
Douluo: Unlock the Secrets of the Human Body and Become a Free Demon
斗罗:开人体大秘,成自在天魔
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- Completed
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- 554k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I have watched Dou Si, and I have only one evaluation of the Dragon God. He is not worthy of the title of Dragon God, nor is he worthy of the faith of many soul beasts in him. He is powerful, but his character is like a mortal. He is neither a king nor a god. I doubt who asked him to be the Dragon God. If there was no blood suppression, I guess the Dragon God would have been replaced by the Dragon God. As the leader of the clan and the god of the entire soul beast, he actually valued Xiao Ai so much that he even wanted to leave with his wife after her death. Really? , I really just want to fall in love with the mainland. After his wife died, he did not want to resurrect her. If this was Douluo's setting, then he should not dwell on the past. As the leader of the entire dragon clan and soul beasts, he should keep his wife in his heart and lead the entire clan further. Then the part about rising to the star, I was also convinced 😅. As a leader, he still dared to try even though he knew there was a huge risk and was not 100% sure. He was really not afraid of leading the entire group into an abyss of eternal destruction. And he actually planned to kill himself after rising to the star level and go find his wife to let his son become the Dragon God. Isn't your wife so important? You just planned to run away after rising to the star level and you didn't know what was going on, leaving your son to clean up the mess. And did you? I have thought about whether your son is suitable to be a leader. I don't know about the pages where your son appears, but I didn't see at all in those pages that your son has any responsibility as a prince. Just like you, the dragon god, I didn't think about those who follow you at all. Also, I can barely understand that you went crazy and killed yourself later. After all, your wife is dead and your son is gone, so you are right to be angry. But when you regained your senses, you never thought about remediation and saving those who were still alive. It would be better for you to just break yourself in half, without even thinking about explaining the situation to the still-living dragons and soul beasts, leading to misunderstanding for who knows how long. Are you so anxious to split? Are you afraid that your image will collapse? Before leaving, he left a sentence, "Soul beasts are not allowed to become gods." I was really speechless. Do you know what this sentence means? The fact that soul beasts are not allowed to become gods means that their upper limit is here, and they cannot break through at all. They will die as soon as they move. As a result, the powerful soul beasts will either die from being struck by lightning as you said, or the weak ones will die from being hunted by humans. They have no other choice at all and are destined to be exterminated in the future. This is just a matter of the mortal world, look at the divine world. "Soul beasts are not allowed to become gods" means that all the gods in the future will be human beings. The problem is that the god's position can be replaced. Maybe the first-generation gods can take care of the soul beasts for your sake, but when all the gods become second-generation gods in the future, what will the soul beasts do? You must know that the second-generation gods do not know the dragon gods. Thing, in their opinion, the soul beast is just a tool to enhance their strength, without any emotion at all. Otherwise, Tang San would not have placed the fragments of his daughter on the luck beast of the soul beast clan and then plotted against her. If the soul beast clan really does not die from the Dragon God, it will also be destroyed by your words. To sum up, all of the above are my personal opinions. If there are any omissions, please add them; if you don't like them, please forgive me.
In the introduction, I got a little interested after seeing that the Silver Dragon King was no longer in love, and then the last sentence was about the heroine Gu Yuena, well...
To be honest, if you don't absorb Naer's personality earlier, your emotions will be destroyed and she will become a love brain sooner or later.
Well, to be honest, I came here for the calm state of mind of the protagonist from the beginning. If you tell me that he is influenced by the subject, it really means that I have become a clown. In the end, I still fall in love rather than pursuing a higher level. Love really conquers everything.
The heroine problem
Regarding the single female protagonist and multiple female protagonists, to be honest, when I wrote this book, I only considered Gu Yuena as the female protagonist 😭. Once Dou Si came out, the entire Dou San seemed to have become a joke 😅, so if I want to write a serious story, the setting of Dragon God will also be based on Dou Si.
Post 100
Tell me about the inspiration for my book. This book is actually the inspiration for creating the character of Silver Dragon King. Dou San can also use his love brain to explain, but Dou Si is like Shi Lezhi, whose character has collapsed and cannot bear to look at it. As for the setting of the dragon clan, it stands to reason that the setting of the Four Clowns 🤡 is the original version. This is a matter of opinion. Most Dousan settings are not of this setting. If you don't like it, there is no need to force yourself to watch it. There is also the issue of combat power. This depends on my control. If the control is not good, it will collapse. If the control is good, it will be okay. However, I feel that the combat power collapses later in the original work. The main plot of this book is actually the growth of Gu Yuena, taking on the responsibility of co-master of soul beasts, exploring a different path, rebuilding the divine world, and all orcs can become gods. That's it, thank you all for your support, and thank you readers for your support.
Poison. The protagonist's plug-in is a mysterious skill. As a result, in Chapter 4, the protagonist told a soul saint who became his master on the way to learn the skills.
