I Can Enter the Game and Become Stronger

The games you choose are not good and have too little appeal to readers. To be honest, if you write some AAA masterpieces, your performance will improve a lot. Every large-scale game has its fans, and you will get results if you accumulate little and little. I have watched my wife play these small games for 10 minutes and then uninstalled them.

There are a lot of messes in the real world. The protagonist talks about salted fish, but the actual actions are flying. All kinds of forced coincidences, encountering vicious beasts while walking, or losing control of the beasts during training. Wherever there is danger, run wherever you want. Can't you play the game well? You have to arrange all kinds of inexplicable plots for the protagonist. The sense of targeting is too strong. I don't understand what purpose these plots have besides affecting the protagonist's gameplay.

I think we can get some good stuff, not to mention World of Warcraft Black Break, but also the Dark Souls, Ghastly Souls, Blood Wolf Ring series, Blood Devouring Code, Eternal Calamity, Monster Hunter, etc. OW. Or ordinary stand-alone games, such as "Qiafansan Game BYZ", MC, Terraria, Witch's Journey, Dungeon Maker, Bu Mo Tianxia, ​​blacksoul, Beautiful Girl Wanhua Mirror 1, Brave vs. Monster Girl (gradually mixed with private goods🐶)...

In addition to borrowing the content of sticky notes, the rest is a brief article on urban supernatural powers.

Writing about reality is not as interesting as games. It is better to write less about daily life and more about games. It's enough to write about big events in reality, but boring daily life is a bit boring.

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You might as well set it as the protagonist and travel through a week or a month. Otherwise, you, a college student, travel through a parallel world and grow up from a young age. So if the protagonist still looks like an ordinary person, then this is definitely a poisonous point. I don't expect you to live like a big boss like Jack Ma. It's easy to have a net worth of tens of millions or hundreds of millions.

The writing is too scattered, a little here and a little there. It looks a bit messy

I guess the author is also a salty fish

Do it faster, do it faster

This is the first time I've seen a cut-out book with poison on it. Do you really want to force it on?

This is really an environment description even if you enter the dungeon.

Weird style, slow tempo.

Dear readers, please read the new book within 24 hours! Because it is very important for new books to be read. Whether they can be recommended depends on effective reading within 24 hours. For new books, the recommendation position is a key factor in how far they can go. Even if you want to keep reading, please turn from the latest chapter to the end and pause for a while. Thank you all very much! Finally, I will perform a talent here for you, the dragon roars ヾ(≧O≦)Wow~. The end, thank you all again!

There is something wrong with this official!

The author should sort out the outline, otherwise he will start a new book.

This skill is all active, and the cooldown still takes so long, bad review!

... There is a slightly unreasonable point. The spiritual energy has just been revived. Why do you first find a group of high school students to train, and then fight with ferocious beasts... Such dangerous things are done by just adults? ? ? I think this plot needs to be dealt with carefully... Think about it, at least I can think about it in the next book

There has been no update for six days. Is it a eunuch?

Entering the palace~~Congratulations to the author for taking over Dongchang~

Let's just ask, are you going to open a new book?

The description is well written, okay. Why don't you write again?