Hong Kong Comprehensive Development Starts with the Flying Eagle Project

After reading the beginning and seeing Aaron killed, I couldn't stand it anymore. You said the protagonist wanted to kill Aaron inside and out. Why didn't he shoot at the beginning? He had to waste a bunch of useless words on shooting

The writing is okay, just call Jackie Chan "Uncle Long" when you see him! There are two in Spain and seven or eight in the United States. In Hong Kong, there are even more! It's rare that you want to form Jackie Chan's team haha, that would be awesome haha ​​(ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

That thing about Zheng Yuling, who has been targeting mainland actors, Huang Bo once criticized

No memory, once I saw this I didn't want to read any further. Many authors simply don't understand how troublesome it is to have no memory. And it only causes trouble for readers. It doesn't matter if the plot develops with or without memory, it still develops that way. Because the memoryless protagonist said a few more words to explain, which adds up to a hundred words at most, which is still the 100 words of the free chapter. Why make readers uncomfortable? Especially for someone like an undercover agent, your tone of voice, skills, and daily living habits are all different from you. Do you not doubt it? Are you still sending missions? Normally he should be locked up and interrogated.

Come on, well written!

My mentality is broken, and there is no need to read bad reviews every day. 4,000 Words a day are useless. So I set a speaking limit.

I saw the word "undercover" and persuaded me to quit.

Enter the palace as soon as possible to serve the manager, read more books with good Hong Kong comprehensive scores to study, and read the bad reviews in the comment area, and then write a book after you know those are the poisonous points!

If your mentality is broken, just be a eunuch. The writing is really not good-looking.

It looks good at the beginning, but when the system and undercover agents reveal their poisonous spots, they become more and more poisonous in the future. . . . Sitting there trying to write the protagonist with personality and interest, the writing skills and experience are not enough, especially when Taozi is the sage of all things, the poisonous point increases. I can't stand it anymore. I still have to exercise. Let's go.

Can't we go one plot after another? We have to blend in. Seeing speechless

Three people appear for now

Find a class to work in. Novels are really not for you.

Is there any connection between the word "glory" and mercenaries?

Ninety percent of the protagonists in the Hong Kong variety show world travel through time to work as police officers, undercover agents, etc. Other than these, they cannot survive in other professions!

It's best to sort out the brother plots, unfold them one after another, and don't mix them together. You can't just mix several plots together without hesitation just to attract women, which will make you dizzy. ——Advice from a desperate reader

Brother, you are not suitable for writing novels, stop writing,

Say a few words calmly. I feel like there is something wrong with the setting. The first chapter says that the protagonist joins the Spanish Foreign Legion. Then the trick came, being hired by an individual. You are already employed by the Spanish government, can you still be employed?

Stay Claws, get a gift package from the world of American TV series ←A:→ ←B:→"The Immortal Forensic Series" and "The Book of Boba Fett" ←C: →"Wreckage Series" ←D:→ ←E:→ ←F:→"Copy Series" ←G:→ "The Man in the High Castle" ←H:→"The Man in the High Castle", "The Underworld", "Hannah", "Black Sails", "The Blacklist", "The Man in the High Castle", "The Peacemaker" ←I:→ ←J:→"The Memory Detective", "Jack Ryan", "Crossworld", "What If...?" ←K:→ ←L:→"The Falcon and the Winter Soldier", "Loki", "La Brea", "Arrow Series" ←M:→"The Mandalorian Series", "Doom Patrol Series" ←N:→"Supergirl Series" ←O:→ ←P:→ ←Q:→"Under the Dome Series" ←R:→ ←S:→"Upload" "The Flash Series" "Agents of S. H. I. E. L. D." "Sniper" "Warehouse 13 Series" ←T:→"Sweet Home" Park" Korean drama produced by Netflix, "The Gifted Series" and "The Librarian Series" ←U:→ ←V:→ ←W:→"Resident Alien", "Wanda and Vision", "Inaction", "IZombie Series" ←X:→"Westworld Series" The Walking Dead Series" "Psychic Forensic" ←Y:→"Eagle Eye" ←Z:→"Warrior Series" "The Legend of Jupiter" [Note: Many authors nowadays write about Zhutian film and television, but the actual number of film viewings is really unflattering and seriously lacking]

