Before Becoming a God, Be a Good Lord

My writing is not bad, but there are many typos and the sentences are not fluent.

This introduction is well written in Chapter 5~ .

What comes to mind after reading the introduction From DND4E God-Emperor|God-Emperor "You put your strong hand on the tiller of the greatest human culture in history and guide the ship toward the horizon until your will is so deep-rooted that it can sail on its own, forever." Source: Dragon #411 Prerequisite: Level 21, Human As you perform ever greater feats across the universe, uniting the world's loose humanity into a new empire even larger than Nilas, more and more people call you their Lord—even their Savior. As those who look to you to rule grow, word begins to spread that you are more than human. You are not just different from mortals, but your destiny is to be further deified, beyond the trivialities of the material world. This deification marks not only your own greatness, but also the greatness of the civilization you rule. At first, you still exist in the capital of your kingdom, guiding your officials and generals by hand, but over time, the laws you make and the orders you issue take on a life of their own. The leaders under you begin to understand your will from this body of knowledge, rather than hearing it spoken by you yourself, and at the same time your attention gradually shifts to matters involving gods and demigods that involve multiple planes. Eventually, you fade from this world and join their ranks, becoming the great guardians called upon in rituals and holy days, to whom your civilization's greatest achievements are dedicated. Fulfilling Your Destiny You do not intend to rise to the sea of ​​stars in shining glory, for you know that abandoning your empire so suddenly would destroy it. You still need to answer to those who respect you, and a slow transition is appropriate while giving you time to adjust to the new responsibilities the gods have given you. Temple of the Divine Realm: As your empire grew, your subjects built a high temple to serve as your residence, and those who sought your advice or blessings came here to hear your words. You hear their pleas, give laws, and admonish them to fight adversity for themselves. But as time passes, your people become less and less in need of your presence, and your mind turns to more important things. As the centuries passed, you began to retreat, and no one could tell where you went. Eventually, your priests realized that you were everywhere in your empire; you became its guiding spirit rather than its actual ruler. At that time, your deification is complete.

After reading half of the chapter, I feel that the world in the book is more like a future world, especially if "magic" is replaced by "energy". In this world, the energy and heat released by the planet itself are converted into magic. The humans use magic to build cities, and the orcs use magic to transform themselves. The plains without magic have become barren lands, and the magic-rich mountainous areas have a large number of cities. For this reason, even if the former time traveler became the God Emperor of the human race, he failed to change the world. Even if he himself became a god, the human empire was still a feudal empire composed of city-states, because he did not come to a backward world, but to a more advanced world.

After it was revealed that the God-Emperor was a fellow countryman, and the God-Emperor also knew that the protagonist was a fellow countryman, it was basically ruined. The God-Emperor is alive➕ This setting is really a bit poisonous. It seems that everything the protagonist does is as good as a joke. It can be said that he is eating the leftovers of others 1,000 years ago.

Let me go. The Benma Plain is 400,000 square kilometers, which is equivalent to the four provinces of Shanhe. The protagonist unifies South Benma. Even if it is 200,000 square kilometers, there are only more than 2,000 people. It is too outrageous. In any case, there should not be only this small number of people. There should be hundreds of thousands of people in the 200,000 square kilometers of grassland. There should still be hundreds of thousands of people, right?

Author, can you add a zero or two zeros after the population number? This is a village fight in a no-man's land! Several provinces only have a few thousand people in their area. How dare you write that down?

After reading the reviews that there were few people, I wondered how many there would be. . . . Unexpectedly, the protagonist has so few subjects and no serfs. . . . I think the author has not calculated the data carefully at all. In a small society or small village that can recycle itself, people would not even dare to live a normal life. Think about professions like doctors and carpenters? After reading a little bit, I gave up on the book.

I read the comments about the population problem, so I stopped reading. I just called and called a few village chiefs. The layout was so small. It felt like an empire that dared to be called the God Emperor had a population smaller than that of a county. It reminded me of a man called the oldest village chief.

