Travelers in the World of Pirates

The writing style is very good, there are no ups and downs, and there is no pretense and slap in the face like Xiaobai's novel. The turning point foreshadowed in the early stage feels like a magnificent epic. It is narrated in a eloquent way, which makes me feel amazing. As long as I keep updating, I will accompany you until the end. Come on 🌹

Copying and fusion is a failure. The pig's foot has the ability of the phantom beast fruit without any side effects. She is also Garp's granddaughter. This is enough.

After reading Chapter 16, the author's writing is absolutely fine, but I feel like I can't write anything of my own. I keep wandering around the Windmill Village and I don't know what the pig's feet are going to do? Wait until adulthood? Even though they are invincible, they are still messing with the East China Sea plot, which is the weakest part of the original. It feels like I am working as a nanny for the three Luffy brothers. I keep messing with the plot, and the more I watch, the less interesting it becomes.

Female? Did you post it on a male channel? Or male to female?

Personally, I feel that the writing is good, the writing style is natural and the writing is smooth. The protagonist's life is leisurely and ordinary, but it is elegant and interesting, making readers want to read on. It can be seen from the navy's conversation that the author seems to be preparing for a big climax, making people full of expectations for the next story. Finally, hey, the author will add a highlight post! 🤓

I feel that if you write about this kind of travel world, the key is not to change the world, but to give them the seeds to change the world, so that people in this world can change, instead of you intervening. All you have to do is give them a thought, and let the people in this world improve and explore the rest.

I can understand giving away things, but the main reason is that the main character is a little girl whose character I can't stand. You are invincible. You are much better than a green chicken. When I see the frozen sea, I don't laugh out loud because I feel pretentious, but like a little girl hiding in the corner with a blushing face... She has a lot of character, I can't stand it.

Sooner or later, this book will hit the streets because of the main character's female protagonist posting male videos.

The writing is really good, but there are too many secondary settings, and the original characters are too dense. To be honest, what you read when watching fan fiction is to interact with plot characters or participate in events, make up for regrets, or seek revenge. In short, what you read when reading fan fiction is an extension of the original work. There are so many secondary settings and major changes that there is no need to read fan fiction, so it is not a fan novel. It can only be said to be a brand new story based on the setting background of some big IPs.

Who is this omniscient being? Forcibly added a person or organization? It was good to watch earlier, but just because of this I didn't want to watch it, so I quit.

This update speed is disappointing, always at the pace of a eunuch. Even if I finish writing, I don't know when it will be finished.

I've read a lot of fanfics about pirates, and this one is already excellent. Good luck to the author.

This update is perfect, update by chance

This book is quite interesting, please vote for it. Otherwise, I feel like the author will cut it.

The writing is very good, I will continue to follow it Come on, author! ٩(˃̶͈̀௰˂̶͈́)و

The author's writing is good. It's very comfortable to look at from the front. However, there were many people who were not from this world who appeared later, which made people feel very abrupt and difficult to understand, which made me feel very disconnected. Also, I really disagree with your update speed!

I can't complain about this update anymore, I'll keep it on my bookshelf for a year and take a look

Mom, is the author a boy or a girl? It's really hard to tell that this protagonist is someone who has lived through two lives. There is absolutely no trace of the male personality left in his previous life.

Speechless... Author, why did you write the protagonist as a boy who gives away treasures? Is he invincible by giving away plug-ins? Can people who are close to him understand if he gives it to people he has just met? Will he die if he doesn't give it to someone he has just met? Giving too many gifts is really discouraging. If you don't write a fight, you can just write a plain one. If you just give away cheats, will you form a group to fight monsters in the future...