People Are in the Heavens, Enjoying Themselves in Time

You must be convinced by the intricate coincidences; it also truly demonstrates the wanton behavior of a man who knows the plot well and has the ability to travel through time.

This style~are you really not a scholar? I'm chasing you, don't be like a scholar and go out to collect folk songs for ten and a half months and squat in there.

There are too many characters, and there are so many coincidences that it almost forms a logic circle. How come there are so many coincidences, and yet everyone is so confused that they don't even know how to think about the situation? Also, those two thieves were so awesome. They stole things from people who were dying, and they didn't have any eyesight. How could they have so much bad luck? You can stop being so confusing. You can end one world and change it again!

It's well written but too messy and annoying to read.

Just one thing, I knew from the beginning that it was okay to be an undercover agent. How did Fu Guosheng know that? What I'm talking about is how you know Yu'er's identity reasonably.

It's a bit like Ning Hao's crazy racing and crazy stones. But the fragmented plot is a test of control. If it's well written, it's a masterpiece; if it's not well written, it's a piece of cake. The plot feels a bit fragmented at the moment

You are writing a novel, not a script. There are so many lines running at the same time, and there are many supporting characters. Each supporting character has the same narrative line as the protagonist. How can readers remember it?

I recognized it. It's the scholar secretly opening a new book.

Suddenly someone wrote about Yu Zui at Qidian. Com