Versatile Mage's Talent Pang Neng

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ By Fan Fiction, None of which can be written as a classic. They all follow the protagonist's experience. They either steal the protagonist's role or write it as a double-male protagonist. There is no desire to watch it. In fact, the core of fan fiction is to control the plot. There is really no need to go through the plot again. Just participate in some large-scale regional events and historical events, and you can completely create the details of life yourself. Fan fiction should be created based on the original world view timeline as the background, so that it can be a classic. There is no need to change the original work chapter by chapter. It is really boring to write it down like this. No matter how good the writing is, it is just to pass the time, because in the final analysis, it is still copying the original work. The plot has nothing of its own, and readers cannot feel any resonance, because all readers of the plot know it, and even readers have expectations of what you will change it to. In fact, the best fan fiction is Honghuangliu. Although there are not many well written ones, the method is correct. Taking the prehistoric world as the world view, there is a timeline, but there is no protagonist. It's a pity that I don't know whether it's due to my skill level or because no author could think of writing it this way. Fan fiction is not written this way, and they all follow the plot of the original work.

Really, the first part is good, but problems arise later. The protagonist keeps helping Mo Fan, but never gets feedback. There should be back and forth between friends, not unilateral export. The protagonist's strength is fascinating. One moment, he was the strongest and unpredictable when going through the plot with Mo Fan. The next moment, he was ranked behind Mo Fan and even Mu Ningxue, and was called the second devil... To be honest, the bottom line of what many readers can accept is that he is at least no worse than the protagonist in the original work. But I saw Chapter 148. Mo Fan was possessed by Flame Fairy and punched the prone Dongfang Lie, and the protagonist had to break his leg bone to defeat him. The protagonist often helps others without any reason, and even feels a little nosy. For example, the time when Hu Xue was there, the time when the big snake shed its skin, the time when Ai Tutu took over, and so on.

It's so comfortable to watch without a heroine, there are no awkward emotional lines, and it's not brainless. The protagonist is not a fool, so it's very comfortable to watch.

Holy Mother, you are very nosy.

I feel that the author needs to strengthen the protagonist. The protagonist is really not very outstanding. He should strengthen the high-level wind element and get a stronger soul seed. If you don't arrange a totem or something, aren't you just looking for a totem later?

It's very comfortable to watch without a heroine. It's not that I don't like female protagonists. I can accept two or three female protagonists. It's just that some of the stories are like a bus. If there is a female protagonist, it's like I've never seen a woman before. And although this book is relatively ordinary, it's not that there are no hooks. It's just that it's not obvious in the early stage and the protagonist's character is not outstanding 🤫🤫

I've finished reading the full text, and it's very comfortable to read. I like watching the protagonist interact with Mo Fan and the others. I feel like watching the Pirates fandom is like Ship Flow. Watching the protagonist join Fanxue Mountain, help with development, and cultivate farming. The plot of Angel Soul in the middle is a bit annoying, and the final boss Mika is encountered at the advanced level. Well, it made me feel so insecure that I felt a sense of urgency when watching the subsequent plots. I was still being watched by the boss and felt like I was still here. This was very annoying, but after that plot, it was fine. I still quite like the friendship between the protagonist and Mo Fan. After all, the world view of the original text is still too dark.

This is the crappiest French fanfic I've ever read

It's really rubbish, the plot is basically pasted and copied, and the main character is a virgin.

Main character. Mo Fan's background board🤭

This book is useless. Large-sized nanny. Entered by mistake.

From the plot development point of view, although our protagonist has no woman in his heart, I think Mu Ningxue is now more inclined to the protagonist than Mo Fan.

This guy is not even a little bit smaller than Mo Fan.

The protagonist in the book feels like a licking dog. Those who say that the protagonist is a nanny are a bit flattering to the protagonist. The protagonist himself is slower than Mo Fan in cultivation, and he even gives all kinds of things to Mo Fan. Isn't this just a licking dog? The nanny is the protagonist and is faster than Mo Fan in cultivation. , And is stronger than Mo Fan. You can give him a lot of resources, but your protagonist is slower than Mo Fan. Mo Fan is born to be faster than the protagonist in both magic systems. The protagonist has half less magic than Mo Fan and is slower than Mo Fan. I am really speechless.

Qingliu, a full-time novel, is a bit short on updates and not too high-end. After watching it for so long, I felt that the Hangzhou part was a bit lacking, but the rest was pretty good! Come on, I want to see the ending!

The author's handling of the early stage is really bad. I'm not saying that you can't be a nanny or a teammate for Mo Fan, but you have to have the qualifications or background. Forget about the summoning system in the early stage. You are giving Mo Fan a defensive magic tool. Later, the Pearl Summoning test was inexplicably withheld. Why, you are not allowed to use it if you have the strength? If you participate in some events and there is no reward, just think you are enthusiastic. The wind elves who contracted later are even more inexplicable. If you just say that the wind elves only have the special innate talent of the protagonist to make contracts, forget it. Inexplicably, they will have a short life span. The main character in your novel is a supporting character. You should at least write a background and an orphan. There are a few orphans in the original novel who can follow in Mo Fan's footsteps. The worst thing is that the talent should be better and you should write a later talent. Really, there are countless flaws as seen above. Can you tell me whether there are many complaints about it on the shelves? Here comes the good guy Shen Nong.

Appraisal completed, suitable for people with dog-licking and virgin attributes.

Wow, brothers, the author said that updating 5000 times is not a problem 😃, just wait for the update.

Personally, I feel that this is the bread and butter in the Mage fan novels. Unlike other novels, the protagonist is like a teddy. All the women in the original novel who have some relationship with the protagonist have to go up and lick it.

I learned about the orphanage, and it's so scary. Seeing how good the orphanages you said are so good, I even believed them. People in them all help each other, that's nonsense.

It feels like the original work has been copied and added with a character.

I feel like the protagonist of this book is still Mo Fan, and Liu Mingtian is like a supporting character

I would like to say a word to all the book friends who read this book review, don't read this book because it is a waste of time. Believe it or not, I read this book on other software. When I got to more than 300 chapters, I couldn't help but skip chapters. I finally finished it. It's hard to say. It gave me the feeling that it was better to read it all over again. The plot added in the middle is not too big. It is generally very ordinary. Believe it or not, you can read it by yourself.

The name Liu Tianming is easier to pronounce than Liu Mingming. The biggest problem is that the protagonist is a top-notch good guy who doesn't ask for anything in return. At least he wants to do some business or something. Don't just give. Do you have a lot of resources?

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When I watched it, it was so bland. It was no different from the original work. I gave up on the first part and I don't know what happens next.

Finished with flowers

I'm really looking forward to the author's new book

The Elf of Wind is only slightly inferior to Flame Fairy. In short, the protagonist is very weak and unattractive. I abandoned it.

I read one chapter and then didn't want to read anymore.