the first few chapters) First, she was not pretty at the beginning, and she relied on the system to improve her appearance (I don't need to say more about Irena's appearance, right? You slowly improved it at the beginning, which makes me embarrassed) Secondly, Pulitzer did a lot of things in prison (although he was unsuccessful, the whole story was disgusting enough for me) Thirdly, what the warden did (I don't know why, I just find his behavior disgusting)       Unreasonable plot and logic Logic aspect From the beginning, when the protagonist was not in prison, I thought it was similar to the medieval era. The whipping of the prisoner later confirmed the conjecture. The problem is that shotguns and batons appeared later, which made me doubt the world. If it was the medieval era, there should not be shotguns and batons. Shotguns only appeared in modern times (if you say they are similar to muskets, pretend I didn't say that), batons are more It was only used in World War II (if you say it is similar to a baton, pretend I didn't say it). Of course, if you say your world is like this and the technology tree is so crooked, just pretend I didn't say it        In terms of plot As a missionary, I don't have any power given by gods (not counting the power given by the system), which I can't understand. From what the protagonist said at the beginning, it feels like being a missionary is more like... A job? He was also imprisoned for tampering with other people's beliefs, which is a bit outrageous. Whether he has faith or not is his relationship, not the protagonist. If he can really tamper with it, how is it different from a cult? But at first glance, it was not a cult (of course, if this was because the nobles had the ability to overpower the sky at that time and were arrested and imprisoned, pretend I didn't say it). After entering the prison, he was not very good-looking, so why was he being targeted? (If you insist that he likes this, just pretend I didn't say it)             The rest Why does the introduction look like a male video, but your content is written like a female video (in my understanding, most of the daily articles in the article are called female videos) That's all, I can tell you what I said wrong, let me see what I said wrong, so I can learn from it and improve it (the content in brackets is supplementary)

The form of the future red archbishop~

After Lorraine Hill, I have more daughters. Please update the author.

When I was shopping for clothes, I stripped down to my underwear and measured a man's measurements. He was so open-minded and I dare not compliment him.