Infinite Technology

I thought it was a science and technology article, and when I looked at the introduction, I saw that it was both conspiracy and pursuit, living in the shadow of death all the time. Technology is useless, but it can create things, and it is ingenious. If you are not a genius, you will rush into the street. If you can be on the list, you will fall into the trap. I will not try drugs. I hope to see you again.

15 Paying users have written more than 500,000 words 🐂🍺

I saw it when I was scanning the list. Let me give you a few suggestions: 1. The pace is too slow. It is best to clearly introduce the general functions of the system or cheat in the first chapter, and highlight the selling points in your introduction. 2. Some dialogues that are unnecessary or do not advance the plot can be omitted. 3. Being chased at the beginning is a classic beginning of a web article. It's not impossible to write, but you fail to create a tense atmosphere through the rendering of the environment and the psychological description of the characters... This makes it difficult for people to have immersive emotions...

Unknowingly, the finale is here, spreading flowers o(^▽^)o

After reading two chapters, the protagonist gets a technological artifact, which can analyze technology and is equivalent to a creator. It can control the nerves and the entire body, and can simulate virtual worlds in the brain. It has an intermediate artificial intelligence system, but it has to regard the protagonist as the master. It can control the protagonist's body, but the master The character acts on his own, and has never wanted to be like Skynet or Ultron. For people like me who are more rational and like true science fiction, it is simply poison. Of course, those who like mythology, fantasy and martial arts can read it. His science fiction novels are written like fantasy martial arts.

I'm tired from work recently. Here to cheer you up.

Ahem, cough, cough, continue to watch you write a book.

Directly as an agent? Too far-fetched

Congratulations on the launch, keep it up~ I wish everyone a Happy New Year in advance

Why are so many people paying attention to your book with only 190,000 words? My novel is like a one-man show.