Stay Claws, a gift package from the world of American/Korean dramas ←A:→ ←B:→"The Undead Forensic" and "The Book of Boba Fett" ←C:→"The Wreckage Series" ←D:→"Strong Woman Do Bong Soon" ←E:→ ←F:→"Dungeon Series" ←G:→"The Man in the High Castle Series" "G rid" "Halo" ←H:→"Black Robe Series", "Black and White Series", "Hanna", "Black Sails Series", "Blacklist Series", "Mutual Agents/Whiskey Cavalier" and "Peace Messenger" ""Doubt", animated version of "Black Robe: Misdeeds" ←I:→ ←J:→"Memory Detective Series", "Jack Ryan", "Crossworld", "What If...? "Zombie Campus" "Military Inspector Doberman" "Marvel Girl" ←K:→ ←L:→"The Falcon and the Winter Soldier" "Loki" "La Brea" "Arrow" series "Luke Cage" ←M:→"The Mandalorian Series", "Doom Patrol Series", "Drawings" ←N:→"Supergirl Series" ← O:→"Obi-Wan" ←P:→ ←Q:→"Under the Dome Series" "The Cleaner" ←R:→ ←S:→"Part 1" "The New Life Series", "The Flash Series", "Agents of S. H. I. E. L. D.", "Sniper", "Warehouse 13 Series", "Resident Evil" ←T:→"Sweet Home", a Korean drama produced by Netflix, "The Gifted" "Exotic Series" "Librarian Series" ←U:→ ←V:→ ←W:→"Resident Alien Series" "Wanda and Vision" "Nothing to Do" " iZombie Series" ←X:→"Westworld Series", "The Walking Dead Series", "Psychic", "Sisyphus", "Stargate: Atlantis Series", "Stargate SG-1 Series" Series" "Blood Treasure Series" ←Y:→"Eagle Eye", "Alien Cataclysm Series", "Hotel of the Moon", "Eden", "Moon Knight" ←Z:→"Warrior Series" "Jupiter" "Legend", "Endgame", "House of Money (Korean version)" [Note: Many authors now write about Zhutian film and television, but the actual number of film viewings is really unflattering and seriously lacking]

In fact, the writing is good, but there are several Uncle Long mixed in, which makes people a little confused. Or just write that you are related.