What kind of bullshit is written? It's okay to have a clone in the front, but there will be more in the back. The clone has its own thoughts, is afraid of death, and even has an affair with Gu Yuena
The book here says that millions of years ago, soul beasts ate humans, and the spirits of the planes stopped the soul beasts. In order to achieve balance, the protagonist said that soul beasts are destined to be eliminated. If they are eliminated, new species will replace them. Survival of the fittest... Good guy, humans are in balance, and soul beasts are the survival of the fittest, right? They can replace them, right? Is this too much of a double standard? Why do people hate Tang San so much? Isn't it because of Tang San's double standard? Then the author explains that soul beasts do not develop while humans continue to develop. What is the prerequisite for human development? The original work has made it very clear that Douluo Planet is hollowed out, and then the Plane Spirit hopes that humans will develop. Humanity's continued development will cause Douluo Planet to collapse, and then the Plane Spirit will also die... What kind of rescue does that Plane Spirit ask for? Isn't it the same as death? With Tang San and without Tang San, with Tang San, the spirit of the plane dies, and Tang Hao swallows the abyss to survive. Without Tang San, the Douluo plane cannot defeat the abyss, and the spirit of the plane dies.
It's so right, I'll write another one, man, this is the best fanfic I've ever read.
Douluo is a love game
As we all know, Douluo Continent has a noble percentage increase and even more noble control. It only takes a few seconds to control you. In addition to the hierarchy system, the awakening of the martial soul is a job change, and the seven-person team is the team base. The worst thing about the assassin was that he was maimed, even though he was fast, he didn't do any damage. As for the love brain, success in the strategy and blood feud are nothing. Those who I like 100% are my relatives.
This one, Throne of the Void, very few Dou San fans can portray Gu Yue well, but this one is too rare 😭 for TJ. It is so rare to have Gu Yue become the heroine without relying on picking up Na'er or being attracted by the golden dragon's blood.
After the second Bai Xu appeared, I felt that this book was useless.
The way that the Zhetian people can cultivate is based on the body. It is after Huang opened the way that he engraved it on the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths, and allowed every Zhetian person to be able to cultivate it as soon as he was born, instead of being struck by lightning every day like him.
The protagonist and Xiao Zhansan meet for the first time
Protagonist: Tang San, an outer disciple of the Tang Sect, you secretly learned the "Xuan Tian Bao Lu" from my inner sect of the Tang Sect. This is a serious crime of death. I am here to capture you on the orders of the Tang Sect.
The author is of a high standard, and it is really good to write it like this in the context of Douluo. Especially Se Se's writing is so good. If he didn't come from other websites, he would be extremely talented in this aspect. Although there are many places where it's not interesting, but based on the level of your plot, if you continue writing, I can only say that it has great potential. This book is pretty good among Douluo fans, and there is still room for improvement. Anyway, keep working hard and be optimistic about the author's future.
Writing Douluo Tongwen, and also writing Douluo San, with a single female protagonist, I can only say that the author is brave enough to challenge
Shennong
If you don't care about the detailed settings and various loopholes, this book can be read. There is also a poison in Chapter 4. See if you can resist it.
The best Dou San fan I have ever seen, especially the emotional scenes
The emotional scenes are very natural, and the transformations of Gu Yue and Na'er are very natural. Even if they become dual heroines, they won't make people feel uncomfortable.
It's well written. A 500,000-word novel looks like a million-word novel. Now that I think about it, other Douluo fan authors are too stupid and always include personal stuff. Half of the chapter is a narration of the original work, without any content. There are also many fan authors who go against the Tang family for the sake of traffic, and write many original characters as brainless clowns to highlight the protagonists. This author is the best one among the Dou 3 fans I have seen 👍
I'm almost speechless. Why did the fans of Legend of Dragon King all have Gu Yuena as the heroine? I almost vomited.
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One of the best Dou San books, bar none.
According to what the author wrote, it would be useless even if Tang San was exposed as an extraterrestrial demon, right?
For the people of Douluo Continent, what Tang San did was in the interests of mankind. This is proof of twenty thousand years of history. Whether it is weakening the spirit beast or even controlling the spirit beast, it is in the interest of the federation. The spread of Xuantian Kung also further strengthens the foundation of Douluo Continent. Even if Tang Hao becomes a plane spirit, it will be beneficial to mankind. On the contrary, the author writes The actions of the plane spirits below are not in the interests of mankind as a whole. The author can actually write a child's play such as revealing Tang San's identity to separate the human camp. I'm a little curious, how can you come up with such content for the protagonist and human beings who have opposing interests? It originally looked very good, but writing this is already a logical problem.
Why didn't an extraterrestrial demon tell your teacher about the time travel?
Please, are there any books like this that Gu Yuena has some intelligence on? Thank you!
The writing is very good, but the protagonist's pretentiousness in the early stage is a bit stiff. The protagonist's early strength is not much higher than that of his peers. The narration describes him as like a god. He praises him too much and his performance is a bit unworthy.
Haoshu, so awesome😆😆😆😆😆😆
About 120 pictures are boring. It's like a mindless article about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. It's obvious that you can show a little bit of strength, but the result is that you don't show it.
Why doesn't the author strike while the iron is hot and write the story of Bai Xu's generation?
Wouldn't it be nice to create your own story universe?
Damn it, why is the new book a eunuch?