The Americas in Turmoil: Vancouver, 1619

Author, you really don't understand why people watch Trans America. It's to satisfy your own regrets. The Americas is such a wonderful place, but pandas missed it in history and were occupied by a group of white-skinned bandits. Everyone wants to pretend that they can go back in time and space to make up for their regrets. So, everyone must want to see the Chinese bloodline become the main body of the New World. If you accept the natives as citizens, you will persuade many people to quit, because everyone comes to see the Chinese people flourish, not to see you raising Indians. Even if you are helpless due to early development, you must explain it to readers and emphasize that it is a Chinese country and will strictly control the ratio of indigenous people to white-skinned people. Otherwise, you will be directly persuaded to quit. Furthermore, you emphasize that everyone is equal, and I don't know how many people have been persuaded to quit. You still don't understand why people read novels. No one cares whether the values ​​​​after time travel are the same as those in modern society. You emphasize that everyone is equal and do not create a privileged class. However, readers will feel aggrieved because readers will automatically be brought into the group of Chuanchuan and think of themselves as one of them. So, I endured hardships, overcame obstacles, and risked my life to start a business. In the end, you told them that everyone is equal. Are you not afraid of people slashing you with a knife? People will ask: I have traveled through time, suffered so much, worked hard to build, and you tell me we are equal, then why should I fight? In order to benefit everyone, just to make me suffer? You emphasized that even if the nobility is established, it will be overthrown later, but what they are considering is the current problem. You can't protect my current rights and interests, so why talk about the future? Let me work hard for a beautiful goal? If you look at successful works, such as Lingao and Crossing South America, they all follow the path of the aristocratic parliament and let the people fight for the glory of the Senate. You will say that your design is more reasonable, but readers do not come from your reasonable design. I am just an ordinary person in real life, thinking that I can enjoy the scenery by traveling through time travel. If you directly tell people that you have traveled through time travel, you are not a privileged class. We are equal to the aborigines. Okay, how is this world different from the world we face every day? Don't we just want to see a different world?

A big East Coaster? I feel that Rise of South America is better written than Lingao.

The prototype of the passenger roller in the book can carry hundreds of cars

A complete post-modernist thought, but also trying to use advanced science to infect a group of aristocrats who can make the common people eat dirt. Sure enough, the old man was right. They didn't even have the courage to explore and conquer the world. The European colonial world did not rely on science! Treating guests to dinner every day, they eventually became a bunch of advanced and wealthy bureaucrats. Many group costumes are not as realistic as Han style. Group costumes will inevitably become a group of capital groups in the end.

It took ten years for the time traveler to build an ironclad ship from scratch. I feel that the author's industry and technology have improved too quickly. Technology can be easily copied as long as there is support from data. However, it is too easy to train Indians into technicians. They don't even have primary school education. In ten years, it is enough to barely complete the basic industries such as measuring instruments, instruments and meters, more than a dozen kinds of alloy steel, various machine tools, forging presses, and metallurgical industry equipment. The high-pressure steam engine used in the ironclad ship is precision machining. There are also the formulas, processing and smelting of useful basic materials. The main shaft of the more than 3,000-ton ironclad ship has It is more than ten meters long and weighs more than ten tons. It requires a large marine machine tool that is more than ten or even tens of meters long. It cannot be made without a large forging press of more than several thousand tons. It is the ability of large-scale metal cutting that tests the level of a country's heavy industry. How many educated talents and workers can be cultivated from poverty and nothing in ten years? The author writes about the industrial foundation and technical level too quickly, and it feels like it is too easy to improve.

The country you wrote about has too many contradictions. The advanced places are too advanced, and the backward places are too backward. The country has a small population, and most of them are foreigners, and foreigners also control some rights. There are many domestic parties, high-level officials, all kinds of fantasies about the future, and weak foundations. Even if the technology tree slowly grows, it will be better than a sudden "black technology" like yours. How many domestic schools are there? How many teachers are there? With just such a small number of people, foreigners are taken inside to visit every day.

Respect by working first

First of all, the plot is too flat, with basically no ups and downs, and it is as bland as water Secondly, there are no details at all, and the whole writing is just a detailed outline. The last chapter decided how to treat the indigenous people, and the next chapter the indigenous people were integrated. In this chapter, iron ore is found. In the next chapter, the mine will build an iron plant and start to increase production capacity. Every time I read a chapter, I wondered if I had skipped the content.

Here comes the most ridiculous part of the book. The protagonists are worried that a large number of Yin people will dilute their control, but will a large number of Ming Dynasty immigrants not? Compared to the Yin people who were still in the ignorant era, it was harder for the intelligent people who already had fixed cultural customs to be assimilated, right? Think about how much effort we have put in to clear away the remnants of feudalism after the founding of the People's Republic of China? Even now, there are still many people who want to go back and become the master's wife! Therefore, before the protagonist group has established a solid base in North America, it is nonsense to travel thousands of miles to the Ming Dynasty to attract people! The ignorant Yin people are like a blank slate, and the difficulty of assimilation is much lower than that of the Ming people. The same skin color and religious brainwashing are enough for the protagonist group to establish a stable rule in western North America, and then get involved in the East Asian continent during the Huangtaiji and Chongzhen era. This is the right way, instead of rushing into East Asia with only a few hundred cross-travelers and tens of thousands of Yin people, which is extremely childish!

Religion is a failure. No matter how good your teachings are, religion is religion. Religion is an organization and an interest group. No matter how advanced science is, it violates religious interests. Then science must die, and it will be massacre. Although the religion in the article has scientific elements, the two are naturally opposed. The only way is to alienate science and achieve the unification of religious beliefs by making science unfalsifiable. Moreover, the article also establishes a bishop. If the bishop wants to seize power, who do you think the people will listen to? Do you want to listen to hundreds of you trash?