Reborn, Starting in a Mountain Village World

The protagonist himself is a scoundrel, and he's constantly suspicious of others, which is quite awkward to watch.

If 60 is the passing score, I'll give you 65. I would like to offer a few suggestions: 1. Your pace is too fast. It's only been a few chapters and you're already going to be a ghost immortal. Unless you plan to finish in about 300-400 chapters, if you're planning to write a long novel of over a thousand chapters, your current pace is too fast. 2. The descriptions of cultivation are too vague.

I read over ten chapters, and then suddenly the protagonist's sister disappeared! Was she really just a newbie guide? She went straight into the old mansion without even asking a veteran, knowing the protagonist was a newbie – wasn't she fearless?

Ma Xiaoling

If you have any opinions, please feel free to leave them in the comments section or in the individual chapters.

First, hahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

Where does the protagonist, who is renting a house, get so much money?

I quite like this type of novel, but almost all of them are unfinished. Some authors write a hundred or so chapters and then stop, going straight to the end. Writing a grand finale of 400-500 chapters isn't really that interesting. There are many Hong Kong ghost movies, but not many authors write them well. And let me say this: (the ghost movie lottery system genre) is the worst.

Don't make the paragraphs too long; it's tiring to read.