Douluo: Shadow Demon Scythe, Angrily Attacks Yu Xiaogang at the Beginning

Overall, it's okay. The main character's slap in the face is okay, but there are a lot of typos and it doesn't read smoothly. Also, I think the sausage seller can give a good ending. After all, it's not like other bts.

It's good to cheat, but you have to be forced into a desperate situation by Tang San to cheat? Do Douluo Qianyu, Xiaogang and Tang San need a reason? Unnecessary. This kind of revenge flow is really unnecessary. . . Forcibly creating a conflict with Tang Sanyu and Xiaogang, and insisting on taking the revenge path. Then you can activate the death when you are about to die, and then you are lucky enough to meet a noble person to help you, and then go to the Wuhun Palace training camp, and then train and get to know the golden generation. . . . I know what I'm going to write without having to read the rest of it. I break out of the training camp, fall in love with Hu Liena, and then get the appreciation of Wuhun Palace. Bibi Dong accepts a disciple. Later I intercept Hu Tangsan's Immortal Grass opportunity and possibly snatch Zhu Zhuqing. Then I fight Tang San in the soul master competition and find out that Qian Renxue is the one who once saved He then helped Qian Renxue plot to seize the Heavenly Dou Empire, and then fell in love with Qian Renxue. The rest was basically the same routine, helping Wuhundian to kill Tang San, killing Tang Hao, seizing the soul bone to seize the Blue Silver Emperor, snatching Xiao Wu back, and helping Bibi Dong untie her heart knot, etc. . . This way of writing is so bad. . . .

I think this book can be basically discarded since entering the training camp. You said that it doesn't matter if you meet the golden generation, but you said that it is outrageous to only have one left after all of them die. It is even more outrageous to say that they all have innate soul powers of level 8 to 9. Is this how talents are cultivated? Those born between 8 and 9 can basically reach Contra, but now there are only a few Douluo!

After reading the introduction, I have no idea what I want to read. To be honest, if you can cultivate with half-level soul power, you won't need Yu Xiaogang. If you can't cultivate, it will be useless to ask Yu Xiaogang.

The only people with full soul power in Dou Yi are Feng Xiaotian, Oscar, Tang San, Xiao Wu, and Bibi Dong. And then your whole so-called elite training and actual breeding cup to kill a bunch of geniuses is really 6. No matter how good it is in the front, it will be so stinky in the back. Those who come to the Wuhun Palace don't even know what they are writing.

It's so poisonous that a one-ring soul master fights an eight-ring soul Douluo, and that soul Douluo is also an evil soul master. Even the evil soul masters of Contra can fight against ordinary titled Douluo.

Looking at the introduction, this is someone who rushes to slap his face, some kind of dog-licking behavior, and then turns black and takes crazy revenge? ? ?

Protagonist: My face is here for you to hit. Tang Sanyu Xiaogang: Bang bang. Protagonist: Thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi, don't bully young people into poverty . In a word, the protagonist has no brains and is looking for a fight on his own. If Yu Xiaogang can't solve it with half his soul power, can he solve your problem? Are you still going to become a disciple? As a reader, I want to give this pig a slap in the face.

Anyone who reads the introduction will be very addicted, and they can still click in. I really admire those who click in to see

There are very few people who can write an introduction that makes me not want to read it, and you are among the best.

This introduction highlights the IQ of the male protagonist. Anyone who has watched Douluo knows that it is the most stupid thing to become a disciple of Yu Xiaogang when his talent is not good enough. He can't even break through, so he wants to be his disciple? This kind of operation makes me feel that the male protagonist is a bit mean, always trying to find a way to be ridiculed, and has a masochistic tendency, which makes people have no idea of ​​​​continuing to watch.

This protagonist is so rubbish. . . More indigenous than indigenous

Does the author know that every time I see this kind of book that has no brains or writing skills and maliciously mocks the original God King, I feel that the original work is awesome? If you want to complain, just do it seriously. Why write these disgusting things? Will anyone read it?

About the fact that every protagonist who awakens a useless martial spirit goes to humiliate himself

I read the introduction, and it's amazing. You obviously have no soul power and are a useless soul, but you treat yourself as the protagonist. Why should others treat you well? If you want to become a disciple of others, do you have to agree? Xiao Wu and Tang San were flirting with each other, it was because he was excellent, and everyone wanted to be friends with excellent people.

