This Game Is Unscientific

The creativity is great. The theme is that the male protagonist plays games, obtains high technology, drives the development of the world, and cooperates with the army. There are other entrepreneurial novels in which the male protagonist gets something powerful—finds someone to partner with—interspersed with pretending to be slapped in the face—gets appreciation—gets trouble—the male protagonist thinks about it—and continues to be slapped in the face. This is a regular entrepreneurial writing routine. But as the author, this is the theme of world development driven by science and technology. You focus on all kinds of troubles. This perspective does not match the theme of your book. Your perspective should be wider. I think it will be more popular if we focus on specific technologies and what developments they have driven. This is a book about technology. Therefore, you can look up some information and related technologies in this section to make it fuller. This kind of science and technology book is a big topic and cannot be sustained by filling it with things that happened in an office or several schools. Other parts are good. I have some immature suggestions and will be deleted if there is any controversy. I wish the author good success with this book.

The process is too fast, and the protagonist cannot control it. The novel is all over the place, and readers feel that this book is seriously missing a lot.

You can be creative, but you still can't let go of your mind. First, you have the courage to leave something for the country before you die. Why not cooperate with the country directly? If you know that the spaceship will appear in reality, you can directly notify people where to wait next time. Second, if the venture capital company comes to ask for trouble, why not ask the country to solve it? They also say that they attach great importance to it, but large and small law firms do not accept it. Is it too much? Moreover, the court stipulates that both parties must have lawyers. If you don't have one, they will be assigned to you. If you cooperate with the country, you can both save your life and promote technological development. What are you hesitating about?

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Come on! It's just not recommended that the game background be set in the real world, even across universes.

The creativity is quite good, but I think the main character's ideas and structure are a bit low-key. Does the AI ​​know what the representation is? It represents a lot of benefits, and you can make a fortune even without so much trouble.

The subject matter is good, but I found a characteristic: most of the protagonists like to recruit immature women as their first employees.

The subject matter and writing style are both good. I hope the author will keep it up. The characterization is a bit lacking. If he keeps it up, it will be amazing.