People Are Being Devoured, and Miracles Happen Ten Times in a Row

This is the most overrated fanfic. It always comes up with weird and useless stuff, and it overly flatters the martial arts stuff.

And you always like to write about martial arts. Let me ask you, what good things can be found in the martial arts world where devouring a warrior level can almost kill you? Why do you think things in martial arts can become more powerful when swallowed? Either you f*ck draw things from other fantasy fairy worlds or draw something from the high martial arts world. Why do you always draw things from the low martial arts world? Let me ask you, do you think Guo Jinglai can defeat a warrior-level warrior by swallowing the starry sky?

Let's use the star transformation method to give the protagonist an entire inner universe. The immortal kingdom of God is placed in the inner universe, giving him a full sense of security.

You remind me of a few weird books, including Zhetian traveling through time and practicing the Eighteen Palms of the Condor Dragon, and Emperor Huangtian playing football.

It's a scam. The things in the introduction are afraid that the protagonist can only draw them if he becomes the controller of the universe. The whole nanny article is the kind of teaching people to practice kung fu. The only advantage is that the system gives the number of draws. It's still rubbish at the level of ordinary people.

In the past few decades, the protagonist of Tomato's new book has cultivated to the ninth level of source life. He can destroy the star with one shot, but you, a fan protagonist, is still playing in the mud on the earth.

Tucao post: The golden fingers in this book are actually relatively conventional, but the author has a big problem with the combination of martial arts and fantasy. Guoshu is okay, especially in the early stage, because Guoshu is the application of the body, integrating your own strength. Whether you are strong or not depends most on your physical fitness.       ，，，，， Only universal ones like Guoshu will not be affected too much by the world, but its intensity will not be much stronger unless you create it yourself. Don't be too obsessed with your ancestors. Different environments will breed different people, just like the game version. If you have to reverse the version, this is just a personal preference. The production mechanism of internal strength is difficult to describe. If it is generated by the body itself, then it is the gospel of physical cultivation. If it is generated by external energy, then internal strength can no longer be called internal strength. Can spiritual power be cultivated in the world of immortals and can it still be called internal strength?

The male protagonist's name is too ridiculous. No matter who is called Luo Bing, they always call him A Bing or A Bing. No one calls Luo Feng A Feng. The name is a bit unbearable to look at, but you always deliberately call it that way. Isn't it better to just call Luo Bing by his real name? You have to deliberately engage in some showy maneuvers to persuade you to quit.

The author should stop talking about conceptual martial arts, it's ridiculous just thinking about it. If the protagonist of conceptual martial arts understands it, just talking about its characteristics can explode the original universe of the cosmic sea under the source world. Tathagata Divine Palm, Seven Heaven-cutting Swords and the like. It's so awesome, I'll hit your true spirit directly with a palm. The second palm strikes the foundation of your past existence. . . The third palm directly communicates the cause and effect of the past and present. If you have no past, it will directly produce results and erase you.

One of the failings is the addition of Zhetian. The performance of Zhetian is too high. Quasi-Emperors have stars hanging from their hair. Dieshengxu even has a great sage with a finger whose size exceeds the endless light-year universe. However, the performance of Devouring is too low. Unless it is Layer Snow Eagle, but Snow Eagle also needs Chaos. Only in this realm can he pass through the universe, but instead he has swallowed up the lord of the middle universe, which only lasts tens of light years, and manifests itself to hundreds of light years. The true god is only in a small universe (Virgo Super Galaxy Cluster) that is only 100 million light years away. The true god level of Diexue Ying is not comparable to the level of Wuxian-Great Wall of Corona Borealis.

Suppressing combat power, suppressing it too hard, not lacking anything. Before Chapter 20, I didn't even break through to the junior warrior level.

The Tao is the Tao, and the law is the law. I want to swallow the so-called laws into the so-called ten original laws. It is clear that the higher-ups deliberately designed it this way. This kind of system is deformed and has no potential.

The writing is too cliché. When I saw you write that Li Dawei appeared and said that he was a big shot behind him, I knew you were going to take this trash with you. Why do you, a systematic person, have to be a nanny for someone who will become a big shot decades later? And he's just a character on Earth, so you wouldn't want to write him as a genius who would become a planet as soon as he cultivated, right? Otherwise, why would you take him with you?

I just want to know how the protagonist is so sure that Luo Feng is his son?

When I looked at the catalog, I thought you were going to enter the early stage of Nirvana based on the skills and spear skills of the drawn characters. You wrote something fantasy-like. There were also emojis in the text. It was too dramatic. I was quite optimistic about it at first. Alas.

Faster, faster, more, not enough

Can't even compare to Hong Zhiliu?

Author, are you writing a Zhetian fan or a Devouring fan? You can enter the world of Zhetian before, but not after that. The Emperor of Zhetianli is stronger than the Lord of the Universe who swallows the stars. . . . The author is Zhe Tianchui. The combat power of Zhe Tian is much higher than that of Devour. . . . . This is deliberately disgusting for fans of the book Devouring the Starry Sky. . .

It was well written, why did it suddenly stop updating?

The author was scolded and ran away. Rocket Launcher!! Fire ーー!!!! ＿∧_∧＿＿＿/／ ≡(_ ( ･∀･)＿＿( ● (ニつノ｜｜＼ ヽ_⌒|｜｜ し_(＿) ｜｜ ¯¯¯¯

He cheated and stole Luo Feng's opportunity, and the entire second creation became Luo Feng's father. And to be honest, in the early stage, it may be useful for martial arts and the like, but in the later stage, it is directly about comprehending the law system and turning the body into energy. After all, I remember that in the later stage, each one of them was thousands or tens of thousands of meters tall. Yes, it's the kind that has no body, and the rewards given, such as the Heaven-Shading Method, are not compatible at all, and the main training system is Devouring, mixed with the Shading Sky System, and the Fahai Buddhism system, etc., The compatibility of the system is too confusing, and there is no mention of integration.

Only the strongest person in the universe in the swallowing starry sky can walk out of his own way, and only the three immortals in Zhetian can walk out of his own way. The law is fixed, and the way is infinite. Everyone has his own way, and he just relies on himself to discover his own enlightenment. The giant ax is the avenue of axes, and the Lord of Chaos City is the path of time and space.

Tell me if you are a eunuch.

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What I hate most about eunuchs is that even the appendix is ​​better than eunuchs, at least it has a beginning and an end.

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It's written in a mess, with a bunch of P's and a bunch of martial arts thrown in. The martial arts are a bit better, and the cultivation of immortals has also come out. You have such a big brain, why should you write a fan fiction? Isn't it good to write the original work? Messy without a plan

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