Dimensional: Signing In for the Core of Thunder Law from the Start

It would be great if the plot at the beginning was like this.

It's a bit unpleasant to change the soup without changing the medicine. This should be called a precise attack on designated users. There will not be people who will always like Zuoyuan, but there will always be people who like Zuoyuan. How great is this fixed group and stable income. But if the author wants to change it, I suggest that there be fewer elements first. The previous book on a super-dimensional shop had spiritual energy recovery, shop, chat group, time traveler, harem, system and other elements. It was too many and too complicated. At least I only read the book when I saw the shop. The more you go to the back, the more confusing it becomes.

Chip Yuan, please accept my blessing

Why do I feel that the four novels written by you, the author, just change the soup without changing the medicine? It's just a matter of time before it collapses.

If you don't like the female characters, just write some random fragments. Don't write any emotional scenes. If you write emotional scenes, you won't accept them. Emotions can be accumulated slowly, but now that everything is clear, writing many chapters of emotional scenes and not watching them is really disgusting to the readers' senses! The same is true for my classmates from the previous 40 chapters! It was really uncomfortable to watch, it made me feel like a scumbag

Dear family members, Benyuan is back again🎶

I feel like Han Cheng is a bit redundant. If you want to have a supporting actor, you have to be helpful to the protagonist or have a life-long friendship. Han Cheng always feels like he is either feeling depressed or on the road to feeling depressed. It is not right to say that he is just a passerby. It does nothing to help the protagonist. On the contrary, the protagonist has been helping him. I can't understand the character development, and I didn't find out what he was pursuing. Her only personality trait is her lustful oral pleasure, which always feels weird. I wonder what the author wanted to do by creating such a supporting character? But if there are any foreshadowings or big events later, just pretend I didn't say anything.

I recently found a high-quality article on Ai Li's illness, which I reprint here for everyone... "Where is Ai Li?" "Where is it? The fire-chasing moth?" A classmate guessed. "The past is a happy land!" My friend disdained. "Isn't it on your bed?" The roommate joked. I ignored them and walked outside. "Where is Ellie?" I asked a robin. "Ellie? I saw her under a palm tree in California. At dusk, the setting sun spread across the skyline and fell on her skirt. Her whole body was dyed a romantic golden color. She was more moving than the wheat during the harvest and more beautiful than the narcissus blooming on the grass. Go find her there!" "Where is Ellie?" I asked a piece of white snow. "Ellie? I saw her among the aurora in Sweden. The aurora that night only favored her, and the snowflakes that night fell only for her. The colorful light cannot match her elegant eyes, and the flawless white ice and snow cannot get wet on her skin that can be broken by blows. Go there to find her!" "Where is Ellie?" I asked a wave. "Ai Li? I saw her on the beach in the Maldives. She walked slowly along the coastline, stepping on the soft sand with her bare feet. The cold water washed her petite and cute feet, and the sea breeze picked up her floral dress gently. Go there to find her!" "Where is Ai Li?" I asked a drop of rainwater. Ellie? I met her in an alley in Jiangnan. It was drizzling slightly and the air was thick. She stood at the entrance of the alley holding an oil-paper umbrella, quietly listening to the sound of raindrops falling on the bluestone slab. She seems to be waiting for someone, and she seems to be just enjoying the rain. Go find her there! " But I am just me, and I can no longer be ordinary. How can I find her? Maybe I can pick a bouquet of sunset in the backyard, hold it warmly in my hands, and say: "Hi, Ellie. " Maybe I can put a dab of white frost in the refrigerator, rub it carefully until it melts, and say: "Hi, Ellie. " Maybe I can pick up a round pebble in the pond, which still has the temperature of the seabed where it once slept. Maybe I can close my umbrella in the rainy season, let the almond blossom-like raindrops fall on my face, and feel the softness of the wind that is not cold. Original Come here! It suddenly dawned on me that Ellie was never anywhere else, and she had always lived in my heart! Hey, Ellie, look! Everywhere I look is filled with love. ​ Reprinted from Station B.

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Chip Yuan is really short-lived, I wish you a complete guarantee of Honkai Impact, and Genshin Impact can only be a weapons master.