In order to write about the conflict between the protagonist and Yu Xiaogang's master and apprentice, the author forced this "Thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi, don't bully young people into poverty", which is really disgusting. Knowing who he was with level one innate soul power and the original Yu Xiaogang, and why he went to become a disciple with shameless face and was humiliated for the sake of the pawn group.

The part about worshiping Yu Xiaogang was so disgusting. You can't do it hard to get a good impression.

The protagonist's outlook on life is similar to that of Tang San and others. Isn't it stupid that you, a person with extremely low qualifications, want to become a disciple of Yu Xiaogang? In the original drama, Yu Xiaogang always looks down on and dismisses students who are not gifted with full soul power. The normal development of a genius with innate soul power is at least from a Contra to a Titled Douluo. At most, Yu Xiaogang has weak points in combat. It's an understatement to say that Xiaogang's level misleads his disciples. Tang San would have been useless if he didn't cheat and let plants add animal soul rings. Hasn't anyone in Douluo Continent tried it? Why don't they use disciples as guinea pigs? Isn't it normal for the protagonist to fail to become a disciple? Hatred of the other party would seem like buying and selling by force. If you don't have the strength to pick up rabbits, you're looking for death.

One more thing, the protagonist is on the side of Wuhun Palace, so it is not appropriate to use the method of raising Gu to explain Wuhun Palace's idea of ​​cultivating talents. After all, the three views of modern people are

It was pretty good up front, but it's boring when the Dark One comes out.

Let's just say, is it necessary to go to that junior college? Is there some fate-changing opportunity waiting for you? Why, if you don't go to the college, you won't be able to meditate, and your soul power won't increase. You clearly know that others look down on you, but you still lick your face to beg others. If you don't have money, you still have to work hard to find money. Isn't it just to highlight the protagonist's character and perseverance? He didn't do enough in his previous life, and he still has to continue to be one after reincarnation? After arriving at the academy, I don't know what I learned in the academy where I was dying. Anyway, I only saw people who were either being beaten or working part-time, and it was even more funny in the middle. When facing Xiao Wu, I was afraid that the relationship would get closer and annoy Tang San. They were a group of cowards. When I comforted myself that the protagonist didn't have the strength to be normal now, I turned around and scolded Jade Little Anus in front of Tang San, which made me dumbfounded. I had agreed to give up first, but what the hell, Schrödinger is a coward, right As expected, he was chased and beaten by Tang San and Dashu later, which made me laugh. He even said that he was afraid of Tang Hao. Please, Tang San's life was not in danger in the early stage. Tang Hao was full and had trouble with you, a 6-year-old first-level child. Without looking at the front, I thought you were chasing Tang San. He was chased away like a dog after not staying in the academy for long. His behavior in the past was like a clown working to earn money to enter the academy. The following is even more outrageous. A genius with an innate level of 8.9 Is just raising Gu. You are just like a cabbage. Others raise Gu without knowing their potential. They use this method to find the most talented people among a group of people. The most important thing is that there are many people and they are not afraid of consumption. Your Douluo Continent's innate soul power and martial soul have already told you that your talent is still raising Gu. I can't stand it at this point. Some warriors who have watched it will add more later.

Although they all hate Xiao Wu, I saw more than a hundred pictures and felt that Xiao Wu with a single heroine was much better than a harem. After all, I repeatedly emphasized that Tang San was a scumbag, but in the end he opened a harem, which was not as good as Tang San.

It's just a cool article that's not cool enough. Most of the writing was done without thinking. Some people rated it 1 out of 5 stars. It's really not good.

I have written more than 50 pictures about junior college, so I won't skip it quickly. It's all about children playing around, so I hate watching Douluo the most.

It's so rubbish, what kind of time traveler rubbish

What's going on with the author? Update so slowly

There are too many poisonous points. I can only express my feelings after watching him. The original work is still good-looking. At least the main character in the original work is not as disgusting as him. He is both realistic and realistic.

It's rare among fans to have such writing skills! Not happy!

I don't see anyone writing about fandom looking for abuse. It made me laugh to death.