Keep your claws and recommend a world gift package [Note: Many authors now write about Zhutian film and television, but the actual number of film viewings is really unflattering and seriously lacking] ←TV series list:→ ←A:→"Crime Scene" ←B:→"Eight Arrays" "Immortality" "Forensic Medicine" "Lotus Lantern" "The Book of Boba Fett" ←C:→"The Legend of Chu Liuxiang" "First Marriage" "Wreckage Series" "The Twelve Hours of Chang'an" ←D:→"The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty" "Strong Woman Du Fengshun" "Everything Is Good" ←E:→ ←F: →"Win the World", "Apotheosis of the Gods", "Copy", "The Wind Rises in Luoyang" ←G:→"Antique Bureau Middle Game", "Ghost Blowing Lamp: The Wonderful Ancient City", "Ghost Blowing Lamp: Longling Cave", "The Man in the High Castle Series", "Grid" ←H:→"Blacklist Series", animated version of "Black Robe Pickets: Bad Deeds" ", "(American TV series) Hannah", "Golden Eyes", "Ode to Joy", "Black Robe", "Black Sails Series", "Monkey Ticket", "Peacemaker" ←I:→ ←J:→"The Best of Us", "Memory Detective", "Jack Ryan" ←●Supplement●→ "Zombie", "Elite Lawyer", "The Man in the Game", "What If...?" "Cross World Series" "Zombie Campus" "Holiday Ocean 2" "Military Prosecutor Doberman" ←K:→"Kangxi Private Interview Series" "The Beginning" ←L:→"The Deer and the Cauldron" "Green Arrow" "Bright Sword" "Soul Ferry Series" "Mr. Love" "The Deer and the Cauldron 2020" "Neighbors" Crazy" "Husbands' Private Money" "The Falcon and the Winter Soldier" "Loki" "La Brea" ←M:→"Magic Phone Series" "Doom Patrol" ←●Supplement●→ "Ma Gu's Birthday" "The Mandalorian Series" "Aim" "Tomb Passage" "Chasing the Net" ←N:→"Supergirl" "Angry Xiangxi" ←O:→ ←P:→"Across the Ocean to See You" ←Q:→"Celebrating More Than Years", "Master", "Under the Dome Series", "Gun God", "Brothers", "Love in the Courtyard", "Cleaner" ←R:→"In the Name of the People" ←S:→"Heroes of the Sui and Tang Dynasties", "Water Moon Cave", "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", "Young Bao Qingtian", "Water Margin", "Agents of S. H. I. E. L. D.", "The Flash", "Sniper of Life and Death", "Myth", "Romance of the Three Kingdoms", "The Sword of the Third Young Master", "Warehouse No. 13 Series", "Mountain and Sea Love", "Upload New Series", "Sweeping Storm" and "Who is the Murderer" ←T:→"Dragon", "Number One in the World", "Genius", "Iron Teeth Ji Xiaolan", "Librarian Series", "Sweet Home", "Peach Blossom Luck", "Gold Rush" ←U:→ ←V:→ ←W:→"Oolong in Love" "I am a Special Forces Series" "I am a zombie", "I have a date with a zombie series", "Wulin Gaiden", "Agent/Whiskey Cavalier", "The Pretender", "Resident Alien Series", "Wanda and Vision" ← Travel Notes" "Xiao Shiyilang" ←●Supplement●→ "Psychic Forensic Medicine" "Westworld Series" "Little Husband" "Sisyphus" "Happiness 2021" "Fighting Swordsman in the Snow" "Meeting Season" ←Y:→ "The Legend of Heaven and Slaying the Dragon" "The General of the Yang Family" "The Hotel of the Moon" "The Imperial Gift of Xiaowu" "Eden" "Yunnan Worm Valley" "Ye Ordinary" " "Eagle Eye" "Alien Cataclysm Series" ←Z:→"Six Series of Serious Cases", "Warrior Series" and "The Little Monk" are supplemented by "Ultimate Notes", "Sister-in-law", "Legend of Jupiter" and "End Game" Novel: "Starting from Scratch" Game: "Detroit: Become Human"

I started watching it today, so I'll give you my opinion if I can. I feel that the ideas are good, but the plot is too fast. I need to add some storyline (it's almost like a plot. For example, when I was at the base, I faced so much gold, the characters clashed so fiercely, and they used guns to fight with each other. Everyone was cheating. Isn't it just for the intense conflict? Is it enjoyable? Just start yy, there will be only 30~40 chapters, and it will definitely not include the explosion of the base), so that the author does not have to worry too much about the idea, and everyone will enjoy watching it. There are so many heroines who just fire when they should. I feel that Ada is too holy, and she is also a killer behind the scenes. As long as you follow the general main line of the movie and write your own routine instead of the audience, it will be a good and enjoyable story. Come on, author!

The author writes very well. He writes at his own pace. Readers' opinions can be used as reference, but don't be influenced by this kind of thinking. Come on

Come into the bowl😍

Come to Hong Kong again. You can make a masterpiece, a collection of horror films from Hong Kong, Korea, Japan, the UK and the United States. This background should be quite enjoyable.