Cultivation: I Can Reincarnate in the Heavens

I feel that it is not as good as the previous book. The most exciting part of the previous book is the part about survival and power at the beginning of the Ming Dynasty. I tried my best to make various calculations just to make myself live a better life. It would also be good to become an immortal and go to various worlds to show off. But this one felt bland and tasted like chicken ribs. The most exciting part is how the protagonist fights back after being framed. After embarking on the path of immortality, it is no longer interesting, and the so-called calculations cannot make people empathize with them (in the last book, the protagonist would get immediate feedback after making calculations, but now, it seems that all calculations are based on the so-called overall situation, and that's it, no feelings).

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Well written

There are very few authors who write about the battle genre. I like it very much. I hope the author can work harder and not be a eunuch. It's really not enough. The writing is very good.

It's beautiful, and the author is more explosive. Not enough at all

They are all Yuanshen Huangen. These Yuanying Rejuvenation Pills are so calculated. This is a cultivation world where great power belongs to oneself. In addition, no matter what the reason is, it is a fact that the Star Loss Sect supported him when he became Yuanying. He should be given some reward. As for leaving until the last term, how much help is there for the protagonist? It is helpful to be the only Yuan Shen of the Butian Sect and the founder of the sect, and then come back to take over the Butian Sect. , Who dares to object, before I returned as Yuanshen, I was afraid that this and that would be ignored, and how much preparation I had made in advance, I was speechless. In the end, I was afraid that the lady named Zuo had ignored me, and I was too lazy to say. I can return after understanding the situation, okay? First of all, in this world background, only people who can practice cultivation, without means, it is basically impossible for grassroots to reach Yuanshen. It is also difficult if you have a background.

You already owe 10 chapters! ! ! How many times have I told you to stop working as a bartender and resign at home to concentrate on writing a book? Isn't it ten thousand times better than that? You won't listen. . .

Can this book have many female queens and arrange everything later? The arrangements for the women in Bailuyuan and the Republic of China were really gripping.

I feel that there is no use in simulating a future with twenty times the training time difference between a clone from another world. Before the death, the protagonist relied on his own resourcefulness to advance all the way in the court. However, he was not lucky enough to be imprisoned. After two simulations of the Tao Dan realm, the protagonist only had the IQ of an ordinary person and was beaten all the time. The protagonist himself said that the Golden Crow Immortal Body and the Innate Dao Pill are the foundation for becoming an immortal, and there are magic skills with no side effects to speed up the practice. It takes twenty times as long as the clone to practice, and the result is almost the same as that of a genius who has not died. With so many tricks, you should be one step ahead of your peers, compete with the older generation, slowly transform from a chess piece to a chess player, and control your own destiny.

It seems too calculating and has no flavor after cultivating immortality.

It makes me feel so uncomfortable when I write this. The protagonist has always been cautious. I only see him fawning over others and no one comes to please him. What is the purpose of cultivating immortality? Is he trying to live in trembling and precarious life every day? It seems that he is cultivating immortality just for the sake of cultivating immortality. There is no theme at all. For example, if you want to do something, you must have a high level of cultivation to do it. You must keep moving forward. Without pressure, where can the motivation come from? The protagonist just lacks a spiritual thought and has no motivation to move forward.

Why not write a copy world? Is there any plug-in that I don't need anymore? , And if you can't write women and emotional scenes, don't write them. In order to avoid estrangement, you wrote these women who neither share the hardships with the protagonist nor have a deep relationship with the protagonist. They are characters who betray the protagonist. I am not surprised. Others write women, after all, they have the role of being tools to advance the plot. You wrote these women, except Zhao Yunniang, who are useless. You wrote them purely for the sake of writing. The Butian Sect neither helped the protagonist collect resources nor was it built up bit by bit by the protagonist. It has a mixed staff. Soon the protagonist will go to the upper world again. If he does, he will definitely ascend. How long can this sect survive? The world is weird if you never write a copy

By the way, are you majoring in swordsmanship? This is the starting point for cultivating immortals. Nine out of ten books are about swordsmanship. I haven't gotten tired of writing about it yet. I'm a little tired of reading it. Hey, if I have to write about sword cultivation, I'd better come up with something new.

Ah, this... The cultivation system is monopolized, which is worse than the monopoly of technology. Everyone in science can study, observe nature, summarize laws, and apply laws. The practice of this book must be approved by the ancestor, and you can practice it only after you get the exercises. The exercises learned secretly have no effect. It is seriously suspected that this civilization that cultivates immortals has been colonized by aliens. And it also distorts the technology tree.

It's really a pity. The first part can be said to be a divine book, but the second part begins to go downhill after the ascension of Yuan Shengjun. But just looking at the second part, I can say that this is a good book, let alone the plot of becoming a god in the world of mortals and cultivators. It's worth reading.

How to say it? The proportion of cultivators is too small, it's all calculations, and I can't even remember the power system. Can anyone summarize it?

This book is okay, I'll read it in a year's time

The mortal struggle at the beginning and the fairy palace game in the middle are really exciting. But since Xu Xing arrived at Yuanying, it always felt almost boring. Now that he has ascended to the upper world and is still farming, I feel that the author's writing power can't keep up.

I ordered it all. It was so enjoyable to write after cultivating immortality. Can the author write it more happily? This is astronomical literature. The current force value is as low as a horse. It is just some agency calculation. It makes me angry. You are not the kind of person who is the supreme one. Is it really good to write like this? You are still planning to learn from Huang Ting Taoist master. But the talent of the protagonist is not low. It is really too slow. Moreover, in the early stage, the male protagonist could still have free prostitution entries and make it rain, but now it is gone. .

The Butian Sect is of no use, and the effect is not as great as expected. The protagonist has reached this point and he has not played any role. There is also the mess of the master-disciple lineage, which has caused a lot of trouble. How useful it is to him. If the master-disciple lineage is not disclosed in advance, the danger and trouble will be very small. It is enough to carry around, and there is no shortage of those things. If you want to establish a force, come back as a soul and do it, it will be much easier and simpler

After reading the first two chapters, yes, the anticipation has been stretched to the extreme. I don't know what the content will be like later on. I hope the pace won't be too slow. There are more than a hundred chapters in one world.

Gong Douwen is wearing the skin of a cultivator.

Add some finesse, but not too much

What is speed, Ang (tactical retreat. Jpg) Author, please improve!

The first volume is the most interesting, and the subsequent plot is okay, but there is no sense of immersion.

It's time to get more refined.

The ending is full of flowers hahaha 😃 The novel is still good, especially the opening of the dungeon world and the evolution of fate in the early stage laid the foundation for the main character Gou Zhidao. However, it is a pity that the plot of the protagonist's appearance in front of others is a bit lacking. Although the role of the genius is well portrayed, I feel that the immortal cultivators in the novel need too much the skills of the predecessors and cannot create new methods on their own. Moreover, they cannot feel the benefits of immortal cultivators to the world. It is better to continue to develop the true immortals of Fude. The world view of the novel has not been filled in for the protagonist's time travel🕳️, nor has it been filled in for the Supreme Classic. Overall, it is unfinished 🪖 I look forward to the author's next novel being exciting and perfect.

Don't overdo it

Come on

Judging from the last few chapters, it should be almost finished.