
Super God: Destroy Ge Xiaolun at the Beginning
超神:开局消灭葛小伦
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 88k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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39Chapters
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Not bad, not bad, I hate Ge Xiaolun the most. Being a deserter on the Tianhe battlefield can be forgiven for being the first battlefield. After experiencing so many battlefields, he actually went to retire when he was needed most. If such a person with no sense of responsibility becomes the main god of the earth, the future of the earth will be dark, and he will be useless except for the power of the galaxy.
I really don't understand it, so I'll just write it according to the normal model of Galaxy Power + Xingtian Armor. For this kind of time-travel fan novel, the uniqueness of the protagonist is the core. You have to create an original character.
How is this novel written? The more it is written, the less like a time traveler it is, especially the chapter about the male protagonist and his father.
Is the protagonist just joining the army? Going into the battlefield without any training? A soldier with "fair and translucent" skin? Anyone who has been in the army and trained for a few days would not use the word "fair and translucent". With a bottle of hairspray and a cup of Garfield, you can join the crew and film an anti-Japanese drama. Change the first chapter here. The protagonist is a soldier. It would be disgusting if you use such adjectives to describe a soldier. Whether the protagonist has received training or not, change it. How disgusting. It's not a drama, there's no need for it. Even if you set the protagonist to be talented but not tanned, don't write it like this. An anti-Japanese drama genius, clean, fair and translucent, with hair gel in one hand and garfield in the other. He drinks foreign wine and smokes cigars.
It's hard for him to describe this protagonist in just one sentence!