Immortal Evil Martial Arts, Starting from Picking up Experience

The author's plot is a bit messy. He could have made the protagonist into a righteous figure in the first few chapters, but the details were not handled well and the protagonist turned into a fool. After destroying the Black Hawk Gang, the best thing for the protagonist to do is to fly away instead of returning to the city. Moreover, it seems that the author has watched too many anime and some idol dramas, and even the plot of the protagonist being thrown into the sky by everyone is too distorted.

It's not too much to add a touch of detail when you've ordered it all.

The wife was humiliated, but the protagonist didn't beat her to death on the spot. It's really the Ninja Turtles. Don't talk about beating her to death behind your back. This must be beaten to death on the spot. If you don't beat her to death, there is no need to watch it.

A common problem in Goldfinger novels is that the enemy is always only one level higher, and is always only a little weaker than the protagonist. The protagonist always just kills the enemy, not a bit more, not a bit less, and the protagonist is the one who survives in the end. It is interesting to do this once, twice or three times is barely acceptable, seven times or eight times, doesn't the author find it annoying? There are dozens and hundreds of TMs, and it happens every time. What kind of pervert can be written like this, it's TM 2023

Go ahead slowly, the plot is over. If you kill 200 monsters with just weapons, you can count them as half minus zero. One head counts as 100, and 200 monsters also have 20,000 experience points. What's more, the protagonist has been killing for most of the day, and in the end, there are only 7,000 monsters. The rest will be eaten by you, right? 🤭

A power amplifier has been trained to the 50th level, but it is still not good at all. Dogs shake their heads just looking at it.

This ability is suitable for establishing a sect. The more people practice the skill, the higher the favorability towards the protagonist and the more lords the protagonist will have. On the one hand, the protagonist improves quickly, and on the other hand, he can detect traitors.

The health-preserving power and the body-building power eventually turned into the poison-king power and body-building power. After entering Li's house, he began to collapse. The power of his martial arts was inconsistent, and the willful boy turned into a gangster...

In a word, it's too high-profile. How can I put it? After killing the village, you still secretly return, or wait for two days before returning. Sometimes high-profile can easily lead to trouble (although not necessarily), but now this golden finger can just take it easy, frown, retreat behind everyone, and cover up any problems at night.

Why not just use poison to kill the people and power nodes of the forces you provoke? Why do you have to wait until the matter involves yourself before taking action? This has happened several times, and if I continue with this routine, I will winnow out another group of readers.

The pace is too slow. Chapter 30 is still in the second practice. The protagonist's development is very slow, and why is his talent so poor? The loser style is no longer popular.

The first part is definitely a good weed, the characters and most of the plot are fine, but starting from Miss Li, it becomes a poisonous weed.

I finally understand. The "killing decisiveness" in Qidian means that the protagonist is an extreme egoist. I don't want to criticize the book. Who on earth added the "hot blood" label to this number? Is it the hot blood spurted out by killing people?

And why do you have to desperately suppress the protagonist's realm? The next step is to watch the protagonist travel from city to city and change maps, right? Let's just change the name and call it the protagonist's travel diary of another world. On a certain day of a certain month and year, he made poison and drank flower wine; on a certain day of a certain year and month, he went to another city to kill people, make poison and drink flower wine.

The female character is the most poisonous point in this book, and the rest of the poisonous points revolve around this biggest poisonous point.

Author, your description is too embarrassing. The protagonist in the book only practices the most common health-preserving skills. Even in your book, it is the lowest level of skills. As a result, when you describe the inner strength of the protagonist, you directly describe that the inner strength of the protagonist becomes a white dragon. How can he lose his hair? Parasitic beasts dare not exaggerate like you.

You can recover invincibility and fight for three days and three nights, but you can use a few skills and become exhausted, which is no fun at all.

What I said at first was pretty good. Even though I have weak points at the same level, I am already at a level that can overwhelm the enemy. From now on, I will try my best to suppress the realm. The essence of martial arts must be added with other things, so it can't improve the realm? It originally felt pretty good, but there's no point in stressing it like this.

It is a classic fantasy novel in the get-away mode. The theme is basically about fighting with people. Anyway, in more than 60 chapters, there are no monsters to fight, and we have not even seen them a few times. From this, it can be speculated that the content in the future will basically be about fighting against people. Even if there are monsters and ghosts, most of them will be dominated by people. In short, the whole novel is probably about fighting against people. The writing is okay, the story is okay, the enemy routines are basically classic routines, and the protagonist's path to becoming stronger is also a classic discussion. There are no major flaws. Overall, it's okay.

It's really disgusting to watch. The villain and the protagonist are evenly matched at first. Later, the protagonist fights the villain in the mine. The protagonist can see at night and use poison to block the villain at the entrance of the cave and release the poison. He can also hold his breath and has bonus skills. He chases the villain and fights him? ? ? Going back further and further🙃🙃🙃.

I can only say that this is an unqualified novel, and it is very clever.

The cute newcomer is begging to read! All recommendations now are for follow-up reading only! If you keep reading, you will have everything! (Following reading means reading the latest chapter within 24 hours.) Please readers, please don't keep books~

Luo Ya, this woman is really disgusting. I'll give it up if I have any more later.

There is a lot of nonsense later on, making the plot boring.

I can read this book, but I can only read a little bit, and I can't read Dole... I exploded after reading around chapter 80.

Is anyone else reading this book? Can you tell me about the latest plot? How was it written?

The latter part of writing is really not as interesting as the first part. I feel that I may be a little tired of aesthetics and I could use some new tricks.

The ending sucks, but the map can actually be expanded. The writing in the front is okay, but the backdoor is about to end.

I don't know if Golden Finger will have this anymore. I had experience in the front, but I didn't see it in the back.

Hurry up and update, I finished reading it in two days