After reading the free one, I really can't stand it anymore. Everything else is pretty good, but the data is really unacceptable Village Chief Baron 200 Village Chief Viscount 500 Town Mayor Count Thousands County Chief King Ten Thousands? Are there 100,000 people in a country? There are so few people at the bottom, and then there are several legends at the top, which is completely inconsistent The Galloping Horse Grassland is a million square kilometers, almost as big as Inner Mongolia And there is no desert, How can you say that a population of several million can be easily supported in such a large area, right? The southern quarter is 250,000 square kilometers. Is there a population of 10,000? A small tribe with hundreds of people has fewer sheep than the population, and only has a few hundred kilograms of grain stored. How can such a tribe survive without starving to death? It would take at least several thousand sheep to make sense, right? These data are really unbearable

It makes me laugh. There are dozens of people in a knight group, twenty or thirty people in a tribe, and a hundred and eighty people can fight a big battle. You are just a child playing house, so you should use a wooden horse and a wooden sword. This way you can't hurt anyone. When you are tired, you can organize everyone to pee and play in the mud together.

This is a rare fantasy farming lord article, and the writing is really good. But it's really too watery. You can spend a chapter to water everything down. And I don't understand the significance of this despite the protagonist's strength. It's okay to want the plot to be reasonable, but it's not okay to be too extreme.

After reading part of it, I feel that the author's layout is too small and there are big problems with the data. The population data is not actually considered. The land area is about the same as Inner Mongolia. The population is written too little and is out of track. At least refer to the population data of Inner Mongolia. The title of the book is god. The result is a fight between multiple people in a village. It affects the reading experience. The layout can be made larger. There are too many poisonous points and it is too confusing. Many things are not logical.

There are more than 2 million people in the Sahara Desert with a land of more than 9 million people. If you calculate the land of 200,000 people, it can be divided into tens of thousands of people. The land of 200,000 people in your great plain only has a few thousand people...

Until now, there is no description of anyone's appearance. I only know that the main character is over 2 meters tall and very vague.

It's unremarkable and can pass the time.

There is a setting point that I can't stand. The article sets barbarians and humans, but the description of the barbarians is more like the nomads in the north. They can speak human words and do human things. They look like humans, but they can't use magic. So are they not human beings? Many Western fantasy books had this problem many years ago. The relationship between humans and aliens was vague. On the surface, it was about defending the human race, but in essence, it was about civilized people fighting against the intrusion of barbarians. It had to set up a setting that the other party was not human, and it was not directly set to fight green-skinned orcs. It was an insult to the IQ.

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The numbers are stupid and poisonous. Author, don't you consider adding two zeros to the number of people?

If I hadn't looked outside, I would have thought I was reborn. It's been 22 years, and there are still time-travel novels. Why did time-traveling remove ink marks? Is an old antique still young?

The first few pictures are too awkward, and when escaping for their lives, they are packed with a lot of science and the mysterious thinking operations of the protagonist can easily make people lose consciousness, and the description of the war is simply confusing. Dozens of people fight dozens of people, which is a big battle. It was a small-time Warring States historian, right? I'm not good at this aspect and I won't avoid describing it like other authors. I hope I can improve more.

It felt like we had just reached the climax of the plot, but suddenly a deus ex machina came and announced that he was a super villain, and then it was over? No, there are still a lot of things that have not been written. We are only halfway through the fight. What about the conflict between those without demons and those who possess demons? What about the fallen alien colonies? What about the financial problems of the empire? It feels like half of the writing was cut in half. It's so uncomfortable.

You can make a few more character pictures and be more careful. The current three are too ugly!

After reading the current chapter, I feel that this world is more like a future world, with its own construction logic and operation logic. It is not a simple world of classical knights. I hope the author will continue to write.

It looks pretty good. It doesn't have the kind of expansion of high-power resources. It's stable and not impetuous. It's quite suitable for people like me who like to enjoy and care for themselves.

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