
Online: Necromancer? I’m an Official Officer of the Underworld!
综网:亡灵法师?我地府正规军!
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- Completed
- Length
- 473k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 9mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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So far, the book is generally okay, but there are two bad points that make it uncomfortable to read.
❶Obstacle-Breaking Pill: Which monk has to take medicine to break through even a small level of Qi training? Others on the comprehensive network upgrade directly, and the card level is also for high profits. Only legends need to plan when they need to do big things. It's a good thing that you didn't even go out to practice your Qi and get the Barrier-Breaking Pill! Barrier breaking pill! Barrier breaking pill! ! ! ❷Nuo boy: The blessing range is only 10 meters! The range stacks up to 15% and can only be stacked once! The cavalry will pass away in a gust of wind and it will be useless. With the sword and shield soldiers, you still have to follow them to the front line. If you fight hard on the front line, will you be hacked to death by the enemy's sword with your backhand? They say that if you march with drums and march with drums, you must have a range of several hundred meters.
Good guy, the early and late stages of Qi training have come out.
The author creates a new genre
This is the third comprehensive book I have read that has a multi-person world. One is not on a planet at least, but is based on a cosmic view. The other is a protagonist who is already a boss, and then opens permissions for his plane. The author's book is no different from an ordinary game book. Unless the author transfers the world view of this book to another and clearly indicates that there is a big boss in the background, otherwise it will be difficult for you to stand out.
It seems that this book was successfully sacrificed by the bald man.
Level correspondence
The main character is divided into qi cultivating novels (currently it is not sure whether it is a mortal stream such as qi-building foundation elixir Yuanying, or a more classical stream such as golden elixir Yin Shen Yuanshen), rather than the traditional numerical level, which must be matched well. Moreover, Zongwang 11 and 21 are both big leaps, but the novel about cultivating immortals is not. All these need to be handled by the author.
The more I write in the future, the more Western fantasy it becomes, and the protagonist has begun to turn into a big lizard. He doesn't have any magical powers from the East, and now he only knows the traditional skills of the big lizard. Breathing fire from the mouth 🔥, The most speechless thing is that such a comprehensive network platform at the level of the multiverse does not sell even a single magic power. The author also wrote that the protagonist does not need to practice fighting skills and can always hide among the Yin soldiers. As long as he hides well, others will not be able to find the protagonist. This is mainly because the author has this idea.
Don't the author think there is a big poisonous point? There is no magical power for such an awesome comprehensive website, and the protagonist has always looked like a weak chicken, with very few fighting skills, and some are even castrated versions. If someone from the space system comes over to assassinate, killing the protagonist is just a matter of one blow. I always write the main character as a weakling, which makes me want to give up the book.
According to what the author writes now, the protagonist may not necessarily master 100,000 Dao soldiers in the Golden Core stage. There should be no problem in mastering 100,000 Dao soldiers in the Golden Core stage. And the protagonist's army is the Yin soldiers of the underworld. He only needs to kill creatures to absorb the yang energy of creatures. In other words, the vitality and soul of living creatures should be able to grow on their own, right? The author arranged for the protagonist to take the path of the Yin Soldiers, but he shouldn't have written the protagonist as being too kind and emotional. The growth of the Yin Soldiers should be about killing creatures and growing up, rather than requiring the protagonist to spend resources to help them grow. Without spending resources, the soldiers will not grow. Also, it is impossible for the army behind to fly. The most important thing is that the Taoist soldiers can form formations, that is, formations, instead of the army running over to hedge against others and then duel with others.
Seeing this name reminds me of the one I wrote on the street, Dao Bing, etc. It turned out to be hundreds of thousands of words long and I was still tossing my own one-third of an acre to put it on the shelves, and there was no trace of Dao Bing. Where do you sell dog meat on a sheep's head and then others say you are still dissatisfied?
The shell of Western fantasy
Looking at the overall picture, although I only looked at the first part, the biggest problem is that there are big problems with its stitching. One is whether it is a traditional Yin soldier secondment plan. It is more like taking the set of the Necromancer, and then practicing Qi and other settings. It is not a classical cultivation setting. Normally, it requires orders and acceptance, but The protagonist directly creates an altar and trains soldiers directly in the altar. Rather than an altar, it is more like the Banner of Ten Thousand Souls. Rather than being like a soldier master, it is more like a demonic way. For example, the method of snatching away all things to make elixirs with one hand, and the method of training ghosts as soldiers. Compared with the underworld system, it is more like a mortal cultivating the demonic way system.